for Long Live the King8/17/2017 c5 Bob Ross
I'm just here patiently waiting on the Jaune/Nora/Velvet threeway thats in the works.
I'm just here patiently waiting on the Jaune/Nora/Velvet threeway thats in the works.
6/18/2017 c4 AwesomexNinja
I know this might be unneeded, but I do feel like sharing this. Seeing as how Jaune has a very...involved relationship with Nora (Even though I don't see that as a thing) it can be possible for him to be paired up with Nora. There's also Weiss to consider as well, she also does have a very good chance to be shipped as well. So if you want, you could input a love triangle in the story if you want to and it could actually be related to the plot as Cinder could pick up on this and exploit it to hell to advance her goals.
I know this might be unneeded, but I do feel like sharing this. Seeing as how Jaune has a very...involved relationship with Nora (Even though I don't see that as a thing) it can be possible for him to be paired up with Nora. There's also Weiss to consider as well, she also does have a very good chance to be shipped as well. So if you want, you could input a love triangle in the story if you want to and it could actually be related to the plot as Cinder could pick up on this and exploit it to hell to advance her goals.
6/18/2017 c4 JustAFool
Oh god, I'm just waiting for Jaune to get up and start dancing now that he's had the skull and cross canes brew.
Oh god, I'm just waiting for Jaune to get up and start dancing now that he's had the skull and cross canes brew.
4/20/2017 c3 
1TalonIbnLaAhad
So, just found this and am already hooked despite the lack of bloody coups and wars. Politics, while boring as hell, can become oh so messy in time. And if the hints at Cinder are any indication, then a bloody coups a given at this point. Strain the marriage using Emerald, secure half the noble houses to her faction with Mercury and herself, as well as her recently divorced sister, and then reach out to Whitley of Atlas to start aggravating the warhawk party that definitely exists there to start a war and bring the the two nation's to blows. Whitley will likely unite Atlas and Mantle against a common enemy by using Jaune's adultery and potentially an assassination attempt on Weiss (organised by Cinder and the other houses to fan the flame of hate). Of course, Vale will turn to Vacuo for assistance, but Cinder (who I'm certain is capable of kinslaying to further her goals) will probably arrange for her sister to be killed and strain or out right destroy relations with them thus marking Vale as the Nazi Germany of Remnant. Of course, war and hate brings on Grimm, but Cinder will keep pushing buttons and forcing engagements (both marital and martial) to the point that a cease fire isn't even considered and eventually the world burns to ashes. I'm not sure what Mistral will do to get involved, but I'm betting something's in the works! Of course I'm likely wrong, and may be completely of my rocker, but eh. This is my way of having fun by guessing the future! Also wondering if Salem will be involved in this story, or if her existence is too conflicting with the setting/ planning. And will Raven be involved with the enemy or a sort of vigilante trying to defend Vale without restriction.
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next and how things get better or worse. (Likely worse). Good luck and take care!
1TalonIbnLaAhadSo, just found this and am already hooked despite the lack of bloody coups and wars. Politics, while boring as hell, can become oh so messy in time. And if the hints at Cinder are any indication, then a bloody coups a given at this point. Strain the marriage using Emerald, secure half the noble houses to her faction with Mercury and herself, as well as her recently divorced sister, and then reach out to Whitley of Atlas to start aggravating the warhawk party that definitely exists there to start a war and bring the the two nation's to blows. Whitley will likely unite Atlas and Mantle against a common enemy by using Jaune's adultery and potentially an assassination attempt on Weiss (organised by Cinder and the other houses to fan the flame of hate). Of course, Vale will turn to Vacuo for assistance, but Cinder (who I'm certain is capable of kinslaying to further her goals) will probably arrange for her sister to be killed and strain or out right destroy relations with them thus marking Vale as the Nazi Germany of Remnant. Of course, war and hate brings on Grimm, but Cinder will keep pushing buttons and forcing engagements (both marital and martial) to the point that a cease fire isn't even considered and eventually the world burns to ashes. I'm not sure what Mistral will do to get involved, but I'm betting something's in the works! Of course I'm likely wrong, and may be completely of my rocker, but eh. This is my way of having fun by guessing the future! Also wondering if Salem will be involved in this story, or if her existence is too conflicting with the setting/ planning. And will Raven be involved with the enemy or a sort of vigilante trying to defend Vale without restriction.
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next and how things get better or worse. (Likely worse). Good luck and take care!
4/15/2017 c3 Guest
Interesting story
Interesting story
4/17/2017 c3 Slothful
I'm liking the story so far. My only problem is the NSFW scenes. They just sorta feel unnecessary.
I'm liking the story so far. My only problem is the NSFW scenes. They just sorta feel unnecessary.
4/15/2017 c3 campione278
Well white knight is my favorite but I do wonder what would it will be if that isn't it .
Well white knight is my favorite but I do wonder what would it will be if that isn't it .
1/19/2017 c2 5Gilgamesh The King of Heroes
I sense an arranged marriage. I wonder how Jaune will take this? Hopefully not well.
5Gilgamesh The King of HeroesI sense an arranged marriage. I wonder how Jaune will take this? Hopefully not well.