for Lucy and Lisanna2/9/2017 c1 Guest
This is really good! You should keep going
This is really good! You should keep going
1/3/2017 c1 Guest
Clearly the answer here is a threesome.
Clearly the answer here is a threesome.
1/3/2017 c2 
1SerenaDragneel
Haha I laughed so hard when I read the part with Max. Also nice chapter and can't wait for the talk between Lucy and Lisanna and I am really happy that you don't make it with Lisanna being bad. For that a big THANK YOU!
1SerenaDragneelHaha I laughed so hard when I read the part with Max. Also nice chapter and can't wait for the talk between Lucy and Lisanna and I am really happy that you don't make it with Lisanna being bad. For that a big THANK YOU!
12/30/2016 c1 SerenaDragneel
To be honest I don't know what to think cause this story seems good and at the same time feels like a stupid 'Lucy revenge' story but I will follow this to see how it ends. I just hope it won't end up with Lisanna made evil or manipulative or lying.
To be honest I don't know what to think cause this story seems good and at the same time feels like a stupid 'Lucy revenge' story but I will follow this to see how it ends. I just hope it won't end up with Lisanna made evil or manipulative or lying.
12/29/2016 c1 Trax
You should update. I'm curious to see how it all plays out.
You should update. I'm curious to see how it all plays out.
12/29/2016 c1 3MarSofTheGalaxies
If you continue this I hope you tread carefully. This is a very tricky genre
3MarSofTheGalaxiesIf you continue this I hope you tread carefully. This is a very tricky genre
12/29/2016 c1 Guest
You are treading dangerous waters, any have tried ans failed with this trope.
You are treading dangerous waters, any have tried ans failed with this trope.
12/29/2016 c1 9FireFreedom
I think the story is worth telling but I also think it’s a dangerous story. It questions the feelings, loyalty, and bonds of everyone. Especially the main people involved and Lisanna’s family. And if I think where this plot is going, Lisanna is going have a big break down revealing the truth and revelation about Lucy.
9FireFreedomI think the story is worth telling but I also think it’s a dangerous story. It questions the feelings, loyalty, and bonds of everyone. Especially the main people involved and Lisanna’s family. And if I think where this plot is going, Lisanna is going have a big break down revealing the truth and revelation about Lucy.