
9/2/2017 c7
14Diamond Shyn
Ohh we need to know what happens next! You can't leave us at a cliffhanger! Update please!

Ohh we need to know what happens next! You can't leave us at a cliffhanger! Update please!
7/23/2017 c7 udi
Continueeeeee! This is so good!
Continueeeeee! This is so good!
2/23/2017 c5
5illyrianbby
I love it I love it I love it! So sweet how he got James fired! Can't wait for more :)

I love it I love it I love it! So sweet how he got James fired! Can't wait for more :)
2/22/2017 c5 shikacloud
This story is not bad at all! I like your characterization of Harley and J. For the first one, you picture her not like an incapable doctor or a pathetic victim of J' s manipulation, but she can stand on her own. She is cool, oriented and has her own personality.
For the latter, I'm happy to see your Joker is realistic and believable. Quite too often other writers make him look like a schizophrenic idiot or a degeneted version of a sex god, coming out from one of the 50 shades serie... Just, hell, please, no.
You are good, you pay attention to his body language and his speaking habits, using all the right details without being repetitive.
I have great expectations for this. I'm simply gonna leave you an advice that I give to any writer I firmly believe in: take your time to develop the characters and the plot, do not rush anything. Go as deep as you can in order to make us readers see all the colorful aspects of your characters.
Thanks for your story!
Shikacloud
This story is not bad at all! I like your characterization of Harley and J. For the first one, you picture her not like an incapable doctor or a pathetic victim of J' s manipulation, but she can stand on her own. She is cool, oriented and has her own personality.
For the latter, I'm happy to see your Joker is realistic and believable. Quite too often other writers make him look like a schizophrenic idiot or a degeneted version of a sex god, coming out from one of the 50 shades serie... Just, hell, please, no.
You are good, you pay attention to his body language and his speaking habits, using all the right details without being repetitive.
I have great expectations for this. I'm simply gonna leave you an advice that I give to any writer I firmly believe in: take your time to develop the characters and the plot, do not rush anything. Go as deep as you can in order to make us readers see all the colorful aspects of your characters.
Thanks for your story!
Shikacloud
2/21/2017 c5
8LnknInsanity
Awesome. Harleen has an interesting way of going about their sessions. Can't wait to see more

Awesome. Harleen has an interesting way of going about their sessions. Can't wait to see more
12/25/2016 c3
1Sesshomaru4565
I'm just seriously loving this story so much, like I've already reread it three times, it's just captivating and it really plays on my imagination

I'm just seriously loving this story so much, like I've already reread it three times, it's just captivating and it really plays on my imagination
12/25/2016 c3
8LnknInsanity
Loving it so far :)
Will be cool to see their relationship progress with more of a backstory outside their normally forced circumstances. Good job

Loving it so far :)
Will be cool to see their relationship progress with more of a backstory outside their normally forced circumstances. Good job
12/23/2016 c2
1quitemagicalmags
Oh my gosh, this is too good! I love it Please update soon, this is already becoming one of the best fics I've read!

Oh my gosh, this is too good! I love it Please update soon, this is already becoming one of the best fics I've read!
12/21/2016 c2 perrine.p
I like it. I like the way how they met, another than movie. Many FF holds up the same way like in movie, it's ok, but I like to read something different
I like it. I like the way how they met, another than movie. Many FF holds up the same way like in movie, it's ok, but I like to read something different