for A Twisted Perspective9/25/2017 c5 
24C0ldSteel
Glad you were able to get something up, though it's a little rushed-feeling and a tad confusing. I am curious about what Jack will tell Pitch and how they will go forward from here.
24C0ldSteelGlad you were able to get something up, though it's a little rushed-feeling and a tad confusing. I am curious about what Jack will tell Pitch and how they will go forward from here.
3/4/2017 c3 QueenCandy
A non evil Pitch and a blackice friendship? I'm hooked and I can't wait for the next chapter.
A non evil Pitch and a blackice friendship? I'm hooked and I can't wait for the next chapter.
3/2/2017 c3 15Serami Nefera
Ah... Something tells me that Bunny is going to be ticked off that Jack was talking with Pitch in the next chapter. I wonder how he'll express it. Jack is pretty wild and intelligent, I don't think he'd handle being told who he can and can't befriend by Bunny. It'd probably lead to a fight... Unless Bunny frames Pitch of doing something or makes Pitch think Jack set him up for an attack by Bunny. I love how many ways you can make this story turn out. It's fun to find these rare stories in which the Guardians are "bad". I'd love to see an evil Bunny. ;)
15Serami NeferaAh... Something tells me that Bunny is going to be ticked off that Jack was talking with Pitch in the next chapter. I wonder how he'll express it. Jack is pretty wild and intelligent, I don't think he'd handle being told who he can and can't befriend by Bunny. It'd probably lead to a fight... Unless Bunny frames Pitch of doing something or makes Pitch think Jack set him up for an attack by Bunny. I love how many ways you can make this story turn out. It's fun to find these rare stories in which the Guardians are "bad". I'd love to see an evil Bunny. ;)
12/19/2016 c1 Serami Nefera
This is an intriguing start to your story. I look forward to seeing where you take this and whether you choose to mesh it in with canon or create an AU. Both would be equally fun to read. It's a great start.
This is an intriguing start to your story. I look forward to seeing where you take this and whether you choose to mesh it in with canon or create an AU. Both would be equally fun to read. It's a great start.