
12/13/2020 c1
13excessivelyperky
Oh, yes, I can see how a frightened little boy wants to protect those even smaller.

Oh, yes, I can see how a frightened little boy wants to protect those even smaller.
9/8/2020 c1
59GeezerWench
Very well done. Percy was old enough to know that very bad things were happening, even if he didn't know what they were. He took his father's directions very much to heart.

Very well done. Percy was old enough to know that very bad things were happening, even if he didn't know what they were. He took his father's directions very much to heart.
1/1/2018 c1
1purpleread
Aw the makings of a Percy. Those last two paragraphs are the most adorable things my heart 3.

Aw the makings of a Percy. Those last two paragraphs are the most adorable things my heart 3.
1/1/2017 c1 Sajappel
Some of the best descriptive writing I have ever read. Elafi, keep it up. I look for your writing, because you notice all the details. And funny to picture Fred and George as little babes in a crib.
Some of the best descriptive writing I have ever read. Elafi, keep it up. I look for your writing, because you notice all the details. And funny to picture Fred and George as little babes in a crib.