for Stargate: Immortal5/6 c35 Anti-Virtue
"Don't wanna," Sam replied flatly.
"Why not?"
"Boring."
this, flat toned, childish pouting Carter is absolutely adorable!
"Don't wanna," Sam replied flatly.
"Why not?"
"Boring."
this, flat toned, childish pouting Carter is absolutely adorable!
5/4 c35 random norwegian
well shit, nice chapter thoguh.
Makes me wonder if the goal of the masters is to engineer the perfectly designed and ordered universe and all these inferior lifeforms are messing up there grand work.
There is also the prophecy to decode and use for there own end and prevent more like Liam from arising.
If you go through with the sequel to this story with extra universal travel maybe have the good guys going after creation shards with the end goal to make a creation engine and build their own Universe and meet the makers of universes at the end.
possible universes that work similar would be Halo, Star wars or mabye even Star trek. Oneill and Tealc would be happy going to the last 2 ones mentioned.
Looking forward to the conclusion of the story
well shit, nice chapter thoguh.
Makes me wonder if the goal of the masters is to engineer the perfectly designed and ordered universe and all these inferior lifeforms are messing up there grand work.
There is also the prophecy to decode and use for there own end and prevent more like Liam from arising.
If you go through with the sequel to this story with extra universal travel maybe have the good guys going after creation shards with the end goal to make a creation engine and build their own Universe and meet the makers of universes at the end.
possible universes that work similar would be Halo, Star wars or mabye even Star trek. Oneill and Tealc would be happy going to the last 2 ones mentioned.
Looking forward to the conclusion of the story
5/4 c35 MalSer
Sounds like Alcyoneus should have an ancient sign post at the outer rim... "Here be dragons". Of course, Jack would have to update it to "Big honkin space dragons."
Sounds like Alcyoneus should have an ancient sign post at the outer rim... "Here be dragons". Of course, Jack would have to update it to "Big honkin space dragons."
5/4 c35 Chronus1326
Those was an epic chapter, thank you! I particularly liked the idea of sending Sam on vacation to work with the Colonials.
Those was an epic chapter, thank you! I particularly liked the idea of sending Sam on vacation to work with the Colonials.
4/27 c34 mmst1958
! Thank you! Okay, then you need to listen to all the parts again. A wonderful story!
! Thank you! Okay, then you need to listen to all the parts again. A wonderful story!
4/27 c34 EffervescentNova
I wonder if the reason the Vargas masters have never seemed to change path or purpose is because they sometimes hide in an alternate dimension where the rest of the universe passes at much greater speeds, like a million to one scale. The main governance of this polity would'nt have to change much if they experienced time differently.
Suppressing communications in a galaxy is a bit of a giveaway as it's a clue that something is hiding there. Unless it's a trap, a decoy to lure seekers away from the real locations nearby.
Look forward to the next chapter.
I wonder if the reason the Vargas masters have never seemed to change path or purpose is because they sometimes hide in an alternate dimension where the rest of the universe passes at much greater speeds, like a million to one scale. The main governance of this polity would'nt have to change much if they experienced time differently.
Suppressing communications in a galaxy is a bit of a giveaway as it's a clue that something is hiding there. Unless it's a trap, a decoy to lure seekers away from the real locations nearby.
Look forward to the next chapter.