for Another Ending12/19/2022 c1 Guest
Thankyou for making this one! I hate it when characters I've grown attatched to dont get a peaceful ending so this means a lot to me. Think if we all demanded Sqaure Enix to make happy endings for all thier games, they'll oblige?
Thankyou for making this one! I hate it when characters I've grown attatched to dont get a peaceful ending so this means a lot to me. Think if we all demanded Sqaure Enix to make happy endings for all thier games, they'll oblige?
1/12/2017 c1 
21Draconic
I'm sorry, but has your dad watched the film "Stand By Me"? Because if either of you hasn't, you'll never see how deep a mistake this is.
Final Fantasy XV was an unfinished game, that much can be said for certain, but it cannot end any other way without a very long fanfic changing a great deal of plot elements.
I'm sorry, your diction is good, and I can see that you easily have the capacity to improve a lot with practice, a course or two and some literature. But this fic just doesn't work.
21DraconicI'm sorry, but has your dad watched the film "Stand By Me"? Because if either of you hasn't, you'll never see how deep a mistake this is.
Final Fantasy XV was an unfinished game, that much can be said for certain, but it cannot end any other way without a very long fanfic changing a great deal of plot elements.
I'm sorry, your diction is good, and I can see that you easily have the capacity to improve a lot with practice, a course or two and some literature. But this fic just doesn't work.