for A Journey Anew5/30/2024 c5 Guest
I hope you continue this story
I hope you continue this story
9/7/2022 c4 Axagon99d
Ur story is disappointing Laffy will never allow kuro join his crew he said so himself u re d kind of pple I hate bcos he ws Goin to hurt his nakama
Ur story is disappointing Laffy will never allow kuro join his crew he said so himself u re d kind of pple I hate bcos he ws Goin to hurt his nakama
8/25/2022 c2 
3Reishin Amara
Sadly no tag for Uta yet either..can't wait til people start doing fics where she and luffy start off together. Kinda wonder why Shanks didn't leave her with luffy.
3Reishin AmaraSadly no tag for Uta yet either..can't wait til people start doing fics where she and luffy start off together. Kinda wonder why Shanks didn't leave her with luffy.
6/7/2022 c2 Guest
If this was the gum-gum fruit’s real awakening Luffy would’ve just turned into the Sun god Nika.
If this was the gum-gum fruit’s real awakening Luffy would’ve just turned into the Sun god Nika.
11/8/2021 c5 Drax Demonix
Please continue i cant wait for next chapter. Also i was wondering if you were gonna add Apis, the girl who ate the Whisper-Whisper fruit (hiso hiso no mi), to the crew. Anyway i hope your gonna continue it and i wish you luck!
Please continue i cant wait for next chapter. Also i was wondering if you were gonna add Apis, the girl who ate the Whisper-Whisper fruit (hiso hiso no mi), to the crew. Anyway i hope your gonna continue it and i wish you luck!
10/14/2021 c4 sbag
Wow so she learns that this fruit is worth more than her family's wealth, eats it, and shoots him down all in like a two hour period.
Usopp got hard shafted in this chapter. Loses a very valuable fruit that could have been very useful in his hands with his knowledge from the Boing Archipelago, struggles in a fight with Jango, gets shot down with the "Your like a brother to me" excuse. (Never liked this excuse when it comes from only children. How would they know what having a sibling feels like? IDK just always feels hollow. I'd prefer that she'd just gone Shirahoshi on him and tell him he's not her type)
Wow so she learns that this fruit is worth more than her family's wealth, eats it, and shoots him down all in like a two hour period.
Usopp got hard shafted in this chapter. Loses a very valuable fruit that could have been very useful in his hands with his knowledge from the Boing Archipelago, struggles in a fight with Jango, gets shot down with the "Your like a brother to me" excuse. (Never liked this excuse when it comes from only children. How would they know what having a sibling feels like? IDK just always feels hollow. I'd prefer that she'd just gone Shirahoshi on him and tell him he's not her type)
9/18/2021 c1 princeartemis900
I hope you'll come back to this story when you have the time since I'd like to know what happens next.
I hope you'll come back to this story when you have the time since I'd like to know what happens next.
4/19/2021 c5 1Dimondeye
there is one major mistake I have noticed in this story brook was not the captain of the rum bar pirates, just thot you should know.
1Dimondeyethere is one major mistake I have noticed in this story brook was not the captain of the rum bar pirates, just thot you should know.
3/30/2021 c2 princeartemis900
I hope you'll come back to this story whenever you recover from writer's block or other things. I agree that some of Wanda and Carrot's friends from Zou should join the crew; (i.e. Tristan, Milky).
I hope you'll come back to this story whenever you recover from writer's block or other things. I agree that some of Wanda and Carrot's friends from Zou should join the crew; (i.e. Tristan, Milky).
11/23/2020 c5 50Kamen Rider Yokai
If you need a oc I'm willing to let you use one of mine. Jack mcdoyle is the name of my oc and he is Irish in looks. Usual outfit is a black shirt, green shorts with thermal leggings underneath reaching to the ankle. Devil fruit is the unite unite fruit which allows him to merge and separate from things like animals and objects including elements. Usually combines with an animal and element or object using the combined abilities to fight. Keeps a pair of foxes, a wolf and a bird plus a rabbit as pets and partners. The first fox is named tamamo which jack gave the abilities of fire while her sister is Yuki who jack gave the power of ice too. The wolf is fangrir who he gave the abilities of metal. The bird is named raijou who was given the power of storms while the bunny is oracle given the power of wind. With his strong abilities and teamwork he was given the name Union the chimera. In his spare time he works as a blacksmith creating unique weapons to suit his forms. He has a mutual friendship with Fire fist Ace because both saved each others lives from marines before ace joined the whitebeard pirates. His current location is drum island helping to arm the millita just in case warpol returns and learning to heal his pets from doctorinne and chopper.
50Kamen Rider YokaiIf you need a oc I'm willing to let you use one of mine. Jack mcdoyle is the name of my oc and he is Irish in looks. Usual outfit is a black shirt, green shorts with thermal leggings underneath reaching to the ankle. Devil fruit is the unite unite fruit which allows him to merge and separate from things like animals and objects including elements. Usually combines with an animal and element or object using the combined abilities to fight. Keeps a pair of foxes, a wolf and a bird plus a rabbit as pets and partners. The first fox is named tamamo which jack gave the abilities of fire while her sister is Yuki who jack gave the power of ice too. The wolf is fangrir who he gave the abilities of metal. The bird is named raijou who was given the power of storms while the bunny is oracle given the power of wind. With his strong abilities and teamwork he was given the name Union the chimera. In his spare time he works as a blacksmith creating unique weapons to suit his forms. He has a mutual friendship with Fire fist Ace because both saved each others lives from marines before ace joined the whitebeard pirates. His current location is drum island helping to arm the millita just in case warpol returns and learning to heal his pets from doctorinne and chopper.
10/13/2020 c3 princeartemis900
I hope you'll come back to this soon 'cause I want to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!_
I hope you'll come back to this soon 'cause I want to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!_