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6Mary Barrett
Ulrike, I am so mad at you right now. You did not show what happened to Harry, what Severus did with his inheritance, or the results of Black's trial. And you did not yet bring Dumbledore to justice, as they merely threatened and he was not actually punished. I expect more from you, especially in a one-shot.
6Mary BarrettUlrike, I am so mad at you right now. You did not show what happened to Harry, what Severus did with his inheritance, or the results of Black's trial. And you did not yet bring Dumbledore to justice, as they merely threatened and he was not actually punished. I expect more from you, especially in a one-shot.