for Coconut Trees8/3/2022 c21 Cellepoz
That was a truly amazing story. If you changed the names you could publish as a unique and original story and make it a best seller for sure. So this would hands down be my most favorite modern P&P. You are a hugely talented writer and I look forward to reading whatever you bless us with next.
That was a truly amazing story. If you changed the names you could publish as a unique and original story and make it a best seller for sure. So this would hands down be my most favorite modern P&P. You are a hugely talented writer and I look forward to reading whatever you bless us with next.
8/3/2022 c21 MK543
Ah, so sweet. I rather thought Elizabeth a tad snarky on their hoity-toity date. Sort of 'teenage' stuff. But she came around in the end. I hope she published a book of her photos, paying dividends to the people in them.
Ah, so sweet. I rather thought Elizabeth a tad snarky on their hoity-toity date. Sort of 'teenage' stuff. But she came around in the end. I hope she published a book of her photos, paying dividends to the people in them.
8/3/2022 c1 Guest
Coconut Trees was great, but I seriously need an epilogue!
Coconut Trees was great, but I seriously need an epilogue!
8/3/2022 c21 
3ma28cullen
This turned out to be my favorite story and the second fanfic I’ve read that’s not from twilight. I’m so pleased and in love. Thank you for sharing it with us.
3ma28cullenThis turned out to be my favorite story and the second fanfic I’ve read that’s not from twilight. I’m so pleased and in love. Thank you for sharing it with us.
8/3/2022 c21 Guest
Loved this so much!
Loved this so much!
8/3/2022 c20 RandyWriter
OK, so much here, and most of it is so amazing, and heartwarming and perfect, well, except Elizabeth's family! What a bunch of idiots! Truly idiots, and I'm so so so glad that Darcy is finally by her side, and has her best interests, in mind. He's ready to end all of them, from ever spending time with Elizabeth again, if they can't respect the love of his life. He can finally see what a bunch of jerks they are and how long she went undiagnosed because they didn't want to admit that she had a type of disability! So sad, but finally she knows her worth, that she can build a transmitter even with a disability. Had to smile to see how shocked and happy Elizabeth was to see Jane and finally to meet baby Aiden. Just visualizing the moment that big Darcy was cradling the baby, and showing Elizabeth how to do it, and then she made him so so happy to hear that she wanted to have one, a baby, preferably after their first date. LOL! Had me laughing how far these two have come. Just talking about their FIRST baby had me swooning. Just loved it all! So many wonderful laughs, and kisses! Swoon! You can make a story so visual by so many of the special moments that you capture, and the way Darcy reaches out to touch Elizabeth's hand, or they brush hair from each other's faces, or kiss a shoulder or hand, just absolutely makes the story complete. Finally, as I pictured from almost the beginning, they are back under the twinkling lights, which were increased by Darcy, and it feels so comfortable. Just like being on that wretched plane crash site, snuggling, but now, they are safe. So damn wonderful. Thank you, thank you, thank you. This story is the highlight of my reading list.
OK, so much here, and most of it is so amazing, and heartwarming and perfect, well, except Elizabeth's family! What a bunch of idiots! Truly idiots, and I'm so so so glad that Darcy is finally by her side, and has her best interests, in mind. He's ready to end all of them, from ever spending time with Elizabeth again, if they can't respect the love of his life. He can finally see what a bunch of jerks they are and how long she went undiagnosed because they didn't want to admit that she had a type of disability! So sad, but finally she knows her worth, that she can build a transmitter even with a disability. Had to smile to see how shocked and happy Elizabeth was to see Jane and finally to meet baby Aiden. Just visualizing the moment that big Darcy was cradling the baby, and showing Elizabeth how to do it, and then she made him so so happy to hear that she wanted to have one, a baby, preferably after their first date. LOL! Had me laughing how far these two have come. Just talking about their FIRST baby had me swooning. Just loved it all! So many wonderful laughs, and kisses! Swoon! You can make a story so visual by so many of the special moments that you capture, and the way Darcy reaches out to touch Elizabeth's hand, or they brush hair from each other's faces, or kiss a shoulder or hand, just absolutely makes the story complete. Finally, as I pictured from almost the beginning, they are back under the twinkling lights, which were increased by Darcy, and it feels so comfortable. Just like being on that wretched plane crash site, snuggling, but now, they are safe. So damn wonderful. Thank you, thank you, thank you. This story is the highlight of my reading list.
8/3/2022 c19 RandyWriter
Ok, so I am such a failure. I was away and didn't get to do any reviews for three of the most amazing chapters EVER! Let me tell you, when Darcy is fighting against the tubing to say the word "Elizabeth", it had me teary, but when they remove the tubing and he finally gets to murmur the word "Elizabeth" again, and the doctor's response of not knowing an Elizabeth, and Darcy knocking things over about her height and her eyes that can see into your soul! Damn had me swooning. Loved, loved, loved that the doctor agreed with his description and also called Darcy out on not marrying her! Loved it! The whole damn thing! Swoon! I mean, how everyone is so protective of each other in the plane family, and how Roger came in to take the heat for the money that everyone needed, but of course Darcy could care less. He always meant for her to have use of his money, "the love of his life"! Swoon! I have to say, the way you captured the moment when Darcy's eyes are watching Elizabeth talking with everyone, wearing his jumper, and then their eyes meet! OOOOMMMMMGGGG! You nailed it! Nailed it! The touches, the kisses, the moments when Darcy hears again that Elizabeth loves him, so incredible! Loved it all! Hearing Orrri didn't make it, after all of that, was sad, but more realistic ! How you show the passion between Darcy and Elizabeth, from the stares, the touches, the kisses! Perfect, absofreakinlutely perfect! That picture of Elizabeth in his wallet, and how Darcy made a deal to look at it every six months, loved it! Neither one of them could give up on one another, avoiding places that the other could be! Classic! I do have to say I can sympathize with the abundance of emails that never get looked at, that's my problem too, lol. Loved how they finally agree on a first date, well, out of the house date, and want to stay together. Darcy said it so well, that he tried living without her, and even tried dating, but couldn't even go into the restaurant. They are finally being completely honest, and laying their cards on the table. How much they love one another, and that there isn't a universe out there, that has them as JUST friends! So powerful. Darcy isn't happy about where she lives, but he is willing to try to let her have her say in this relationship. So Sweet! So Swoony! Loved it all! How Bingley immediately notices the tenderness and hand holding of the couple, and is so happy! Such a damn powerful story! Yes, Yes YEEESSS!
Ok, so I am such a failure. I was away and didn't get to do any reviews for three of the most amazing chapters EVER! Let me tell you, when Darcy is fighting against the tubing to say the word "Elizabeth", it had me teary, but when they remove the tubing and he finally gets to murmur the word "Elizabeth" again, and the doctor's response of not knowing an Elizabeth, and Darcy knocking things over about her height and her eyes that can see into your soul! Damn had me swooning. Loved, loved, loved that the doctor agreed with his description and also called Darcy out on not marrying her! Loved it! The whole damn thing! Swoon! I mean, how everyone is so protective of each other in the plane family, and how Roger came in to take the heat for the money that everyone needed, but of course Darcy could care less. He always meant for her to have use of his money, "the love of his life"! Swoon! I have to say, the way you captured the moment when Darcy's eyes are watching Elizabeth talking with everyone, wearing his jumper, and then their eyes meet! OOOOMMMMMGGGG! You nailed it! Nailed it! The touches, the kisses, the moments when Darcy hears again that Elizabeth loves him, so incredible! Loved it all! Hearing Orrri didn't make it, after all of that, was sad, but more realistic ! How you show the passion between Darcy and Elizabeth, from the stares, the touches, the kisses! Perfect, absofreakinlutely perfect! That picture of Elizabeth in his wallet, and how Darcy made a deal to look at it every six months, loved it! Neither one of them could give up on one another, avoiding places that the other could be! Classic! I do have to say I can sympathize with the abundance of emails that never get looked at, that's my problem too, lol. Loved how they finally agree on a first date, well, out of the house date, and want to stay together. Darcy said it so well, that he tried living without her, and even tried dating, but couldn't even go into the restaurant. They are finally being completely honest, and laying their cards on the table. How much they love one another, and that there isn't a universe out there, that has them as JUST friends! So powerful. Darcy isn't happy about where she lives, but he is willing to try to let her have her say in this relationship. So Sweet! So Swoony! Loved it all! How Bingley immediately notices the tenderness and hand holding of the couple, and is so happy! Such a damn powerful story! Yes, Yes YEEESSS!
8/3/2022 c21 6Windchimed
Thank you so much for finishing this story quickly, and for sharing it with all of us. The story developed well and gripped me more and more strongly as it went. I'm pleased to see ODC get their happy ending, particularly after they went through such a struggle to get there. It was also nice to see confirmation of both Elizabeth's dyslexia and her giftedness; she deserved that validation.
On that note, thank you for showing the effects of ignored/undiagnosed learning differences. No child should have to grow up the way Elizabeth did, and I hope that others will connect to that part of your story and will learn from it.
Thank you again!
6WindchimedThank you so much for finishing this story quickly, and for sharing it with all of us. The story developed well and gripped me more and more strongly as it went. I'm pleased to see ODC get their happy ending, particularly after they went through such a struggle to get there. It was also nice to see confirmation of both Elizabeth's dyslexia and her giftedness; she deserved that validation.
On that note, thank you for showing the effects of ignored/undiagnosed learning differences. No child should have to grow up the way Elizabeth did, and I hope that others will connect to that part of your story and will learn from it.
Thank you again!
8/3/2022 c21 ashiana
Absolutely love how it all came together in the end! Thank you for giving us this amazing story xo
Absolutely love how it all came together in the end! Thank you for giving us this amazing story xo
8/3/2022 c21 2Sydneyer
Please please write an epilogue! Another chapter! Can’t say goodbye to these two characters. I love your version of Darcy and Elizabeth! Story must go on, the three kids! Anyway thank you for writing such a fantastic story, I will miss these two “you chose me” he said. I love your characters and thanks again!
2SydneyerPlease please write an epilogue! Another chapter! Can’t say goodbye to these two characters. I love your version of Darcy and Elizabeth! Story must go on, the three kids! Anyway thank you for writing such a fantastic story, I will miss these two “you chose me” he said. I love your characters and thanks again!
8/3/2022 c21 liysyl
Awesome ending to an awesome story I hope I see another one. Thanks again for sharing your twist.
Awesome ending to an awesome story I hope I see another one. Thanks again for sharing your twist.
8/3/2022 c21 1JulieToo
Such a joy to read! Very glad they received the HEA Elizabeth and Darcy deserve.
I have to admit I was frightened Darcy would not recover or would not be healthy but of course, this is fanfiction and I really shouldn't expect the poor outcome. hahaha.
Stay healthy as you possibly can.
1JulieTooSuch a joy to read! Very glad they received the HEA Elizabeth and Darcy deserve.
I have to admit I was frightened Darcy would not recover or would not be healthy but of course, this is fanfiction and I really shouldn't expect the poor outcome. hahaha.
Stay healthy as you possibly can.
8/3/2022 c21 jojo203
Thank you for this story. A sweet closing for ODC who have been through so much. I like how you developed Elizabeth’s character.
Thank you for this story. A sweet closing for ODC who have been through so much. I like how you developed Elizabeth’s character.