7/27/2022 c5 aileenmaea.anilao
Hello. l want to thank you for making it possible to read very good stories for free. If fan fictions could be published in books, l would definitely buy yours for collection. Hunter X Hunter X Reborn and To live a life are amongst the best fanfictions I've the pleasure of reading. While l haven't read your other stories, that was more because I'm not familiar with their animes. l hope you would always be in good health and not lose your inspiration in writing stories knowing that there are so many silent readers like me that's looking forward to them.
Hello. l want to thank you for making it possible to read very good stories for free. If fan fictions could be published in books, l would definitely buy yours for collection. Hunter X Hunter X Reborn and To live a life are amongst the best fanfictions I've the pleasure of reading. While l haven't read your other stories, that was more because I'm not familiar with their animes. l hope you would always be in good health and not lose your inspiration in writing stories knowing that there are so many silent readers like me that's looking forward to them.
7/27/2022 c5 aileenmaea.anilao
Hello. l want to thank you for making it possible to read a very good story for
Hello. l want to thank you for making it possible to read a very good story for
5/1/2022 c5 yochan123
your story is AMAZING! i also can't stand yuki and shizu's personality is one that I adore. that craving for freedom, yes!
absolutely love it. hope you cna come back to it one day 3
your story is AMAZING! i also can't stand yuki and shizu's personality is one that I adore. that craving for freedom, yes!
absolutely love it. hope you cna come back to it one day 3
5/1/2022 c1 yochan123
man I totally vibe with Shizu. like the entire idiotic fangirls who are the ones being protected from being vampire food, and her general annoyance with them all and the insomnia nightmares which are very unhelpful...i really don't know why they don't just try to tell her and yuki their origins?
man I totally vibe with Shizu. like the entire idiotic fangirls who are the ones being protected from being vampire food, and her general annoyance with them all and the insomnia nightmares which are very unhelpful...i really don't know why they don't just try to tell her and yuki their origins?
4/2/2019 c5 AwesomeFangirlOtaku01
I love this book so much! I have never related so much to a character like I do with Shizu. I absolutely love this. She is so realistic and relatable. I hope you plan to continue this. It's really amazing
I love this book so much! I have never related so much to a character like I do with Shizu. I absolutely love this. She is so realistic and relatable. I hope you plan to continue this. It's really amazing
2/20/2019 c5 Daughter of Trickery
I freaking love Kaname! I mean I understand his faults. Being 10000 year old does that to you. He is arrogant and can be manipulative but that doesnt stop me from loving him Cz he did so much to protect yuko and he does have morals or understand them somewhat? But he is not an evil or bad person. This makes me love him so freaking much! Please please please update! I haven't ever read a story like yours before and there are so few good ones and they just happen to be SIs which I love too. But please update! It's been soooooo long and I'm craving an update!
I freaking love Kaname! I mean I understand his faults. Being 10000 year old does that to you. He is arrogant and can be manipulative but that doesnt stop me from loving him Cz he did so much to protect yuko and he does have morals or understand them somewhat? But he is not an evil or bad person. This makes me love him so freaking much! Please please please update! I haven't ever read a story like yours before and there are so few good ones and they just happen to be SIs which I love too. But please update! It's been soooooo long and I'm craving an update!
1/13/2019 c5 JustCallMeOtaku
I love what you have so far, and I agree Yuki is a HORRIBLE protagonist! She has the personality of wet cardboard I swear! But with Shizu's personality being so rough around the edges I could see her getting pissy with Kaname about feeling patronized with how he treats them, having a REAL conversation. That's one thing really lacking in the original work, is people just talking to each other and communicating like in a real relationship, romantic or otherwise.
Also possible spoilers; Kaname really loves Yuki, to the point where despite his own feelings when she chooses to be with Zero instead he respects her choice and lets her go without any real fuss. I feel if he were to have that same kind of love for Shizu and she made it known that she didn't like how he was talking to her he would respect her and change his approach to how she says or what he would assume she would want to be treated.
I love what you have so far, and I agree Yuki is a HORRIBLE protagonist! She has the personality of wet cardboard I swear! But with Shizu's personality being so rough around the edges I could see her getting pissy with Kaname about feeling patronized with how he treats them, having a REAL conversation. That's one thing really lacking in the original work, is people just talking to each other and communicating like in a real relationship, romantic or otherwise.
Also possible spoilers; Kaname really loves Yuki, to the point where despite his own feelings when she chooses to be with Zero instead he respects her choice and lets her go without any real fuss. I feel if he were to have that same kind of love for Shizu and she made it known that she didn't like how he was talking to her he would respect her and change his approach to how she says or what he would assume she would want to be treated.
12/26/2018 c5 Guest
please update soon
poor shizu
so alone
just Kaien and erhaps kaname (lets see after with affair yuuki) care for her
please update soon
poor shizu
so alone
just Kaien and erhaps kaname (lets see after with affair yuuki) care for her
8/12/2018 c5 Kurochach
Maybe you should just follow the manga, make Shizu see Zero drink Yuki's blood fot the 1st time, she was curious because of the noise and the blood's scent, and she push Zero from Yuki and put her sword to his throat ?
Maybe you should just follow the manga, make Shizu see Zero drink Yuki's blood fot the 1st time, she was curious because of the noise and the blood's scent, and she push Zero from Yuki and put her sword to his throat ?
8/12/2018 c3 Kurochach
For Yuki to be less annoying, maybe you should read the manga, which is finished, her eyes are less big than in the anime and you don't have to hear to her cringy voice (I like the VO because it fits her but it is still annoying, even more in french because it is cringy and I don't like it)
For Yuki to be less annoying, maybe you should read the manga, which is finished, her eyes are less big than in the anime and you don't have to hear to her cringy voice (I like the VO because it fits her but it is still annoying, even more in french because it is cringy and I don't like it)
8/12/2018 c2 Kurochach
Hey, you wrote "They have always been the same, and in 16 years of seeing the man many times..." but the 'human' Shizu and Yuuki have know Kaname since they were 5 and are now 15 years old, which make 10 and not 16 years of 'knowing and seeing him.
Hey, you wrote "They have always been the same, and in 16 years of seeing the man many times..." but the 'human' Shizu and Yuuki have know Kaname since they were 5 and are now 15 years old, which make 10 and not 16 years of 'knowing and seeing him.
2/3/2018 c1 spicyrash
oh man! I love this story! please continue writing this! and all your other stories too! hxhxr is great too! I have read that one so many times! I was going for a real read when I saw this story and it is mind blowing!
you are a great author and do full justice to each manga... I love your angst and character development... I love your female leads ...
please please keep writing and updating! I would love to read more of your stories!
oh man! I love this story! please continue writing this! and all your other stories too! hxhxr is great too! I have read that one so many times! I was going for a real read when I saw this story and it is mind blowing!
you are a great author and do full justice to each manga... I love your angst and character development... I love your female leads ...
please please keep writing and updating! I would love to read more of your stories!