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12/14/2020 c5 Waiting
Hello please update. Cinderella monotogari fics are already rare as it is!
2/6/2017 c5 Guest
chapter 5

Good chapter and Zarrel official introduction was chilling.
I have couple new ideas to you if you want use them.
Kit having deal with potential bride canditates ( in the movie had almost
ended up with foreign princess. in the show we had flashbacks Cinderella's
mother with Kit's mother or Kit visiting her grave and reminiscing her.
Possible female childhood friend to who works Amor for Kit and Cinderella.
1/16/2017 c4 Guest
chapter 4

Good chapter and i liked Cinderellas and Kits meeting in the forest. And her
Stepmother was really awful to her it was sad. You have
also foreshadowed really well Zarrel's character now i really want see his first
appearance as soon as possible.

I have some new ideas to if you want use them.
Cinderella singing her mothers lullaby. Cinderella and Kit dancing together at
woods. Cinderella and Kit solving their problems using old advices that they got
their parents. Zore being related to Cinderella throug her mother's family
( possibly granduncle or something ? ) Also more scenes in court.
1/16/2017 c4 Guest
I love that too when they meet in forest. I love your story so far, and i also like your other Cinderella story: Fights, Fancy. You know what story i mean.
1/10/2017 c3 Guest
Please continue! This is awesome!
1/6/2017 c3 Guest
chapter 3

Good chapter and i liked it. It was nice see more Kit. Also it was better
that you kept Alistair in the story because he had more personality than Alex original
in original series.
1/2/2017 c2 Guest
chapter 2

Hey i have some new ideas to you if you want use them. Cinderella finding out that Anastasia or Drizella has unsual interest subject and she tries to support them following
their dreams. Anastasia and Drizella spending night attic with Cinderella because
they are afraid of thunder.

Lady Tremaine has to travel to somewhere leaving Cinderella, Anastasia, Drizzella alone.
Cinderella sprains her ankle and is unable to walk without braces, and must teach
her stepsisters how to cook and clean and do other housework.
12/28/2016 c1 Guest
chapter 1

Hey i have you two backstory ideas for Zarrel and Cinderella's stepfamily
if you want use them. Zarrel was part royal family and line in throne until
he met travelling actress and married her. Because of this he was disowned
and banished in the court. After his wife died Kit's father let him back court, but Zarrel
never forgived him or anyone else his family, and wants revenge the way he was
treated.

As for Anastasia and Drizzella their father was irresponsible gambler who left
his family almost completely bankrupt. An he never spend much time with his
daughters. And after his death their mother was forced to raise her
daughters very poor conditions, and that's way Lady Tremaine is so desparate
her daughters getting married with Prince.
12/27/2016 c2 Guest
chapter 2

I'm watched tv series and it was great. And it's good to see fanfiction
about it. If you any ideas i have few. Zarral having other younger daughter
named Bettina who comes friends with Cinderella after she saves her from drowning. Cinderella and her stepsister having bondig moments.

my favorite episodes were 7, 10, 11, 13, 16, 18, and 21.

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