for Guardian of the Dead (Old)1/23/2018 c9 Guest
When is next chapter coming been wating. And it is verry good
When is next chapter coming been wating. And it is verry good
1/21/2018 c7 N8
I went looking for "is this a soul reaper" the other day and I was saddened that it was gone it was one of my favorite crossovers as well and im sad that the last time I read it was a year or 2 ago..
I went looking for "is this a soul reaper" the other day and I was saddened that it was gone it was one of my favorite crossovers as well and im sad that the last time I read it was a year or 2 ago..
1/22/2018 c9 
13Phailen
You caught my interest with chapter one, where you mentioned Ichigo's personality and how it wouldn't fit with becoming Rias' subordinate. Even better, you mentioned not simply replacing Issei with Ichigo and then running through the story with a different protagonist. I agree with you - that's laziness to the extreme. New characters influence stories and stories change, I like that you've already started making changes in both the Bleach universe and that of the High School DXD one as well!
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter!
13PhailenYou caught my interest with chapter one, where you mentioned Ichigo's personality and how it wouldn't fit with becoming Rias' subordinate. Even better, you mentioned not simply replacing Issei with Ichigo and then running through the story with a different protagonist. I agree with you - that's laziness to the extreme. New characters influence stories and stories change, I like that you've already started making changes in both the Bleach universe and that of the High School DXD one as well!
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter!
1/16/2018 c9 Lynnette
You should have stuck with "Shiba Ichigo". It makes more sense that the Shinto gods would have set up his new identity with what they consider to be his proper name.
I also dislike that Xenovia was able to randomly remember reading about Quincy as a race, and remembered it well enough to recognize his surname. It's not especially believable, even with the whole "she has a selective memory" thing. It's too contrived.
Also, where's the next chapter? It's been too long, man.
You should have stuck with "Shiba Ichigo". It makes more sense that the Shinto gods would have set up his new identity with what they consider to be his proper name.
I also dislike that Xenovia was able to randomly remember reading about Quincy as a race, and remembered it well enough to recognize his surname. It's not especially believable, even with the whole "she has a selective memory" thing. It's too contrived.
Also, where's the next chapter? It's been too long, man.
1/16/2018 c1 Guest
I think it's pretty funny that the servant yokai introduced herself as "Ayame", but Ichigo called her "Ayumi". What a rude guy.
I think it's pretty funny that the servant yokai introduced herself as "Ayame", but Ichigo called her "Ayumi". What a rude guy.
1/16/2018 c6 Mana's Cinder
It's a bit sad that you can't remember the names of your own characters. You can't seem to decide whether or not Ayame should be called "Ayame" or "Ayumi".
It's a bit sad that you can't remember the names of your own characters. You can't seem to decide whether or not Ayame should be called "Ayame" or "Ayumi".
1/10/2018 c1 Hdkeosj
Yus no replacements or swaps
Yus no replacements or swaps
12/29/2017 c9 claire nunnaly
interesting story, but please don't pair ichigo with any of girls from dxd's side... if u plan to give harem please just from bleaching universe side... because i think if u pair with girls dxd it will ruin the story. sorry for lack of grammar.
interesting story, but please don't pair ichigo with any of girls from dxd's side... if u plan to give harem please just from bleaching universe side... because i think if u pair with girls dxd it will ruin the story. sorry for lack of grammar.
12/20/2017 c9 Kestes
I bloody love this. If and when i get the time (currently sleep-deprived and ive to wake up for in around 6 hours..) ill see if i cant pop you a more extemsice review. Love what yiuve done so far.
Cheers,
Kes
I bloody love this. If and when i get the time (currently sleep-deprived and ive to wake up for in around 6 hours..) ill see if i cant pop you a more extemsice review. Love what yiuve done so far.
Cheers,
Kes
12/12/2017 c9 Regis JN
I just started reading this story, and I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to future chapters.
I just started reading this story, and I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to future chapters.
12/9/2017 c8 blazenite104
yeah sorta not liking this chapter. constantly bashing on the devils I mean. yeah cools their devils so they can't have changed much except that was kind of the point of the civil war. the circle responds to someone's wishes. it won't call for help unless Issei asked for it. Issei only wished to live so the circle only responded to that. as for Koneko's situation... they didn't really know. all they had was that Kuroka murdered her master which is still a murder no matter how you slice it. was it shitty how things ended up? sure but, what are you going to do in feudal based society. it wasn't any different in soul society, in fact it's probably worse. as for Sirzechs. he has always tried to do the right thing and most of the deceased in hell were managed by Hades according to the books. furthermore, how could the shinto know so damn much. most of it shouldn't be common knowledge and just observing them for a few weeks would not give anywhere near that much info.
In short I feel there is bias at this point that I just can't agree with.
I'll be stopping here because I think it's just a bunch of little things that are mounting up for me that I don't like.
yeah sorta not liking this chapter. constantly bashing on the devils I mean. yeah cools their devils so they can't have changed much except that was kind of the point of the civil war. the circle responds to someone's wishes. it won't call for help unless Issei asked for it. Issei only wished to live so the circle only responded to that. as for Koneko's situation... they didn't really know. all they had was that Kuroka murdered her master which is still a murder no matter how you slice it. was it shitty how things ended up? sure but, what are you going to do in feudal based society. it wasn't any different in soul society, in fact it's probably worse. as for Sirzechs. he has always tried to do the right thing and most of the deceased in hell were managed by Hades according to the books. furthermore, how could the shinto know so damn much. most of it shouldn't be common knowledge and just observing them for a few weeks would not give anywhere near that much info.
In short I feel there is bias at this point that I just can't agree with.
I'll be stopping here because I think it's just a bunch of little things that are mounting up for me that I don't like.