for Coconut Trees1/23/2024 c19 AGreyFantail
Darcy's first priority (Elizabeth!) and subsequent panic when emerging from the coma were adorable. So they both tried contacting each other and failed, but here they are on another plane, having a proper conversation. Yes!
Darcy's first priority (Elizabeth!) and subsequent panic when emerging from the coma were adorable. So they both tried contacting each other and failed, but here they are on another plane, having a proper conversation. Yes!
1/23/2024 c18 AGreyFantail
I really like how you're telling this heartaching, fraught story on the one hand while on the other filling it with details such as candy brands, visa issues in Siberia, the US term for 24-hour time, and country calling codes, making it all the more real.
I really like how you're telling this heartaching, fraught story on the one hand while on the other filling it with details such as candy brands, visa issues in Siberia, the US term for 24-hour time, and country calling codes, making it all the more real.
1/23/2024 c17 AGreyFantail
The feelings they're all having are entirely believable, as are the group dynamics. I'm amazed at how you can write so many people with each being relatable in some way.
The feelings they're all having are entirely believable, as are the group dynamics. I'm amazed at how you can write so many people with each being relatable in some way.
1/23/2024 c16 AGreyFantail
This was an engrossing rescue. Thank you for choosing to go with an international-cooperation effort.
This was an engrossing rescue. Thank you for choosing to go with an international-cooperation effort.
1/23/2024 c14 AGreyFantail
This. I'm not wiping my face, I'm not. Well, maybe just a little under my eyes. Maybe. This chapter was heartbreaking and poignant and tender and...well, please, let them stay together.
This. I'm not wiping my face, I'm not. Well, maybe just a little under my eyes. Maybe. This chapter was heartbreaking and poignant and tender and...well, please, let them stay together.
1/23/2024 c12 AGreyFantail
Seriously, you're tugging the heartstrings left and right. All that heartache and Darcy's obvious love (he's wearing the bracelet and he has the box in his luggage!), and then Kitty's shenanigans, and his statement that Elizabeth is all that matters, and the kiss, and then Darcy's question about second chances. You're truly excellent at the tugging.
Seriously, you're tugging the heartstrings left and right. All that heartache and Darcy's obvious love (he's wearing the bracelet and he has the box in his luggage!), and then Kitty's shenanigans, and his statement that Elizabeth is all that matters, and the kiss, and then Darcy's question about second chances. You're truly excellent at the tugging.
1/23/2024 c11 AGreyFantail
So beautiful! There's the hope that Sam brings, the joy in finding some checked baggage and the oh-so heartwarming story of the bracelet. But...there's the pneumonia still.
So beautiful! There's the hope that Sam brings, the joy in finding some checked baggage and the oh-so heartwarming story of the bracelet. But...there's the pneumonia still.
1/23/2024 c10 AGreyFantail
Modern Wickham, Lydia and Catherine de Bourgh are true to their originals. I enjoyed the sweet moment Elizabeth and Darcy shared as they were waking up.
Modern Wickham, Lydia and Catherine de Bourgh are true to their originals. I enjoyed the sweet moment Elizabeth and Darcy shared as they were waking up.
1/23/2024 c9 AGreyFantail
The Something Good promised in this chapter's title must be the communication between the two of them, for learning more of what has happened (in Darcy's life, and in the extent of the failure of Elizabeth's parents and family to provide any sort of love or support) really is Something Sad. I can hear Darcy's love for Elizabeth just in how he breathes her name.
The Something Good promised in this chapter's title must be the communication between the two of them, for learning more of what has happened (in Darcy's life, and in the extent of the failure of Elizabeth's parents and family to provide any sort of love or support) really is Something Sad. I can hear Darcy's love for Elizabeth just in how he breathes her name.
1/23/2024 c8 AGreyFantail
Oh my, the heartstrings were well and truly pulled here. So much devastation. Your writing is incredibly compelling.
Oh my, the heartstrings were well and truly pulled here. So much devastation. Your writing is incredibly compelling.
1/23/2024 c4 AGreyFantail
I like that they are dependent on each other, if only to regulate body temps!
I like that they are dependent on each other, if only to regulate body temps!
1/23/2024 c3 AGreyFantail
The situation they're all in is bleak and the tentative way Darcy and Elizabeth talk to each other just makes me want to know how they're ever going to overcome whatever their modern Hunsford was.
The situation they're all in is bleak and the tentative way Darcy and Elizabeth talk to each other just makes me want to know how they're ever going to overcome whatever their modern Hunsford was.