for Coconut Trees11/28/2021 c7 DimmDimms
Enjoying reading about what came before the crash. Simultaneously super interested in what will happen after the crash!
Enjoying reading about what came before the crash. Simultaneously super interested in what will happen after the crash!
11/28/2021 c7 Guest
This is such a sweet chapter. I know this is going to end up sad, but such an amazing start to their relationship.
This is such a sweet chapter. I know this is going to end up sad, but such an amazing start to their relationship.
11/28/2021 c7 Moltz
Somehow Elizabeth already knew that a long term relationship would be a lost cause between them.
Somehow Elizabeth already knew that a long term relationship would be a lost cause between them.
11/28/2021 c7 daphnie
The beginning of their relationship is so beautiful and precious, but I can't help but feel anxious because some thing obviously went very wrong. Fills my heart and makes it ache at the same time, if it makes sense.
I also can't help but notice the similarly Darcy and Elizabeth have with Edwards and Bella's form Alaska and Emma Matthews. I love it. I have re read those stories so many times and just yearned for a little bit more of them. This couple in a very strange way makes me feel like a little bit more of them. I know I sound insane. Lol. You writing in absolutely amazing and if you have any original work, I'd be honoured to have them on my shelf. XO
The beginning of their relationship is so beautiful and precious, but I can't help but feel anxious because some thing obviously went very wrong. Fills my heart and makes it ache at the same time, if it makes sense.
I also can't help but notice the similarly Darcy and Elizabeth have with Edwards and Bella's form Alaska and Emma Matthews. I love it. I have re read those stories so many times and just yearned for a little bit more of them. This couple in a very strange way makes me feel like a little bit more of them. I know I sound insane. Lol. You writing in absolutely amazing and if you have any original work, I'd be honoured to have them on my shelf. XO
11/28/2021 c7 dpennell007
Well, let's see if I can review on the actual chapter I just read instead of the previous one like I did the other day.. I am both delighted AND devastated about your latest update. How in the hell did things go from SO beautiful to zero? (yes, I'll wait...)
Well, let's see if I can review on the actual chapter I just read instead of the previous one like I did the other day.. I am both delighted AND devastated about your latest update. How in the hell did things go from SO beautiful to zero? (yes, I'll wait...)
11/28/2021 c7 
2EmlynMara
So sad her history, and his words, made her feel so inadequate and such a failure, made her feel she had to hide who and what she really is, and had her convinced the relationship was a dead end and doomed to failure.
2EmlynMaraSo sad her history, and his words, made her feel so inadequate and such a failure, made her feel she had to hide who and what she really is, and had her convinced the relationship was a dead end and doomed to failure.
11/28/2021 c7 24Ms Pimprenelle
I did wonder about the title!
So... is it weird that I want to go back to the crash site? Perhaps it’s because that all this flashbacky happiness will not last, and that though it’s awfully cold and all that, they have been given a new chance...
I do like reading this backstory bit, though, and I suspect it’ll flow more easily on re-reading, once the story is complete.
Thank you!
24Ms PimprenelleI did wonder about the title!
So... is it weird that I want to go back to the crash site? Perhaps it’s because that all this flashbacky happiness will not last, and that though it’s awfully cold and all that, they have been given a new chance...
I do like reading this backstory bit, though, and I suspect it’ll flow more easily on re-reading, once the story is complete.
Thank you!