for The Lucky Branwen7/4/2024 c3 Skippersims
Hi love the story so far but got to say you did amazing with ren its so heart breaking but makes so much sense in this version of rwby and is a amazing part of this fanfic can't wait to get to next chapter hope more cone soon
Hi love the story so far but got to say you did amazing with ren its so heart breaking but makes so much sense in this version of rwby and is a amazing part of this fanfic can't wait to get to next chapter hope more cone soon
12/29/2023 c9 
1Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Ok so this is before anything was known about the Maidens too cuz wings? And only ice?
1MuuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrdddOk so this is before anything was known about the Maidens too cuz wings? And only ice?
12/29/2023 c9 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Ok given the fact she’s only using tendrils, this is before Salem’s past was shown and it’s super early so it’s a little weird that she’s the first big fight of the story. This is exactly why she has goons, because she doesn’t normally leave her castle or get her hands dirty. Plus, she’s not even using Grimm during the fight
Ok given the fact she’s only using tendrils, this is before Salem’s past was shown and it’s super early so it’s a little weird that she’s the first big fight of the story. This is exactly why she has goons, because she doesn’t normally leave her castle or get her hands dirty. Plus, she’s not even using Grimm during the fight
12/29/2023 c8 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Struggling against a random White Fang member? The group who most members are fodder? Ok…
Struggling against a random White Fang member? The group who most members are fodder? Ok…
12/28/2023 c6 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Also the relics are in the schools except for Vale’s relic which only Ozpin knows where it actually is
Also the relics are in the schools except for Vale’s relic which only Ozpin knows where it actually is
12/28/2023 c6 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Pretty sure anyone can use the relics also what happened in this story that now they only have 1 relic
Pretty sure anyone can use the relics also what happened in this story that now they only have 1 relic
12/28/2023 c3 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
Nah i dont like Ruby not being Tai’s daughter. It’s like you can’t accept the fact that Raven left and Summer stepped up to be a mom for Yang and eventually her and Tai had Ruby
Nah i dont like Ruby not being Tai’s daughter. It’s like you can’t accept the fact that Raven left and Summer stepped up to be a mom for Yang and eventually her and Tai had Ruby
12/28/2023 c1 Muuussstttaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrddd
How are portals similar to good luck. Only Qrow has bad luck as a semblance and Raven doesn’t have ‘death’ as a semblance wtf is going on
How are portals similar to good luck. Only Qrow has bad luck as a semblance and Raven doesn’t have ‘death’ as a semblance wtf is going on