
1/3/2017 c2 rosewoter
im loving this so far, reaaly intrigued. one thing thoug, maybe i misread but your character fatemeh is a boy. just wanted to let you know that fatima/fatemeh is a persian/arabic/etc name for a girl not a boy. apologies if i misread. cant wait for the next chapter )
im loving this so far, reaaly intrigued. one thing thoug, maybe i misread but your character fatemeh is a boy. just wanted to let you know that fatima/fatemeh is a persian/arabic/etc name for a girl not a boy. apologies if i misread. cant wait for the next chapter )
1/2/2017 c1 Yukta Sharma
I'm still trying to control my breathing here. It was like I was there. I wish E&D aren't injured much. Can't wait to see where this is going.
I'm still trying to control my breathing here. It was like I was there. I wish E&D aren't injured much. Can't wait to see where this is going.
1/2/2017 c1 Delete4123
Already hooked! You are such a talented writer! I have read a few P&P fanfics, although I usually stick to Twilight. But, I already love it!
Already hooked! You are such a talented writer! I have read a few P&P fanfics, although I usually stick to Twilight. But, I already love it!
1/2/2017 c1 Elise de Sallier
Wonderful...as always. Sorry I couldn't login to review, but I'm on holidays and my silly phone wouldn't allow it. I look forward to reading more of your fantastic stories,whatever the characters are called!
Wonderful...as always. Sorry I couldn't login to review, but I'm on holidays and my silly phone wouldn't allow it. I look forward to reading more of your fantastic stories,whatever the characters are called!
1/1/2017 c1 Mstron2
Aaaaahhh! You did it! You left us there! Not for long I hope. ;-D let's just hope they don't have to start gnawing on each other's arms before the end. Heheh! So sad they didn't crash in Belize.
Aaaaahhh! You did it! You left us there! Not for long I hope. ;-D let's just hope they don't have to start gnawing on each other's arms before the end. Heheh! So sad they didn't crash in Belize.
1/1/2017 c1 Mooah
I'm very much looking forward to embarking on another reading journey with you whether it's Twilight or P&P.
Exciting start and can't wait to read more (:
I'm very much looking forward to embarking on another reading journey with you whether it's Twilight or P&P.
Exciting start and can't wait to read more (:
1/1/2017 c1 Ruchi
This is amazing
This is amazing