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8/8 c5 bookivore
Biology says start talking about sex when kids are 11 or 12 because they can get pregnant about then. The 15 year old thing threw me a bit, are there really parents waiting that long? I hope the kid would come back with Mom gave me a book 3 years ago or school covered this twice already.
7/21 c5 odonnellzoo99
Very good. I liked it and look forward to reading the sequel next.
7/13 c5 mumphie
A much better Harry-has-a-brother tale than most I've read. Would love to see more.
4/14 c6 4Wren Truesong
Wonderful stuff. Harry makes a fantastic older brother, boi needed siblings to fuss over.
3/20 c5 montanoaries9
and lily's reaction to dumblrdork is utterly stupid, she only berates him thats all, instead of outing him as headmaster for attacking a student specially her son and that was only reaction to just yell she's utterly stupid
3/20 c4 montanoaries9
this is kinda bad compared to your other work and this is really stupid for all of his intelligence his decision making is utterly dreadful stupid instead of waiting for the aurors what this stupid do go with the flow and fight for the philosophers stone how stupid and he fucking stupidly also bought the other first year baggage so stupid, and if this is already stupid how more for the sequel
12/18/2020 c1 Sifo-Dyas
Bullshitting wands nice. bullshit
11/7/2020 c6 3WhiteElfElder
Seems all too easy for Harry; how does he stack up magically to Albus?
10/16/2020 c5 HoneyBear84
Loved it
10/2/2020 c5 MelancholyNaz
awesome
8/10/2020 c6 10supersandman86
Again I've read a few stories and you are fantastic! A story on Harry not being the boy-who-lived but the protector and big brother of him with a none potter parent bashing theme, I love it! Haven't read the sequel yet but I will do. The funniest thing is that's a rarity to find where Lily and James live and a sibling of Harry's declared the chosen one without any potter parent bashing on that part. A fantastic job.
8/2/2020 c3 1Tenjo
A lot of fan fictions make the ‘crowd’ react in unrealistic ways. What power are they respecting? I know he’s powerful, but they are going off the story about the troll in which he used two first year spells. That’s not power, it’s intelligence since he knew that even they were enough to beat the troll.
7/2/2020 c6 Rebatrek
Nice twist to the BWL genre. Thank you for sharing.
6/14/2020 c3 Kai
Are there stories out there where Hagrid gets what he deserves?

He was twice in Azkaban for things he was innocent of in canon. But he was never appropriately punished for the shit he DID.

Thousands of acromantula, a dragon, illegal cross-breeding, with a manticore to boot. That's THREE different Class XXXXX monsters. A full giant, brother or not. His classes were shit, but if incompetent teachers were kicked out only a handful would've been allowed to stay. But his part in Harry's kidnapping out of the hand of his rightful guardian? Or Harry's treatment while ferrying him to Surrey? Injured, without medical help, without drink, without food, with a nappy full of shit, in a thin blanket flown over England in November for about THIRTY hours in a coat pocket on a motorcycle. Attacking a muggle child without provocation (at least no provocation from that child) with magic he isn't allowed to cast anyway. Several violations of the Statute of Secrecy. Illegal trespass with kicking in the door, demanding being served alcohol, and taking the "bed" of a family member for himself to stay until morning uninvited.

I like almost no one from the Harry Potter story. There are a lot of people further up on my shit list. But Hagrid deserves his place on that list. As a character in a children's story he is allowed a bit leeway. However, the third book at the latest isn't a children's book anymore.
6/14/2020 c1 Kai
Yeah, Rowling doesn't say, but some things can be inferred from canon.

Not only are floo fireplaces able to handle a lot of people in a short time, as seen at the ministry every morning, when all those seat warmers try to get to their offices as close to opening time as possible. In fact, it's the ONLY magical transport that can be used to access the platform.

The safety interval of portkey arrival, as seen at the quidditch world championship in the fourth book, is much too long for more than a handful families to arrive reasonably close to departure time.

And apparition can't be aimed. Like Charlie apparated onto an old woman, and Ronald and Kingsley apparated into a group of snatchers each. I doubt that those three incidents were intended. The platform at twenty minutes to departure is PACKED. Apparating in GUARANTEES an accident. Even a dedicated arrival point can't be cleared fast enough to prevent accidents. I mean, let's say half the students are apparated in and everyone has one family member with them. That's, when Hogwarts is used to capacity, 500 students and 500 others. Within, say, twenty minutes from 10.35 h till 10.55 h. Not so early that they have to wait half an eternity nor so late that they miss the train. That's six people within five seconds. There's no way that that can happen without injuries.

Flying is out, other portals than that from the non-magical side at King's Cross are never mentioned at all in the books, AFAIR, er, that's it I think. So it MUST be floo.

That's a fat point against the Weasels by the way. For canon!Harry's first day and for hiring three taxis for a drive of several hours from Devon to London, costing over a hundred pounds that they can't spare. How expensive can floo powder be?
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