for The Loud House: Future Love Run Amok!11/23/2018 c25 SymphonicRequiem27
I'm going to take a wild guess and say that a certain someone's going to be confessing her feelings in the presence of Lincoln and Luna. It would almost be criminal not to.
I'm going to take a wild guess and say that a certain someone's going to be confessing her feelings in the presence of Lincoln and Luna. It would almost be criminal not to.
11/12/2018 c25 
3BegottenSpud
I’m a 20yo white male.
All I know is the mixture of hallucinagents, extreme lust, and desire for ass play on Luna and Lincoln’s part, things could get strange in his bedroom. Lynn going fucking insane and Luan passing out won’t help.
3BegottenSpudI’m a 20yo white male.
All I know is the mixture of hallucinagents, extreme lust, and desire for ass play on Luna and Lincoln’s part, things could get strange in his bedroom. Lynn going fucking insane and Luan passing out won’t help.
11/10/2018 c25 Guest
i nearly had an orgasm when i saw this was updated
i nearly had an orgasm when i saw this was updated
11/10/2018 c25 Jeff
Don't worry about how long it takes for a chapter to come out. It's better if you're at full health before going forward. This chapter was shorter than your usual work, but honestly it's probably for the best that you don't put out so much in a chapter. It's honestly a bit overwhelming to go through so much as is (not that it's a bad thing) and doing less in a chapter would likely be better for planning out future chapters.
The chapter itself was fantastic in its comedy surrounding those drugged brownies, but there'll be far reaching consequences for everyone, particularly Lincoln and Luna, when you take the LSD in those brownies into account. The plans they had for furthering their relationship will likely spike up in a way that neither will be prepared for and once the drugs wear off, shit'll really hit the fan for the both of them, not to mention what'll happen with Luan and Lynn.
Don't worry about how long it takes for a chapter to come out. It's better if you're at full health before going forward. This chapter was shorter than your usual work, but honestly it's probably for the best that you don't put out so much in a chapter. It's honestly a bit overwhelming to go through so much as is (not that it's a bad thing) and doing less in a chapter would likely be better for planning out future chapters.
The chapter itself was fantastic in its comedy surrounding those drugged brownies, but there'll be far reaching consequences for everyone, particularly Lincoln and Luna, when you take the LSD in those brownies into account. The plans they had for furthering their relationship will likely spike up in a way that neither will be prepared for and once the drugs wear off, shit'll really hit the fan for the both of them, not to mention what'll happen with Luan and Lynn.
11/10/2018 c25 Gasporo
Je me demande si Lynn aura la cerise de Lincoln avant Luna ?
Je me demande si Lynn aura la cerise de Lincoln avant Luna ?
11/9/2018 c25 3coldblue2015
Thanks for updating and sorry for not reviewing in a while.
Brown Story and getting Patanu/Patamigo/Pat:
Oooh! This going to be very interesting to read what happens with Lincoln, Lynn, Luan and Luna. There was more than POT inside those brownies, but LSD and aphrodisiac drugs that will send them on trip! What will happen? A orgy, cheating, or something else? I don't know, but the suspense is their that captures my interest. A lot of jokes and dialogue was funny, so good job with that. Most likely, the rest of the Loud Family will be gone for Dairy Land for a while until they get home. That leaves ALOT of time for something to happen and for the readers to possible get fan service.
Lincoln Loud:
Well, he having his first drug trip. Probably dealing with some pent up attraction for Luna and new lust for Lynn, given they showered together and the previous chapters. It really going to be interesting to read what will happen. Perhaps Lincoln will lose his virginity with Luna sooner, than later. Probably something very good and complicated will happen during his alone time with Lynn, Luan and Luna. Still, this will show ne revelations and drama that goes into Lincoln complicated/forbidden relationship.
Lynn Loud:
Okay, she starting to let loose on her feelings and attraction to Lincoln. Not to mention, Lynn accidently causing Luan to lust for her and image naughty things. Lynn, is probably going to do something more embarrassing, but also try to live up her lustful fantasies with Lincoln and perhaps her sisters. Lynn is going to find out what going on with Lincoln and Luna, which would probably give Lynn ideas to try to hook up with her brother. I hope, but who know what will happen in the next chapter.
Luan Loud:
Oh, poor girl. She is in hell right now with her attraction to her siblings and now the Pot Brownies are MORE than Pot Brownies. Reading Luan trying to suppress her urges are painful and we really read more the tortured personality of Luan. She just going to have to come to terms with herself, but also Luan going to have to EXPRESS her lustful desires. With how the Pot Brownies will help in that matter, Luan could have taste of Lincoln, Luna or Lynn for her desires. Regret will come in later with a break down, but Luan not going to be alone at this. Maybe Luan can get closure and new polygamous relationship with some her siblings and realize she not the ONLY person in freaky desires.
Luna Loud:
Oh shit! She in charge of the house, but now her younger siblings are high and horny as a Kite! Man, most likely we are going to read Luna explore her own desires and deal with re-evaluating her relationship with Lincoln. She wants more of physical relationship, because it starting to seem like that. She confess to Luan on this, but also has her own curious desires. Luna doesn't mind her other siblings being 'close' to Lincoln and I bet Luna wants to explore some her lustful desires for Luan.
Questions
1) Does Lisa have cameras around the house and the nanites inside Lincoln and Luna, to tell them how her experiment is going?
2) Should we expect Lucy to discover what happen with Lincoln, Lynn, Luan and Luna when they were away from Dairy land?
3) Will we read a Loud Sibling Meeting happen in this story? Perhaps Lincoln, Lynn, Luan, and Luna have separate meeting while Lola, Lana, Lisa, Lucy, and Lily have their own meeting?
Suggestions
1) Lisa, probably going to know what happens after or during the Pot Brownie episode. She recording a experiment and data of changing her older brother Sperm DNA from brother to a distance cousin. This experiment will scar and probably open a lot of psychological issues for Lisa, but it her experiment and she will see it through to the end.
2) Poor Lucy, she going probably find out. Someway or how. Possible cloths, condoms or something leftover from Lincoln, Lynn Jr, Luan, and Luna having Pot Brownie episode. Lucy could pick up the EMOTIONAL turmoil going through her older siblings, because they might be confused and acting weird after what happens with the Pot Brownies. Most likely, Lucy could have Lynn Jr confess to her dealing with the stress and probably deal with Lynn Jr breakdown moment or perhaps Lucy will sneak up and discover what causing her older sibling stress.
3) Two separate Loud Sibling meetings? Hmm...that has some form eye catching chapter.
We could read the Older Siblings deal with more mature issues. What going on with them and their sexual desires? What do they want from this relationship? Is anyone pregnant? Something like will happen. Probably Leni involved and Luan would support Leni being their given her relationship with Leni. It would be emotional meeting and resolve issues they been having. A pact or definition of OLDER Loud siblings coming to terms with their relationship, sexual desires and getting set for a NEW page in their life. Probably a forbidden polygamous relationship with Lincoln, Lynn jr, Luan, Luna and Leni. Maybe even more siblings in the future. It would add good drama if Lynn Jr, Luan, or Luna were PREGNANT with Lincoln child and what the next step to deal with that situation. Huh? That could keep the story going.
Now, the younger Loud siblings would be interesting. Most likely, the younger siblings will pick up the vibe of what going on with their older siblings. Lily, Lola and Lana would NOT have a clue what going on. This would bring a OPENING of Lucy and Lisa understanding that they know what going on with their older siblings. Perhaps a Lisa and Lucy alliance/bonding moment of being caring young siblings, but also confide with how emotional mixed they feel about this. Lucy probably reflects back to her own attraction to Luna ass, Lynn masturbation, Luan breast milk and Lincoln long tool. Probably poor Lucy dealing with puberty and hormones of how she would feel. Lisa probably being super intelligent does not help with her emotional turmoil of how to feel about her older sibling relationship or the FACT she changed Lincoln DNA to be distant cousin. Lisa would probably worried that she have the SAME taste as Lynn, Luan, Luna and Lucy fascination with their male sibling unit and Lisa worried about that. Maybe Lana and Lola will slowly get the idea what happen with Lucy and Lisa, but they won't know. Lily? I hope Lily doesn't find out until she Pre-Teen and most her siblings are moved out the house.
Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
3coldblue2015Thanks for updating and sorry for not reviewing in a while.
Brown Story and getting Patanu/Patamigo/Pat:
Oooh! This going to be very interesting to read what happens with Lincoln, Lynn, Luan and Luna. There was more than POT inside those brownies, but LSD and aphrodisiac drugs that will send them on trip! What will happen? A orgy, cheating, or something else? I don't know, but the suspense is their that captures my interest. A lot of jokes and dialogue was funny, so good job with that. Most likely, the rest of the Loud Family will be gone for Dairy Land for a while until they get home. That leaves ALOT of time for something to happen and for the readers to possible get fan service.
Lincoln Loud:
Well, he having his first drug trip. Probably dealing with some pent up attraction for Luna and new lust for Lynn, given they showered together and the previous chapters. It really going to be interesting to read what will happen. Perhaps Lincoln will lose his virginity with Luna sooner, than later. Probably something very good and complicated will happen during his alone time with Lynn, Luan and Luna. Still, this will show ne revelations and drama that goes into Lincoln complicated/forbidden relationship.
Lynn Loud:
Okay, she starting to let loose on her feelings and attraction to Lincoln. Not to mention, Lynn accidently causing Luan to lust for her and image naughty things. Lynn, is probably going to do something more embarrassing, but also try to live up her lustful fantasies with Lincoln and perhaps her sisters. Lynn is going to find out what going on with Lincoln and Luna, which would probably give Lynn ideas to try to hook up with her brother. I hope, but who know what will happen in the next chapter.
Luan Loud:
Oh, poor girl. She is in hell right now with her attraction to her siblings and now the Pot Brownies are MORE than Pot Brownies. Reading Luan trying to suppress her urges are painful and we really read more the tortured personality of Luan. She just going to have to come to terms with herself, but also Luan going to have to EXPRESS her lustful desires. With how the Pot Brownies will help in that matter, Luan could have taste of Lincoln, Luna or Lynn for her desires. Regret will come in later with a break down, but Luan not going to be alone at this. Maybe Luan can get closure and new polygamous relationship with some her siblings and realize she not the ONLY person in freaky desires.
Luna Loud:
Oh shit! She in charge of the house, but now her younger siblings are high and horny as a Kite! Man, most likely we are going to read Luna explore her own desires and deal with re-evaluating her relationship with Lincoln. She wants more of physical relationship, because it starting to seem like that. She confess to Luan on this, but also has her own curious desires. Luna doesn't mind her other siblings being 'close' to Lincoln and I bet Luna wants to explore some her lustful desires for Luan.
Questions
1) Does Lisa have cameras around the house and the nanites inside Lincoln and Luna, to tell them how her experiment is going?
2) Should we expect Lucy to discover what happen with Lincoln, Lynn, Luan and Luna when they were away from Dairy land?
3) Will we read a Loud Sibling Meeting happen in this story? Perhaps Lincoln, Lynn, Luan, and Luna have separate meeting while Lola, Lana, Lisa, Lucy, and Lily have their own meeting?
Suggestions
1) Lisa, probably going to know what happens after or during the Pot Brownie episode. She recording a experiment and data of changing her older brother Sperm DNA from brother to a distance cousin. This experiment will scar and probably open a lot of psychological issues for Lisa, but it her experiment and she will see it through to the end.
2) Poor Lucy, she going probably find out. Someway or how. Possible cloths, condoms or something leftover from Lincoln, Lynn Jr, Luan, and Luna having Pot Brownie episode. Lucy could pick up the EMOTIONAL turmoil going through her older siblings, because they might be confused and acting weird after what happens with the Pot Brownies. Most likely, Lucy could have Lynn Jr confess to her dealing with the stress and probably deal with Lynn Jr breakdown moment or perhaps Lucy will sneak up and discover what causing her older sibling stress.
3) Two separate Loud Sibling meetings? Hmm...that has some form eye catching chapter.
We could read the Older Siblings deal with more mature issues. What going on with them and their sexual desires? What do they want from this relationship? Is anyone pregnant? Something like will happen. Probably Leni involved and Luan would support Leni being their given her relationship with Leni. It would be emotional meeting and resolve issues they been having. A pact or definition of OLDER Loud siblings coming to terms with their relationship, sexual desires and getting set for a NEW page in their life. Probably a forbidden polygamous relationship with Lincoln, Lynn jr, Luan, Luna and Leni. Maybe even more siblings in the future. It would add good drama if Lynn Jr, Luan, or Luna were PREGNANT with Lincoln child and what the next step to deal with that situation. Huh? That could keep the story going.
Now, the younger Loud siblings would be interesting. Most likely, the younger siblings will pick up the vibe of what going on with their older siblings. Lily, Lola and Lana would NOT have a clue what going on. This would bring a OPENING of Lucy and Lisa understanding that they know what going on with their older siblings. Perhaps a Lisa and Lucy alliance/bonding moment of being caring young siblings, but also confide with how emotional mixed they feel about this. Lucy probably reflects back to her own attraction to Luna ass, Lynn masturbation, Luan breast milk and Lincoln long tool. Probably poor Lucy dealing with puberty and hormones of how she would feel. Lisa probably being super intelligent does not help with her emotional turmoil of how to feel about her older sibling relationship or the FACT she changed Lincoln DNA to be distant cousin. Lisa would probably worried that she have the SAME taste as Lynn, Luan, Luna and Lucy fascination with their male sibling unit and Lisa worried about that. Maybe Lana and Lola will slowly get the idea what happen with Lucy and Lisa, but they won't know. Lily? I hope Lily doesn't find out until she Pre-Teen and most her siblings are moved out the house.
Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!
11/9/2018 c25 2nobodyreallyimportant
Oh boy. There’s nothing bad that will result from brownie overconsumption. Nothing at all.
...Besides Leni getting left out.
2nobodyreallyimportantOh boy. There’s nothing bad that will result from brownie overconsumption. Nothing at all.
...Besides Leni getting left out.
11/9/2018 c25 GOAT
As long as i know that this story will continue to be updated take as much time as you need
As long as i know that this story will continue to be updated take as much time as you need
11/9/2018 c25 BrokenBloke
Dude, you don't have to apologize for being late, you take as much time as you need, work at your own pace, mate. Times are rough, & having a near death experience is awful, I've been through 3 of them myself, & they never get easier.
The only thing I can say about this chapter is that it makes me want the next chapter more, cause I want to see what will happen to Luna, Luan, Lynn Jr, & Lincoln, now that all of them are baked/going to be baked.
I think the best part of this chapter was Lynn trying to get the brownies, & Lincoln standing in her way. Funniest part was when she got naked in her room after Luan dropped her off, I wonder what she's going to do next.
Dude, you don't have to apologize for being late, you take as much time as you need, work at your own pace, mate. Times are rough, & having a near death experience is awful, I've been through 3 of them myself, & they never get easier.
The only thing I can say about this chapter is that it makes me want the next chapter more, cause I want to see what will happen to Luna, Luan, Lynn Jr, & Lincoln, now that all of them are baked/going to be baked.
I think the best part of this chapter was Lynn trying to get the brownies, & Lincoln standing in her way. Funniest part was when she got naked in her room after Luan dropped her off, I wonder what she's going to do next.
11/9/2018 c25 11That Engineer
Much shorter than what you usually write, but pretty good all the same. I didn't think Luan was one to mix drugs into treats, but I guess she needs them with all of the hormones she's dealing with and trying to figure out what her sexual preference is. I'm pretty certain she's Bi in this fic like Luna is.
11That EngineerMuch shorter than what you usually write, but pretty good all the same. I didn't think Luan was one to mix drugs into treats, but I guess she needs them with all of the hormones she's dealing with and trying to figure out what her sexual preference is. I'm pretty certain she's Bi in this fic like Luna is.