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6/16/2018 c1 Guest
Your stories are rubbish and a piece of from this site once and for all...Useless and you have no talent at all.
Your stories are rubbish and a piece of from this site once and for all...Useless and you have no talent at all.
6/16/2018 c1 Guest
Azula's Powahh you are as stupis as the author stories are do not deserve author and you also should leave this site. Now i see two stupids in .You are useless as Glow in the Rain a stupid is a useless scum and so you are.
Azula's Powahh you are as stupis as the author stories are do not deserve author and you also should leave this site. Now i see two stupids in .You are useless as Glow in the Rain a stupid is a useless scum and so you are.
6/16/2018 c1 Guest
Azula's Powahh you are as stupid as the author author is one of the worst that i have ever seen.I haven
Azula's Powahh you are as stupid as the author author is one of the worst that i have ever seen.I haven
2/10/2018 c1 
3Azula's Powahh
never mind the stupid dude that tells you it's bad, please continue this!
3Azula's Powahhnever mind the stupid dude that tells you it's bad, please continue this!
2/10/2018 c1 Azula's Powahh
never mind the stupid dude that tells you it's bad, please continue this!
never mind the stupid dude that tells you it's bad, please continue this!
6/4/2017 c1 Guest
You should stop writing.
You should stop writing.
6/4/2017 c1 Guest
Your stories are update again. You should delete all your stories at once.
Your stories are update again. You should delete all your stories at once.
6/4/2017 c1 Guest
The worst story i have evrer read. You should delete this story at once
The worst story i have evrer read. You should delete this story at once
1/25/2017 c1 22Alyson Metallium
Hah, this is awesome. I love the flowers, so typical and yet surprising for Neuro. Then again, the're Hell Flowers, so it makes total sense. Poor Yako, I hope she doesn't have to walk around with that thing on her shoulders for much longer. *laughs*
22Alyson MetalliumHah, this is awesome. I love the flowers, so typical and yet surprising for Neuro. Then again, the're Hell Flowers, so it makes total sense. Poor Yako, I hope she doesn't have to walk around with that thing on her shoulders for much longer. *laughs*
1/3/2017 c1 Guest
Ahaha! This was good! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story! It's so nice to find a decently written fic for this series, since a lot of them seem to be poorly written for some reason. I hope you finish this story because a good percentage of the decently written stories for this series (which are few and far between) seem to have been abandoned, and that is very frustrating for me as a reader. I may not write stories, but I will give constructive criticism, which is my contribution to the fandoms I read, but I can't really give constructive criticism for a story that is incomplete and hasn't been updated for a number of years. Of course I'm not demanding you rush this (that's rude and unreasonable), I would just very much appreciate it if you finished this.
Ahaha! This was good! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story! It's so nice to find a decently written fic for this series, since a lot of them seem to be poorly written for some reason. I hope you finish this story because a good percentage of the decently written stories for this series (which are few and far between) seem to have been abandoned, and that is very frustrating for me as a reader. I may not write stories, but I will give constructive criticism, which is my contribution to the fandoms I read, but I can't really give constructive criticism for a story that is incomplete and hasn't been updated for a number of years. Of course I'm not demanding you rush this (that's rude and unreasonable), I would just very much appreciate it if you finished this.