8/10/2019 c3 Wika0304
please update, it's brilliant

3/16/2019 c3 15TheDevilsMusic
hey pal keep up the good work on this and we writers know that feeling all too well, so don't rush to make things as it can take time and I like this story and would like to say your doing a great job.

12/27/2017 c3 85KristinalUzumakiPrime23
i wanna see more chapters PLEASE.
"prime?- Prime"
special agent fowler to what do we owe-?
"what else con's I chased them off with some heavy ordinance but not before they blew me out of the sky"
again?
"they tried a smash and grab for the dingus"
the whatsit?
"dynamic nuclear generation system aka the D.N.G.S its a prototype energy source that I'm porting to the west coast"
why would cyclonus want such a crude source of power?
"my guess is to build a W.O.M.D if this thing were to blow it would irradiate this state and the four below and next store"
uh did agent fowler say which state he was in?
"I'm a sitting duck hear prime, think you can spin up a bridge to send it to it's destination?"
agent fowler I'm afraid that would be impossible if a accident were to occur the device would irradiate all fifty states and beyond.
"got any other ideas?"

2/15/2017 c3 Guest
Awwwww yeah. Love this story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

1/27/2017 c2 Dr. Sparkeater
*Claps* Yes! More!

12/20/2016 c1 RewindandDomey4ever
*claps loudly. Jaw dropped*. This. Is. Amazing! Omp you wrote this beautifully. I am Super excited to see where you take this.