for Of Wolves and Wisdom4/28/2021 c2 Guest
I don’t mind when people use (I) for the main character (OC) but you’re using it with every character it’s confusing and making it really hard to read.
I don’t mind when people use (I) for the main character (OC) but you’re using it with every character it’s confusing and making it really hard to read.
3/9/2020 c8 ossifiedtotem
I really like the Casy/Paul parts of this. I really dislike some of the other parts- the Bella/Edward bits in particular. I don't like that pairing at all so it's pretty much just bloat that keeps me from being able to read the parts I actually care about.
I really like the Casy/Paul parts of this. I really dislike some of the other parts- the Bella/Edward bits in particular. I don't like that pairing at all so it's pretty much just bloat that keeps me from being able to read the parts I actually care about.
3/8/2020 c11 
9sonderful
guest, guess what! it's not cannon. cause it's fanfiction. and i can't ruin a story i made up. especially where its an important plot point for both story and character development. you can relax
9sonderfulguest, guess what! it's not cannon. cause it's fanfiction. and i can't ruin a story i made up. especially where its an important plot point for both story and character development. you can relax
3/8/2020 c11 Guest
You ruined this story by making Paul have sex with Mollie after he imprinted on Casy. Sorry, but this is completely stupid and not canon to the book rules.
You ruined this story by making Paul have sex with Mollie after he imprinted on Casy. Sorry, but this is completely stupid and not canon to the book rules.
3/8/2020 c1 Guest
Gross! Bullshit, if she was Paul's imprint he wouldn't of cheated on her.
Gross! Bullshit, if she was Paul's imprint he wouldn't of cheated on her.
3/20/2019 c8 6starlily16
I like what's going on for the most part, and I'm curious to see if Paul and Casy are in fact imprinted cuz a lot of established and acknowledged rules on imprinting are being broken here. But hey, it is fanfiction so as long as it follows your rules that you make clear its fine. Writing style wise, I was able to figure it out eventually but if you continue wanting to write every single POV in first person, I think it would be helpful to even just put first initial in the paragraph breaks to make it just a bit more clear. It shouldn't change the flow too much - it might even make it a bit easier to read overall. Keep up the good work!
6starlily16I like what's going on for the most part, and I'm curious to see if Paul and Casy are in fact imprinted cuz a lot of established and acknowledged rules on imprinting are being broken here. But hey, it is fanfiction so as long as it follows your rules that you make clear its fine. Writing style wise, I was able to figure it out eventually but if you continue wanting to write every single POV in first person, I think it would be helpful to even just put first initial in the paragraph breaks to make it just a bit more clear. It shouldn't change the flow too much - it might even make it a bit easier to read overall. Keep up the good work!
1/2/2019 c7 Guest
This is bullshit. If Paul had actually imprinted, he wouldn't be able to touch another female.
This is bullshit. If Paul had actually imprinted, he wouldn't be able to touch another female.
1/2/2019 c3 Guest
I'm disgusted that you made Paul have sex with Casy's friend. You completely ruined this story.
I'm disgusted that you made Paul have sex with Casy's friend. You completely ruined this story.
1/2/2019 c1 Guest
You kind of make her slutty in the first paragraph.
You kind of make her slutty in the first paragraph.