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7/30/2017 c4 2SuperApplePie
The pacing is nice and the story is interesting. However, there are a distinct lack of commas throughout the whole chapter and you keep switching from past-tense to present-tense. You're a solid writer but it wouldn't hurt to edit your chapters a bit more.
6/22/2017 c4 21HyperA1985
I am looking forward to chapter 5 and I hope Naruto goes through Pokémon evolution.
1/1/2017 c1 11ENDDRAGON369
Mordred (Saber of Red) is that you.

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