for The Legend of Zelda: Shards of the Rose8/13/2017 c9 
26The Jingo
Ahha. I really like your Zelda. She's young but wise, and just snarky enough with her internal monologue.
26The JingoAhha. I really like your Zelda. She's young but wise, and just snarky enough with her internal monologue.
8/13/2017 c9 Nil0
I finally caught up! HAZAAH!
Yay! Impaz is okay!
I'm getting quite attached to these characters now, am really glad you didn't kill her off like that.
Kinda sad that my binge-reading of this has ended since I've caught up but that's a personal issue XD.
Nothing needs fixing, just as great (if not, better) than the other chapters and as always, I can't wait to read more.
I'll just leave these cupcakes here :-)
I finally caught up! HAZAAH!
Yay! Impaz is okay!
I'm getting quite attached to these characters now, am really glad you didn't kill her off like that.
Kinda sad that my binge-reading of this has ended since I've caught up but that's a personal issue XD.
Nothing needs fixing, just as great (if not, better) than the other chapters and as always, I can't wait to read more.
I'll just leave these cupcakes here :-)
8/13/2017 c8 Nil0
And just when I thought it couldn't get any better, it did XD
Great job as always, I find it cool that you finally brought a celestial being into the mix.
Believe me, these reviews of mine would be more in-depth if I actually knew more about the lore of LoZ because apart from small things, I know pretty much nothing XD.
I know, I know. Why am I reading a fanmade story that uses the lore, characters & locations of LoZ when I know nothing about it? Because it's a great story, nothing complex about it. If it wasn't so great, if it wasn't to my tastes then I would of dropped it in a heartbeat and yet, Here I am.
In short, just keep going. I'm really enjoying this little adventure that your writing is taking me on and I have no intentions of stopping until I've reached the end.
And just when I thought it couldn't get any better, it did XD
Great job as always, I find it cool that you finally brought a celestial being into the mix.
Believe me, these reviews of mine would be more in-depth if I actually knew more about the lore of LoZ because apart from small things, I know pretty much nothing XD.
I know, I know. Why am I reading a fanmade story that uses the lore, characters & locations of LoZ when I know nothing about it? Because it's a great story, nothing complex about it. If it wasn't so great, if it wasn't to my tastes then I would of dropped it in a heartbeat and yet, Here I am.
In short, just keep going. I'm really enjoying this little adventure that your writing is taking me on and I have no intentions of stopping until I've reached the end.
8/13/2017 c7 Nil0
(Just gonna ignore that little block of text below the story since I am far too late for that XD)
...things turned to crap really quick! It was such a joyous moment and in seconds, it flipped turned upside down so fast that it took me by surprise. You, my friend, are AWESOME!
I'm serious! It's so...indescribable. The words are on my mind but I can't put it into words and although this feeling annoys me, I find that it is somewhat necessary.
I will now proceed to carry on, this story has practically become a part of my routine XD
(Just gonna ignore that little block of text below the story since I am far too late for that XD)
...things turned to crap really quick! It was such a joyous moment and in seconds, it flipped turned upside down so fast that it took me by surprise. You, my friend, are AWESOME!
I'm serious! It's so...indescribable. The words are on my mind but I can't put it into words and although this feeling annoys me, I find that it is somewhat necessary.
I will now proceed to carry on, this story has practically become a part of my routine XD
8/13/2017 c6 Nil0
Was low-key wishing that the kiss was real XD
As great as the others, I absolutely love your style of writing. The descriptions of the scenery and of the characters along with their emotions, thoughts and actions are so well-written that it really does make you feel like you're right there alongside them in the moment.
I'm binge-reading these so I can catch up which is something I could of done awhile ago XD
All these cliffhangers really draw in the audience, Keep up the great work!
Was low-key wishing that the kiss was real XD
As great as the others, I absolutely love your style of writing. The descriptions of the scenery and of the characters along with their emotions, thoughts and actions are so well-written that it really does make you feel like you're right there alongside them in the moment.
I'm binge-reading these so I can catch up which is something I could of done awhile ago XD
All these cliffhangers really draw in the audience, Keep up the great work!
8/13/2017 c5 Nil0
Heeey, you forgot the i in my name :(
Either that or I spelled it wrong on the first review XD but thanks for the special thanks. Was not expecting that honestly but anyway, onto the review.
As usual, I love it and found it not as much of a chore to read as other things I've read which is really great.
I didn't pick up any mistakes which is also great and punctuation seems good...gosh now I just sound like some sort of critic XDr
Gonna carry on reading now, seems like I've found myself both a great story and a great author :)
Heeey, you forgot the i in my name :(
Either that or I spelled it wrong on the first review XD but thanks for the special thanks. Was not expecting that honestly but anyway, onto the review.
As usual, I love it and found it not as much of a chore to read as other things I've read which is really great.
I didn't pick up any mistakes which is also great and punctuation seems good...gosh now I just sound like some sort of critic XDr
Gonna carry on reading now, seems like I've found myself both a great story and a great author :)
8/13/2017 c4 Nil0
Aww, she got caught but at least it's just Impaz XD
I'll be honest, reading all of this makes me feel like writing my own stuff. That's how great and well-written all of this is.
Not alot of stories or texts make me feel motivated like this, keep doing what you're doing this is great stuff :)
Aww, she got caught but at least it's just Impaz XD
I'll be honest, reading all of this makes me feel like writing my own stuff. That's how great and well-written all of this is.
Not alot of stories or texts make me feel motivated like this, keep doing what you're doing this is great stuff :)
8/10/2017 c3 Nil0
Nice cliffhanger! really draws the reader in and makes them want to carry on reading.
Not to be mean or anything but you repeat "could" twice during the part where the painter and Impaz were sassing each other which I must say, nice job. Not a lot of people pull that sort of thing off properly and you did it splendidly.
Nice cliffhanger! really draws the reader in and makes them want to carry on reading.
Not to be mean or anything but you repeat "could" twice during the part where the painter and Impaz were sassing each other which I must say, nice job. Not a lot of people pull that sort of thing off properly and you did it splendidly.
8/9/2017 c2 Nil0
(BTW, sorry for putting this off for so long. I'll leave a batch of cupcakes to make up for that XD)
As someone who has NEVER touched a LoZ game, I kinda feel bad for not playing one sooner.
Nonetheless, as amazing as the one before. Your descriptions are very understandable, they don't make me feel like a total idiot (trust me, this happens far too much when I read things) and the characters are easy to emotionally sympathize with.
It's like I'm there beside them in the moment and that's awesome!
I absolutely loved it and will probably spend most of my spare time tonight reading this instead of lounging around on Youtube. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh and please don't feel discouraged or bummed out, you have no reason to feel that way.
Your writing is marvelous and actually enjoyable to read, I mean that.
Keep doing what you're doing and gradually, you'll be swarmed with the acknowledgement that you deserve :)
(Alright, going to leave it there since I'm supposed to be doing my work XD)
(BTW, sorry for putting this off for so long. I'll leave a batch of cupcakes to make up for that XD)
As someone who has NEVER touched a LoZ game, I kinda feel bad for not playing one sooner.
Nonetheless, as amazing as the one before. Your descriptions are very understandable, they don't make me feel like a total idiot (trust me, this happens far too much when I read things) and the characters are easy to emotionally sympathize with.
It's like I'm there beside them in the moment and that's awesome!
I absolutely loved it and will probably spend most of my spare time tonight reading this instead of lounging around on Youtube. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh and please don't feel discouraged or bummed out, you have no reason to feel that way.
Your writing is marvelous and actually enjoyable to read, I mean that.
Keep doing what you're doing and gradually, you'll be swarmed with the acknowledgement that you deserve :)
(Alright, going to leave it there since I'm supposed to be doing my work XD)
8/9/2017 c1 Uhh random guy
I can actually see this happening, and it feels so...REAL. Like as if I was right there!
I can actually see this happening, and it feels so...REAL. Like as if I was right there!
8/1/2017 c9 Ripple
Let's get 50 reviews! I liked this chapter! It was a bit filler-type, but all stories need those. I loved the reunion, and Impaz's comment about the cats (lol). Happy birthday!
Let's get 50 reviews! I liked this chapter! It was a bit filler-type, but all stories need those. I loved the reunion, and Impaz's comment about the cats (lol). Happy birthday!
6/25/2017 c3 Guest
My favorite Zelda game is Wind Waker and Twilight Princess is my second favorite.
My favorite Zelda game is Wind Waker and Twilight Princess is my second favorite.
6/25/2017 c8 Ripple
Wow! I really love the Zoras in general, and especially Prince Ralis. I can't wait to see the story progress with Nayru... will they try and find Farore and Din? I can't wait! (Also thank you for liking my review :3)
Wow! I really love the Zoras in general, and especially Prince Ralis. I can't wait to see the story progress with Nayru... will they try and find Farore and Din? I can't wait! (Also thank you for liking my review :3)
6/11/2017 c7 1The Rambling Writer
So as requested here is a review, don't worry I can very much agree, I'm very easily put off by the lack of feedback, I have always enjoyed the LoZ fanfictions that have an essance of reality and I loved how you used the dance, Zelda not know what was going on or how to dance due to her upbringing and the upper society expectations. Loved the descriptions, keep it up for sure. Happy if you want even more help/review or whatever through PM as I don't want to write a colousus review xD
1The Rambling WriterSo as requested here is a review, don't worry I can very much agree, I'm very easily put off by the lack of feedback, I have always enjoyed the LoZ fanfictions that have an essance of reality and I loved how you used the dance, Zelda not know what was going on or how to dance due to her upbringing and the upper society expectations. Loved the descriptions, keep it up for sure. Happy if you want even more help/review or whatever through PM as I don't want to write a colousus review xD
6/9/2017 c7 JoshuaDrinkWater
Ooohkay. Where do I start. Well first off I really enjoyed every little bit of your story. LIKE. EVERY. BIT. (Can you tell I'm a ZelLinker?) Also the way you built each character was very well done, claps for you my dear. Link is my favorite, he's quiet but he knows how to make others happy with just a smile. And Zelda seems like she isn't always "all there" but all she wants is to rebuild herself and make her people happy too. I ship it! Yo, also I really like your "close to real literature"-like writing. Keep that up. It's lit, haha! Your use of imagery is great. Not too much, not too little. Also dialogue, a very important thing that most online writers have trouble with. You do the reader a great favor by saving us from reading the word -said over and over, amazing job. I like reading your story with BGM or Hisaishi in the background, makes the story a lot more visible and capturing than it already is. Thank you. I really hope you update soon! I also hope Zelda is okay and will find herself in the midst of all this catastrophe. Alright good night dearest, thank you much for the good yarn :)
Ooohkay. Where do I start. Well first off I really enjoyed every little bit of your story. LIKE. EVERY. BIT. (Can you tell I'm a ZelLinker?) Also the way you built each character was very well done, claps for you my dear. Link is my favorite, he's quiet but he knows how to make others happy with just a smile. And Zelda seems like she isn't always "all there" but all she wants is to rebuild herself and make her people happy too. I ship it! Yo, also I really like your "close to real literature"-like writing. Keep that up. It's lit, haha! Your use of imagery is great. Not too much, not too little. Also dialogue, a very important thing that most online writers have trouble with. You do the reader a great favor by saving us from reading the word -said over and over, amazing job. I like reading your story with BGM or Hisaishi in the background, makes the story a lot more visible and capturing than it already is. Thank you. I really hope you update soon! I also hope Zelda is okay and will find herself in the midst of all this catastrophe. Alright good night dearest, thank you much for the good yarn :)