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8/24/2017 c3 Guest
I really like the way you're formatting this. It keeps the story moving at a good pace and adds a nice amount of backstory and personality. I do hope you haven't stopped writing and that if you continue to keep up the good work! I really enjoyed reading what you have so far.
8/26/2017 c3 5Fractoluminescence
Hahaha, with the Quicy arc my sister and I have still not figured if Ky├┤raku likes Nanao or if she's his daughter! The author is just SO NOT clear!
I'm fine with both anyway, so no worries.
I'm really happy to read this, you've managed to make it pretty interesting and given Midori a very define personnality, which is great. Good luck for writing the following chapters, I look forward to them!
8/26/2017 c2 Fractoluminescence
Up to here, I think it pretty nice to start out with both of their thoughts. Plus it is well written, so I go on reading
8/25/2017 c1 Fractoluminescence
I'm still reading, a good sign I guess ;)
2/27/2017 c3 2HummingBird742
Please update soon! This is an awesome story!
1/25/2017 c3 13LifeInTheGrey
I really enjoy your story so far. You have a knack for writing imagery instead of description. Not something that is easy to learn. Your OC is interesting, but make sure to keep her out of the Mary Sue range. I think jumping around a little bit would actually work well with your writing style. Instead of doing short flashbacks within a chapter you could make a flashback an entire chapter. I think it would suit this story well. However, I will warn you are better off including Shinji and the rest of the Vizards because based on the characters you selected that's what people will expect there to be. I wouldn't mind having soem more Shinji experts too. You have a very interesting take on him.
1/13/2017 c3 spacekaty
Hey! I really enjoy your fanfic! I am looking forward to the next chapters and what will happen! I hope they meet each other soon *-*
Thank you!
1/14/2017 c3 35xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx
I'm so happy there is another Shinji story around! :D
1/14/2017 c2 xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx
I can't wait for her to see Shinji again!
1/14/2017 c1 xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx
Interesting first chapter :)
1/11/2017 c3 38FallenArcana
This is AWESOME so far! I really like Midori's character, she seems very interesting. I can't wait to see how things pan out between her and Shinji as well.

Excellent work, looking forward to more!
1/8/2017 c2 blubb
That's a nice set-up for a story I think. I wouldn't mind reading more of this ;)
1/5/2017 c2 karenbytu
I really like it
1/4/2017 c1 lisaflowers
Okay I'm actually really excited.
I love shinji.
There needs to be more shinji angst smut fluff in 2017.
If you need any advice or anyone to plot with, you can message me at lisaflowers on Tumblr!

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