
4/23/2019 c21
63Ichihimeisthebest
I didn't expect that.
I really enjoyed reading this fic and how the mistery was built splendidly and everyone was in character.
I'm still wondering about the butterfly, I can't figure out who "he" is mean to be. There were a lot of things unsolved but the central mistery was solved and I'm really grateful for that.

I didn't expect that.
I really enjoyed reading this fic and how the mistery was built splendidly and everyone was in character.
I'm still wondering about the butterfly, I can't figure out who "he" is mean to be. There were a lot of things unsolved but the central mistery was solved and I'm really grateful for that.
7/27/2009 c21
34Pen and Paper71
This is very good. The characters are very portrayed and I love your writing style. Excellent.

This is very good. The characters are very portrayed and I love your writing style. Excellent.
3/6/2007 c21 Alex
is this the end or is there more to be said. please add more if there is more to add.
is this the end or is there more to be said. please add more if there is more to add.
4/25/2006 c21 Nanna
oh now you shot me :) I was so sure that " War" was the last part of Hour Lost...and that girl running down the hill was Usagi...so sure...niaahh:P I like this story very much...though is so dark...but I loved the suspence and originality of it...I'm really dying to know how will this end? ughh...You absolutely shocked me and I'm so grateful for that :) please please continue..I'm looking forward...amazing excellent amazing ! :)
Good luck
Nanna
oh now you shot me :) I was so sure that " War" was the last part of Hour Lost...and that girl running down the hill was Usagi...so sure...niaahh:P I like this story very much...though is so dark...but I loved the suspence and originality of it...I'm really dying to know how will this end? ughh...You absolutely shocked me and I'm so grateful for that :) please please continue..I'm looking forward...amazing excellent amazing ! :)
Good luck
Nanna
3/3/2006 c21
16PoeticFirefly
Wow what an Amazing story. I love your writing style! Keep it up I can't wait to read more!

Wow what an Amazing story. I love your writing style! Keep it up I can't wait to read more!
7/9/2005 c20 Black Eyed Beauty
Wow! That was an excellent story! It was very confusing and to tell you the truth, I'm not entirely sure that I actually get the ending or the whole thing. It's like it keeps going around in circles and that Mamoru and Usagi's deaths were for nothing cuz the outers and inners had a war anyway. And was that Usagi running down the hill in the last few sentences? If it was, then how was she alive. It was a spectacular and splendid story, I'm just not sure that I really got the ending. It was perfectly put together, though. The plot and puzzle pieces were impeccable! ~*~Illusion Glades~*~
Wow! That was an excellent story! It was very confusing and to tell you the truth, I'm not entirely sure that I actually get the ending or the whole thing. It's like it keeps going around in circles and that Mamoru and Usagi's deaths were for nothing cuz the outers and inners had a war anyway. And was that Usagi running down the hill in the last few sentences? If it was, then how was she alive. It was a spectacular and splendid story, I'm just not sure that I really got the ending. It was perfectly put together, though. The plot and puzzle pieces were impeccable! ~*~Illusion Glades~*~
3/1/2005 c20
4Moon's Rose
WOW! There are no words good enough to describe this! Can't wait to read more!

WOW! There are no words good enough to describe this! Can't wait to read more!
1/30/2005 c20 Karla
I hope another chapter will be out soon, because i really do enjoy reading your fic.
I hope another chapter will be out soon, because i really do enjoy reading your fic.
11/20/2004 c20
33Moon Bunny
This is one of the best fanfics I have read in awhile. Definately worth the read, and you said english wasn't your first language! WOW.
Very very well done.
The last sentance of chapter twenty is just cool and breathtaking. Oh, I cannot wait for more. :)

This is one of the best fanfics I have read in awhile. Definately worth the read, and you said english wasn't your first language! WOW.
Very very well done.
The last sentance of chapter twenty is just cool and breathtaking. Oh, I cannot wait for more. :)
10/28/2004 c19
5Railway Station
It was a beautiful chapter, but it's a bit unclear. Did Mamoru die? And, is this the last chapter?

It was a beautiful chapter, but it's a bit unclear. Did Mamoru die? And, is this the last chapter?
10/19/2004 c19 AmarisD
oh.. I so touch.. the last chapter.. it look at live so deep.. I wonder how u can write this kind of thing so good..make me so anticipate the next chapters..
oh.. I so touch.. the last chapter.. it look at live so deep.. I wonder how u can write this kind of thing so good..make me so anticipate the next chapters..
10/18/2004 c19 v1786
Hi, your story is so good! :) It has such a plot line, and it keps the reader tuned into to see the next chapter and I can't wait for the next one :)
Hi, your story is so good! :) It has such a plot line, and it keps the reader tuned into to see the next chapter and I can't wait for the next one :)