8/27/2017 c1 Large Hands Hans
When I think of orphans, I always think of Batman. The greatest success story of a orphan boy becoming the greatest super hero to ever be created. Your writing is great and you can count on me to read the rest of your stories.
When I think of orphans, I always think of Batman. The greatest success story of a orphan boy becoming the greatest super hero to ever be created. Your writing is great and you can count on me to read the rest of your stories.
1/10/2017 c5 Meowen
Oh, now Brent's threat from chapter 1 makes sense. :) The "juvie" thing is a ligitimate concern that happens at that orphanage. I would still change the insult or at least give a hint of an explanation, but if you do nothing then that's probably fine as well. Looking forward to whatever's next!
Oh, now Brent's threat from chapter 1 makes sense. :) The "juvie" thing is a ligitimate concern that happens at that orphanage. I would still change the insult or at least give a hint of an explanation, but if you do nothing then that's probably fine as well. Looking forward to whatever's next!