for Innocent4/25/2020 c1 
30Th3F4lcon-Bl4ckBlu3
That's a good One-shot right there. I think you did a great job at reflecting how he was feeling about it, since he's probably the most innocent out of all the other characters (but has some inner craziness that shows up time to time).
I liked it, I don't know if this should be left as a One-shot or not, but if you continue with it, I'll surely be pleased to read more.
Good job!
30Th3F4lcon-Bl4ckBlu3That's a good One-shot right there. I think you did a great job at reflecting how he was feeling about it, since he's probably the most innocent out of all the other characters (but has some inner craziness that shows up time to time).
I liked it, I don't know if this should be left as a One-shot or not, but if you continue with it, I'll surely be pleased to read more.
Good job!
12/9/2018 c1 noname
(2) AND HE'S ONLY 18 FOR GOODNESS SAKE. cHild EASE URSELF. *CRI*
(2) AND HE'S ONLY 18 FOR GOODNESS SAKE. cHild EASE URSELF. *CRI*
12/9/2018 c1 noname
Ah my adorable enthusiastic gunslinger son. I love how you portray Calvin's guilt. Being raised in a strict religious household can do that to you. Being overly guilty for every misdeeds.
It hurts when he started to ask if he will be forgiven or if he wipe it clean enough, the sin will go away. Not a childish thinking, more like desperate reasoning to ease his worry. And dang, I just wanna hug him and cry.
He's just a bundle of anxiety with psychopathic tendencies who needs love. Great fic, thanks for sharing!
Ah my adorable enthusiastic gunslinger son. I love how you portray Calvin's guilt. Being raised in a strict religious household can do that to you. Being overly guilty for every misdeeds.
It hurts when he started to ask if he will be forgiven or if he wipe it clean enough, the sin will go away. Not a childish thinking, more like desperate reasoning to ease his worry. And dang, I just wanna hug him and cry.
He's just a bundle of anxiety with psychopathic tendencies who needs love. Great fic, thanks for sharing!
4/10/2018 c1 1TalaAzar
I honestly hadn't thought much about what must've been going through Freckle's head after his "hit-'em-up" spree. You did a really good job at bringing it to light though. Keep up the good writing skills!
1TalaAzarI honestly hadn't thought much about what must've been going through Freckle's head after his "hit-'em-up" spree. You did a really good job at bringing it to light though. Keep up the good writing skills!
1/16/2017 c1 Cocoa
Wow! This is a neat fanfic, even though it is short. Calvin/Freckles is my favorite character too.
Wow! This is a neat fanfic, even though it is short. Calvin/Freckles is my favorite character too.