for The Legend of Zelda: Shards of the Rose4/4/2017 c1 
3MysShadowdragon
yes. the first chapter was a bit confusing but after I pushed through it was like alladin was singing to me and just Everything was so good. you've done such a good job with making things frustrating but not in a way that makes me want to throw my hands up and stop reading. just yes, 10/10
3MysShadowdragonyes. the first chapter was a bit confusing but after I pushed through it was like alladin was singing to me and just Everything was so good. you've done such a good job with making things frustrating but not in a way that makes me want to throw my hands up and stop reading. just yes, 10/10
3/30/2017 c5 Bnanas23
This is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent writing and I love the building romance between Link and Zelda. Keep it up!
This is fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent writing and I love the building romance between Link and Zelda. Keep it up!
3/29/2017 c5 Guest
Love it! All the best with your exams!
Love it! All the best with your exams!
3/29/2017 c5 Rooples Pooples1
Oh my...
I said it before...I am saying it again...This story is way too quality for this site. I just love how you describe Zelda and the way how she is so eager to spend time with Link. She is a hopeless romantic and i love it.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Oh my...
I said it before...I am saying it again...This story is way too quality for this site. I just love how you describe Zelda and the way how she is so eager to spend time with Link. She is a hopeless romantic and i love it.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
3/22/2017 c1 2Ximnah
The way you describe and explain details in this story is absolutely beautiful. The plot is well-developed, which is something very nice to see in a fanfiction since many others often lack a sense of plot direction in their writing. I've loved the story thoroughly so far; I cannot wait to read more!
2XimnahThe way you describe and explain details in this story is absolutely beautiful. The plot is well-developed, which is something very nice to see in a fanfiction since many others often lack a sense of plot direction in their writing. I've loved the story thoroughly so far; I cannot wait to read more!
3/8/2017 c1 Nl0
That first description is a great way to hook your readers in, very impressive.
You have a descriptive writing style which is what I love to read since I like running the scenarios and imagining the scenery as I read
Nothing requires fixing, your spelling and grammar is spot on:
"She ran to the monster and fletched1" I think the "1" was a mistake but if not, please ignore
Great description, rich language and I absolutely loved it
Can't wait to read more! :)
9/10
That first description is a great way to hook your readers in, very impressive.
You have a descriptive writing style which is what I love to read since I like running the scenarios and imagining the scenery as I read
Nothing requires fixing, your spelling and grammar is spot on:
"She ran to the monster and fletched1" I think the "1" was a mistake but if not, please ignore
Great description, rich language and I absolutely loved it
Can't wait to read more! :)
9/10
3/4/2017 c4 Rooples Pooples1
I have no words to describe just how much I enjoy this story and the way it develops. You are doing an amazing job hun.
Love the way you write how Zelda turns into a blubbering mess around Link and how he is still being loyal to his princess.
I have no words to describe just how much I enjoy this story and the way it develops. You are doing an amazing job hun.
Love the way you write how Zelda turns into a blubbering mess around Link and how he is still being loyal to his princess.
2/28/2017 c4 1KuramaFTW
Again another amazing chapter. I liked how Link and Zelda went on a little date as he walked her back to the castle to help build their relationship. Also that its nice to see that despite what the King is doing and claiming there are people out there that are upset at what is happening to Zelda and are praying for her. However I'm almost starting to get the impression that all of this tension between Zelda and her supporters and Daphnese and his supporters might start a Civil War. Granted there isn't much to go on but it would be an interesting prospect for a Legend of Zelda story as I don't think its really been attempted. Although this might turn out to be a Civil War I'm willing to bet that it would have another side to it, something like somebody manipulating the people and are the main reason behind this war and Link and Zelda have to stop them. Granted this is all speculation so obviously there is nothing concrete about it but the current situation leads me to believe that this is where things are going. Anyways great chapter, keep up the great work and update soon.
1KuramaFTWAgain another amazing chapter. I liked how Link and Zelda went on a little date as he walked her back to the castle to help build their relationship. Also that its nice to see that despite what the King is doing and claiming there are people out there that are upset at what is happening to Zelda and are praying for her. However I'm almost starting to get the impression that all of this tension between Zelda and her supporters and Daphnese and his supporters might start a Civil War. Granted there isn't much to go on but it would be an interesting prospect for a Legend of Zelda story as I don't think its really been attempted. Although this might turn out to be a Civil War I'm willing to bet that it would have another side to it, something like somebody manipulating the people and are the main reason behind this war and Link and Zelda have to stop them. Granted this is all speculation so obviously there is nothing concrete about it but the current situation leads me to believe that this is where things are going. Anyways great chapter, keep up the great work and update soon.
2/28/2017 c4 James Birdsong
Good story of course
Good story of course
1/28/2017 c3 Rooples Pooples1
This story is waaay too quality for Fanfiction. Heh...Please update as soon as you can.
This story is waaay too quality for Fanfiction. Heh...Please update as soon as you can.
1/28/2017 c3 KuramaFTW
Well that's an interesting way to introduce Link. But man Daphnes needs to get the boot as he is running Hyrule into the ground. Taking the right for everyday common folk to bear arms to protect themselves, even from the dangers of the wild itself is a great indicator of how shitty his capabilities to run a Kingdom are.
As for my favorite game, probably has to be Twilight Princess as well with Skyward Sword right behind it. I swear I know TP like the back of my hand. Could replay that entire game in my head from memory alone.
Well that's an interesting way to introduce Link. But man Daphnes needs to get the boot as he is running Hyrule into the ground. Taking the right for everyday common folk to bear arms to protect themselves, even from the dangers of the wild itself is a great indicator of how shitty his capabilities to run a Kingdom are.
As for my favorite game, probably has to be Twilight Princess as well with Skyward Sword right behind it. I swear I know TP like the back of my hand. Could replay that entire game in my head from memory alone.
1/27/2017 c3 Guest
Ack!awesome!
Ack!awesome!
1/16/2017 c2 Guest
I love it! !
I love it! !
1/15/2017 c1 2AmberPriceBringRachelBack
Keep writing this story is amazing, you made a picture of the pricessa zelda very realistic, I'm loving it, I want that link to appear
2AmberPriceBringRachelBackKeep writing this story is amazing, you made a picture of the pricessa zelda very realistic, I'm loving it, I want that link to appear