
4/27/2017 c9 Neko Chan
I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
2/20/2017 c7 Guest
Guuuuuuuuuurl! Update soon cause I read this in 4 hours XDDDD I LOVED IT!
Guuuuuuuuuurl! Update soon cause I read this in 4 hours XDDDD I LOVED IT!
1/29/2017 c6 KIRA
hope to see more soon
hope to see more soon
1/28/2017 c6
4zZSweet-JasmineZz
As always, it was awesome! Loved that we get to have a glimpse of Sora's power!

As always, it was awesome! Loved that we get to have a glimpse of Sora's power!
1/23/2017 c5 Ari
Great story so far! I look forward to reading the next update!
Great story so far! I look forward to reading the next update!
1/22/2017 c4 zZSweet-JasmineZz
A really well written story! I love it: sora is a very interesting character with a past that intrigues me very much! Can't wait to read more of this! Up date soon!
A really well written story! I love it: sora is a very interesting character with a past that intrigues me very much! Can't wait to read more of this! Up date soon!
1/16/2017 c3
3Gargoyle77
It's very hard to find a good Grimmjow/Oc fic now-a-days! I'm glad that I found one so well written, and with an OC character that isn't mary-sue-ish! Keep it up!

It's very hard to find a good Grimmjow/Oc fic now-a-days! I'm glad that I found one so well written, and with an OC character that isn't mary-sue-ish! Keep it up!
1/12/2017 c2
3XD.Kaycee
Great start to your story! It's well written, flows nicely and has that nice bit of humour to make me laugh. I can't wait to read more!
Honestly, there is no certain length your chapter has to be. Personally I like to plan chapters by the events/plot rather than length. However, I do prefer reading chapters between 3500 to 10,000 words (if it's too short nothing much happened, and if too long then it can get boring at times), but that can vary depending on your writing style, or if you have heavy dialogue etc.

Great start to your story! It's well written, flows nicely and has that nice bit of humour to make me laugh. I can't wait to read more!
Honestly, there is no certain length your chapter has to be. Personally I like to plan chapters by the events/plot rather than length. However, I do prefer reading chapters between 3500 to 10,000 words (if it's too short nothing much happened, and if too long then it can get boring at times), but that can vary depending on your writing style, or if you have heavy dialogue etc.