for Frozen Heart8/27/2020 c20 
7Naraku's Phoenix
GIRL, SAME! I'm going through this exact type of situation with my own story, and I'm working on chapter rewrites, as well. In all honesty it's been rough but rewarding. I thought it would be easier, but I'm finding out that I'm changing quite a lot about my characters and developing better world building. All for the best, though; as time goes on our writing changes. I cannot deny that there was a certain charm in your earlier chapters that made me feel nostalgic for the of the early 2000s. Still, I applaud you for wanting to re-approach your story. Personally, I would be so down for an edgier Hikaru that's mad at the world, hardened by his time in lock down. He'd be a magnet for the cursed twin's soul, for sure! It would also take longer for Haruhi to soften him up - so much potential character development to explore!
I added this story to my Follow Alerts so I can stay in the loop with your rewrite. Nothing irks me more than readers assuming you've abandoned ship and that you don't care about your story. I can already tell you're going to transform your current story into something even more special. Good luck, and happy writing!
7Naraku's PhoenixGIRL, SAME! I'm going through this exact type of situation with my own story, and I'm working on chapter rewrites, as well. In all honesty it's been rough but rewarding. I thought it would be easier, but I'm finding out that I'm changing quite a lot about my characters and developing better world building. All for the best, though; as time goes on our writing changes. I cannot deny that there was a certain charm in your earlier chapters that made me feel nostalgic for the of the early 2000s. Still, I applaud you for wanting to re-approach your story. Personally, I would be so down for an edgier Hikaru that's mad at the world, hardened by his time in lock down. He'd be a magnet for the cursed twin's soul, for sure! It would also take longer for Haruhi to soften him up - so much potential character development to explore!
I added this story to my Follow Alerts so I can stay in the loop with your rewrite. Nothing irks me more than readers assuming you've abandoned ship and that you don't care about your story. I can already tell you're going to transform your current story into something even more special. Good luck, and happy writing!
3/17/2019 c19 EmilyNicole865
Thank you so much for the update! It made my week after having the stress of 2 final exams and having a new class start tomorrow.
Thank you so much for the update! It made my week after having the stress of 2 final exams and having a new class start tomorrow.
12/17/2018 c18 EmilyNicole865
This story is awesome. I really enjoy it and cannot wait to read what happens next!
This story is awesome. I really enjoy it and cannot wait to read what happens next!
11/30/2018 c17 Guest
are you going to make more? I really love this.
are you going to make more? I really love this.
11/29/2018 c17 4TomParisLvr
I really like this story. I like all your stories! I look forward to updates.
4TomParisLvrI really like this story. I like all your stories! I look forward to updates.
9/30/2018 c15 7BubbleBerry8
Yes! Finally some serious conflict! I wonder where it will go from here.
I'm glad Nekozawa turned out to be an ally (for the most part) instead of an enemy. I also think it's interesting that he has powers that work against Hikaru's. I like that Haruhi's making up for not being very conscious in the last couple of chapters by supporting Hikaru. I also noticed that Kuro and Hikaru are nearly antonyms (Kuroblack, Hikarulight), so it will be interesting to see how different their personalities may be. It was funny because I was struggling with Kaoru on finding an excuse for Hikaru's absence even though I knew nothing was going to work. I hope Haruhi doesn't get in trouble!
Please update soon!
7BubbleBerry8Yes! Finally some serious conflict! I wonder where it will go from here.
I'm glad Nekozawa turned out to be an ally (for the most part) instead of an enemy. I also think it's interesting that he has powers that work against Hikaru's. I like that Haruhi's making up for not being very conscious in the last couple of chapters by supporting Hikaru. I also noticed that Kuro and Hikaru are nearly antonyms (Kuroblack, Hikarulight), so it will be interesting to see how different their personalities may be. It was funny because I was struggling with Kaoru on finding an excuse for Hikaru's absence even though I knew nothing was going to work. I hope Haruhi doesn't get in trouble!
Please update soon!
9/15/2018 c14 BubbleBerry8
I'm glad Haruhi's awake, finally! This is a nice chapter, though because you mentioned that Kaoru not coming along this time was a bad thing, I would expect the reason for it to be explained in this chapter. Nonetheless, it was an interesting way to end the chapter, and the suspense is killing me! I want to know how Nekozawa knows of Hikaru's existence, and how Tamaki knows him!
Anyway, I can't wait 'til the next chapter! Please update soon!
I'm glad Haruhi's awake, finally! This is a nice chapter, though because you mentioned that Kaoru not coming along this time was a bad thing, I would expect the reason for it to be explained in this chapter. Nonetheless, it was an interesting way to end the chapter, and the suspense is killing me! I want to know how Nekozawa knows of Hikaru's existence, and how Tamaki knows him!
Anyway, I can't wait 'til the next chapter! Please update soon!
3/30/2018 c12 BubbleBerry8
No need to apologize for the long wait. I am also very busy, and haven't written anything since summer. Though, that may be because I've been beta reading for somebody.
I'm sorry to hear about your "former" friends. I used to switch between best friends who broke up, and usually chose the one who had less support.
I like how you changed from first person to third person with scenes where Hikaru wasn't there to experience. It makes more sense than what you were doing in the past. Keep up the good work!
I was curious about how Hikaru (and Kaoru) were going to save Haruhi. I imagined Hikaru using his powers to heat up the lake water, but the way you wrote it makes it sound more like he didn't need to rely on them as much. This makes me wonder what the limits to his powers are, if they exist.
Anyway, I hope Tamaki doesn't get too angry about Hikaru saving Haruhi's life again. In my opinion, he should be grateful, and maybe even a bit jealous that he wasn't there to help. Can't wait for your next update!
No need to apologize for the long wait. I am also very busy, and haven't written anything since summer. Though, that may be because I've been beta reading for somebody.
I'm sorry to hear about your "former" friends. I used to switch between best friends who broke up, and usually chose the one who had less support.
I like how you changed from first person to third person with scenes where Hikaru wasn't there to experience. It makes more sense than what you were doing in the past. Keep up the good work!
I was curious about how Hikaru (and Kaoru) were going to save Haruhi. I imagined Hikaru using his powers to heat up the lake water, but the way you wrote it makes it sound more like he didn't need to rely on them as much. This makes me wonder what the limits to his powers are, if they exist.
Anyway, I hope Tamaki doesn't get too angry about Hikaru saving Haruhi's life again. In my opinion, he should be grateful, and maybe even a bit jealous that he wasn't there to help. Can't wait for your next update!
3/13/2018 c11 Jessica
I need a new chapter! Please!
I need a new chapter! Please!
2/4/2018 c11 Alexis
Hikaru to save the day!
Hikaru to save the day!
12/27/2017 c10 Guest
I really liked this chapter
I really liked this chapter
11/26/2017 c9 Guest
Ugh I’m in love with this story
Ugh I’m in love with this story
11/25/2017 c9 BubbleBerry8
Hello again!
I'm glad you included more about Tamaki and Haruhi's relationship, as well as progress on Hikaru and Haruhi's. I think it's interesting that you chose a red sapphire instead of a ruby(more common for it's red color, which suits Haruhi's rose color) or amethyst(February birthstone). Speaking of birthdays, Kyoya's was on the 22nd. I feel like he could use some more appreciation.
I do have to wonder why they were fine with jumping into a pool in the beginning of February. It seems like it would be too cold at this time of year to swim in, especially since Haruhi was cold when they entered.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed your play! It's funny because I happen to be reading Hamlet now (I just finished Act 2), though for a completely different reason. Can't wait for your next update!
Hello again!
I'm glad you included more about Tamaki and Haruhi's relationship, as well as progress on Hikaru and Haruhi's. I think it's interesting that you chose a red sapphire instead of a ruby(more common for it's red color, which suits Haruhi's rose color) or amethyst(February birthstone). Speaking of birthdays, Kyoya's was on the 22nd. I feel like he could use some more appreciation.
I do have to wonder why they were fine with jumping into a pool in the beginning of February. It seems like it would be too cold at this time of year to swim in, especially since Haruhi was cold when they entered.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed your play! It's funny because I happen to be reading Hamlet now (I just finished Act 2), though for a completely different reason. Can't wait for your next update!