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24Generala
Sorry about to hear the news about your grandpa. Its a difficult time I'll hope you get trough soon. Now with the story... talking about adding more fuel to the fire.
Zelda is not right. She's becoming an addict and the big chance of Link taking distance because of her engagement...:(
24GeneralaSorry about to hear the news about your grandpa. Its a difficult time I'll hope you get trough soon. Now with the story... talking about adding more fuel to the fire.
Zelda is not right. She's becoming an addict and the big chance of Link taking distance because of her engagement...:(
1/31/2019 c29 13Ultimate blazer
That mad man is the prince? Lol
You like to make Zelda suffer, do you? Anyway, another good chapter indeed. I must admit, that you are one of the few people capable of writing good kids characters.
I can't wait to read the next!
P.S: Sorry for your lost.
13Ultimate blazerThat mad man is the prince? Lol
You like to make Zelda suffer, do you? Anyway, another good chapter indeed. I must admit, that you are one of the few people capable of writing good kids characters.
I can't wait to read the next!
P.S: Sorry for your lost.
1/8/2019 c28 kansa
Was finally able to catch up on the reading! Excellent chapters. Dinaria is quite the brat isn’t she. Oh the memories of teenage self importance. Loved the progression of Link and Zelda’s relationship! But not looking forward to the potential backlash. All the goddesses have been gathered! Something tells me Dark is about to resurface. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Was finally able to catch up on the reading! Excellent chapters. Dinaria is quite the brat isn’t she. Oh the memories of teenage self importance. Loved the progression of Link and Zelda’s relationship! But not looking forward to the potential backlash. All the goddesses have been gathered! Something tells me Dark is about to resurface. Looking forward to the next chapter.
1/7/2019 c28 SweetestChick
This chapter was pretty fun! I enjoyed it! Gosef sure killed Zelda’s confidence talking about her body, goodness lol. But I must say a thicc, curvy bod is more attractive than a slim one to MOST men. But obviously Link doesn’t care about that. Anyways, I am glad that Zelda overcame her uncertainty and pulled off a nice dance at the end on her own. Unfortunately she failed to inform him of her engagement to a prince! Aye! The shyte is gonna hit the fan sooner or later. And I can’t help but wonder what Dark is up to...
Thank you for the great update! Don’t work too hard and see you next chappie!
This chapter was pretty fun! I enjoyed it! Gosef sure killed Zelda’s confidence talking about her body, goodness lol. But I must say a thicc, curvy bod is more attractive than a slim one to MOST men. But obviously Link doesn’t care about that. Anyways, I am glad that Zelda overcame her uncertainty and pulled off a nice dance at the end on her own. Unfortunately she failed to inform him of her engagement to a prince! Aye! The shyte is gonna hit the fan sooner or later. And I can’t help but wonder what Dark is up to...
Thank you for the great update! Don’t work too hard and see you next chappie!
1/3/2019 c27 I'm sad ver.2
I like this story a lot, congradulations on two years. I like the goddesses, Dinaria reminds me of a mini Ganondorf.
I like this story a lot, congradulations on two years. I like the goddesses, Dinaria reminds me of a mini Ganondorf.
1/2/2019 c24 I'm sad
Poor Ilia and Elric. Good story so far but im sad now :(
Poor Ilia and Elric. Good story so far but im sad now :(
12/31/2018 c27 Andrew
Im definitely enjoying the story so far, and rereading chapters for clarification yielded much that I missed previously- a testament to your good writing and my sleep deprevation. I’m eagerly looking forward to where you take your story.
Im definitely enjoying the story so far, and rereading chapters for clarification yielded much that I missed previously- a testament to your good writing and my sleep deprevation. I’m eagerly looking forward to where you take your story.
12/30/2018 c21 Andrew
I’m in need of an explanation for 20’s end. Zelda is in one place... and then shes in another? I was under the impression that 21 was a dream sequence. I’m not sure if this was your intended effect, but I found this part very difficult to follow.
I’m in need of an explanation for 20’s end. Zelda is in one place... and then shes in another? I was under the impression that 21 was a dream sequence. I’m not sure if this was your intended effect, but I found this part very difficult to follow.
12/28/2018 c12 Andrew
Its now 6:03 AM... I just realized I've been reading your story all night long. If only I didn’t have to sleep or I’d finish the rest. Great story so far and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Its now 6:03 AM... I just realized I've been reading your story all night long. If only I didn’t have to sleep or I’d finish the rest. Great story so far and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes.
12/27/2018 c27 Guest
Wow, 2 years! Great story, I really enjoy it. This chapter was good. I like the zelda-link interactions. Dinaria is written well, a believably bratty teenager. I didn't really understand the rosebud and painted woman parts but maybe that will be more clear later in the story. Thanks for writing!
Wow, 2 years! Great story, I really enjoy it. This chapter was good. I like the zelda-link interactions. Dinaria is written well, a believably bratty teenager. I didn't really understand the rosebud and painted woman parts but maybe that will be more clear later in the story. Thanks for writing!
12/27/2018 c27 Ultimate blazer
Looks like we have a little Ganondorf here lol.
I like the chapter and I felt so sad too...poor Dinaria...
Nice chapter and merry Christmas!
Looks like we have a little Ganondorf here lol.
I like the chapter and I felt so sad too...poor Dinaria...
Nice chapter and merry Christmas!
12/27/2018 c27 AzHasANewName1
Its only really been 6 months or so for me as that is when I first saw your story (around about the time I finished Breath of the Wild and suddenly went scouring the internet for anything and everything Zelink from any of the games) so I can't say its been nearly as long a ride for me as it has for some.
Its really been interesting watching the mental and emotional rollercoaster Zelda is perpetually on and the complex nature in which every character is presented. Even seemingly irredeemable characters are often shown with some level of humanity and not just in the typical "now you should feel sorry for them" way that is often overdone in media.
On to this chapter, I definitely imagined Dinaria would be the most prideful of the three "sisters" as I imagine that is one of the aspects that would be within Din's purview as the Goddess of Power and all things that would fall under that. Of course, with them having 'fallen from grace' so to speak, it stands to reason that her pride would be perverted into being something of an empty bravado.
Its only really been 6 months or so for me as that is when I first saw your story (around about the time I finished Breath of the Wild and suddenly went scouring the internet for anything and everything Zelink from any of the games) so I can't say its been nearly as long a ride for me as it has for some.
Its really been interesting watching the mental and emotional rollercoaster Zelda is perpetually on and the complex nature in which every character is presented. Even seemingly irredeemable characters are often shown with some level of humanity and not just in the typical "now you should feel sorry for them" way that is often overdone in media.
On to this chapter, I definitely imagined Dinaria would be the most prideful of the three "sisters" as I imagine that is one of the aspects that would be within Din's purview as the Goddess of Power and all things that would fall under that. Of course, with them having 'fallen from grace' so to speak, it stands to reason that her pride would be perverted into being something of an empty bravado.
12/27/2018 c27 Hendrewen
Thanks for the cookie! I really enjoyed this chapter, I think I understand Sabooru's harsh way of telling Dinaria the truth.. because of her stubborn nature, Dinaria would not have believed her. How painful this may be, it seems necessary. I love your pacing of the story and how the relationship between Link and Zelda is growing. Thanks for this chapter and I hope you get enough reviews, can't wait for another one :-)
Thanks for the cookie! I really enjoyed this chapter, I think I understand Sabooru's harsh way of telling Dinaria the truth.. because of her stubborn nature, Dinaria would not have believed her. How painful this may be, it seems necessary. I love your pacing of the story and how the relationship between Link and Zelda is growing. Thanks for this chapter and I hope you get enough reviews, can't wait for another one :-)
12/12/2018 c26 Hendrewen
I've been binge-reading your amazing story for the last couple of days and wow! I love it! The character development is very beautifully done and I love how realistic and flawed you make your characters to be. I personally love Naru's dryness, her humor is just the right amount to lighten things up. I do have to say I was very sad that Elric died, he and Ilia were so cute together. But maybe not all is lost? Or is this just wishful thinking haha! I do hope to see some more action from our favorite green clad hero, the poor man's ego must be below zero after continually getting his ass whipped by Dark haha. Btw I found you portrayed the death of King Daphnes really beautifully, and even when I'm glad that he's gone I do think different of him after his final words. I'm curious if we get to know more about Link his parents and backstory, or not? I do feel that because we know about Zelda's warrior's hearts and her feelings and emotions, it almost seems that she's the only one who suffers from great trauma. But after everything that has happened, I'm curious to see if Link will stay this emotionally strong or if that also is a mask that he's wearing to hide all the trauma's of the past. But in short, you left me with withdrawal symptoms now lol, thanks again for this amazing work and good luck with writing the next chapter. :-)
I've been binge-reading your amazing story for the last couple of days and wow! I love it! The character development is very beautifully done and I love how realistic and flawed you make your characters to be. I personally love Naru's dryness, her humor is just the right amount to lighten things up. I do have to say I was very sad that Elric died, he and Ilia were so cute together. But maybe not all is lost? Or is this just wishful thinking haha! I do hope to see some more action from our favorite green clad hero, the poor man's ego must be below zero after continually getting his ass whipped by Dark haha. Btw I found you portrayed the death of King Daphnes really beautifully, and even when I'm glad that he's gone I do think different of him after his final words. I'm curious if we get to know more about Link his parents and backstory, or not? I do feel that because we know about Zelda's warrior's hearts and her feelings and emotions, it almost seems that she's the only one who suffers from great trauma. But after everything that has happened, I'm curious to see if Link will stay this emotionally strong or if that also is a mask that he's wearing to hide all the trauma's of the past. But in short, you left me with withdrawal symptoms now lol, thanks again for this amazing work and good luck with writing the next chapter. :-)