for Loud House: Love for Lincoln12/30/2016 c7 JohnDeax
You're completely copying jump jump's work at least add something new or keep going after the events of part 2 where he left off so it's not a total ripoff.
You're completely copying jump jump's work at least add something new or keep going after the events of part 2 where he left off so it's not a total ripoff.
12/30/2016 c7 
23Mr. Dusk
You know, there's a difference between being inspired and completely plagiarizing someone else's work. You add nothing new to this story, and are just banking off the popularity of JumpJump's comic.
23Mr. DuskYou know, there's a difference between being inspired and completely plagiarizing someone else's work. You add nothing new to this story, and are just banking off the popularity of JumpJump's comic.
12/28/2016 c4 FanGirl
Not bad.
Not bad.
12/27/2016 c3 Headphase05
Since this is based on the comic with the same premise, we should expect Lucy in the next chapter.
Since this is based on the comic with the same premise, we should expect Lucy in the next chapter.
12/26/2016 c2 noa
Great, keep it up
Great, keep it up
12/26/2016 c2 Dread
Well this is jumpjump's story. Will you stop wher he is in the comic or keep it going your own way when you reach the cop's part?
9/10 you can write solo as far as I see. Lost a point for it not being your story. But ill keep reading.
Well this is jumpjump's story. Will you stop wher he is in the comic or keep it going your own way when you reach the cop's part?
9/10 you can write solo as far as I see. Lost a point for it not being your story. But ill keep reading.
12/25/2016 c1 K-ooKk
This should pan out well.
Obviously inspired by JumpJump's comic, correct?
I like it! Will be following.
This should pan out well.
Obviously inspired by JumpJump's comic, correct?
I like it! Will be following.
12/25/2016 c1 biginferno
Not sure who you plan to have as lincoln's lovers but I hope leni is one of them please update and complete
Not sure who you plan to have as lincoln's lovers but I hope leni is one of them please update and complete