for Coconut Trees1/4/2017 c2 Dizzy Lizzy.60
Planes always scare me. I was in Detroit when I first saw this story posted. I waited until I arrived back home in Maryland before I read it. Did not want to read about a plane crash when I was headed to the .
Darcy needs a Doctor himself.
GW is on the plane, as is most of the gang I see.
I hope they are rescued soon. What's next, eating each other? Hey, it's already happened. I'm hoping for a rescue. That would make a nice next chapter.
Cheers.
Planes always scare me. I was in Detroit when I first saw this story posted. I waited until I arrived back home in Maryland before I read it. Did not want to read about a plane crash when I was headed to the .
Darcy needs a Doctor himself.
GW is on the plane, as is most of the gang I see.
I hope they are rescued soon. What's next, eating each other? Hey, it's already happened. I'm hoping for a rescue. That would make a nice next chapter.
Cheers.
1/4/2017 c1 Dizzy Lizzy.60
wow! That was one bumpy ride. Lol. Poor Darcy, sick and stranded. I hope they can survive this calamity. What a nightmare.
Nice beginning. Cheers.
wow! That was one bumpy ride. Lol. Poor Darcy, sick and stranded. I hope they can survive this calamity. What a nightmare.
Nice beginning. Cheers.
1/4/2017 c2 42isIndeedTheAnswer
I love you list of characters, very clever. Lost in the snow, your title is ironic. I am sure however that you will be weaving that into the story as we go. Thank you for the chapter.
I love you list of characters, very clever. Lost in the snow, your title is ironic. I am sure however that you will be weaving that into the story as we go. Thank you for the chapter.
1/4/2017 c1 42isIndeedTheAnswer
I always want the first chapter of any story to "have me at hello," and you certainly did. I am in!
Really good start. First person is not my favourite narrative and hard to pull off, so good luck to you on this bumpy ride you have started.
I always want the first chapter of any story to "have me at hello," and you certainly did. I am in!
Really good start. First person is not my favourite narrative and hard to pull off, so good luck to you on this bumpy ride you have started.
1/4/2017 c2 Guest
Crap this is a fantastic story!
Crap this is a fantastic story!
1/4/2017 c2 Lenniee
I happened upon this story today and I devoured both chapters. I absolutely love it! It's like being in what remains of the plane with them. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon!
I happened upon this story today and I devoured both chapters. I absolutely love it! It's like being in what remains of the plane with them. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon!
1/4/2017 c2 
2Rei Jarren02
I like it! Just so I can be ready for it, is this going in the direction of the movie "Alive"? The one based on the Argentine(?) Rugby team that crashed in the mountains?
2Rei Jarren02I like it! Just so I can be ready for it, is this going in the direction of the movie "Alive"? The one based on the Argentine(?) Rugby team that crashed in the mountains?
1/4/2017 c2 Moltz
Your final sentence tells me Elizabeth made it to the morning. How many others from the list survived the night?
I'm curious as to the previous interactions between Darcy and Wickham. How much disdain does Darcy hold for this man that he warned the women to stay away. More than likely, all those but the actress Lydia will heed the warning.
Your final sentence tells me Elizabeth made it to the morning. How many others from the list survived the night?
I'm curious as to the previous interactions between Darcy and Wickham. How much disdain does Darcy hold for this man that he warned the women to stay away. More than likely, all those but the actress Lydia will heed the warning.
1/4/2017 c1 6JavaMasta
Wow, what a beginning!
As usual, you describe the situation in such amazingly colourful brushstrokes, almost as if you had been there yourself.
Can't wait to read more!
6JavaMastaWow, what a beginning!
As usual, you describe the situation in such amazingly colourful brushstrokes, almost as if you had been there yourself.
Can't wait to read more!
1/4/2017 c2 bon123
Amazing. I'm already feel so hooked and invested in this plot line. Great characters. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you. Much love.
Amazing. I'm already feel so hooked and invested in this plot line. Great characters. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you. Much love.
1/4/2017 c2 Guest
Wow, fantastic!
Wow, fantastic!
1/4/2017 c2 13archy12
Good heavens, this chapter gave me chills!
one thing I have noticed in your stories is the intensity of feeling between the lead characters, even though they might hide it or not display it much. Here too it is clear that Darcy and Elizabeth feel a lot for each-other, however distant they might have remained in the past.
Then there are the life-threatening situations they find themselves in. All in all, it makes for some compulsive reading.
13archy12Good heavens, this chapter gave me chills!
one thing I have noticed in your stories is the intensity of feeling between the lead characters, even though they might hide it or not display it much. Here too it is clear that Darcy and Elizabeth feel a lot for each-other, however distant they might have remained in the past.
Then there are the life-threatening situations they find themselves in. All in all, it makes for some compulsive reading.
1/4/2017 c2 dreamiedreamer
There's definitely no coconut trees here. They couldn't have crashed in a more hostile environment.
There's definitely no coconut trees here. They couldn't have crashed in a more hostile environment.