for Guardian of the Dead (Old)9/3/2018 c8 
9Loyal Kriegsmen
Third time reading it, its amazing bit you need to UPDATE PLEASE, i have very little stories to read please update
9Loyal KriegsmenThird time reading it, its amazing bit you need to UPDATE PLEASE, i have very little stories to read please update
8/29/2018 c1 Reio
Dude, your story writing is good, awesome even, but your power levels are shit. The Bleachverse WOULD shitstomp the Dxd verse. One is an actual fighting universe with shown feats, the other is all hype and over exaggerations from people who feel the need to stroke their fragile egos. Ex: Ulquiorra in his segunda etapa could instantly nuke a city, Gin's bankai allowed him to nearly kill a transcendent Aizen by blowing him up with a poisned chip of his sword from the inside of his body, Kenpachi with his sealed zanpakuto could level several skyscraper sized buildings with a single sword swing, Ichigo in his dangai state could casually shatter mountains, destroy Aizen's transcendent black coffin which could bend time and space with one hand, and tank a cero with the power of 2 dozen nukes, along with his Vasto Lorde form which destroyed every chain/circle of hell at once with one cero which even Yamamoto can't do, etc... Dxd is all hype with VERY little feats and just more arrogance like Serafall destroying Japan 4 times over by twinkling, or Draigg destroying earth several times over with brute Force, he's a dragon, a being of pride, does no one think that statement was maybe born out of arrogance, the Hindu trimuntrive replicating d bz feats, and Ophis's infinite power is just plain bullshit. Her power was halved, and last time I checked, infinite dived by anything is still infinity. Great Red is omnipotent, HAH! He could only make dreams come true, and the Trihexa's so called casual planet busting. People always seem to rank people like Rias or Sona on elites like Grimjow or Kenpachi, and people like Sirzechs destroy Ywach or Yamamoto, its just stupid.
Dude, your story writing is good, awesome even, but your power levels are shit. The Bleachverse WOULD shitstomp the Dxd verse. One is an actual fighting universe with shown feats, the other is all hype and over exaggerations from people who feel the need to stroke their fragile egos. Ex: Ulquiorra in his segunda etapa could instantly nuke a city, Gin's bankai allowed him to nearly kill a transcendent Aizen by blowing him up with a poisned chip of his sword from the inside of his body, Kenpachi with his sealed zanpakuto could level several skyscraper sized buildings with a single sword swing, Ichigo in his dangai state could casually shatter mountains, destroy Aizen's transcendent black coffin which could bend time and space with one hand, and tank a cero with the power of 2 dozen nukes, along with his Vasto Lorde form which destroyed every chain/circle of hell at once with one cero which even Yamamoto can't do, etc... Dxd is all hype with VERY little feats and just more arrogance like Serafall destroying Japan 4 times over by twinkling, or Draigg destroying earth several times over with brute Force, he's a dragon, a being of pride, does no one think that statement was maybe born out of arrogance, the Hindu trimuntrive replicating d bz feats, and Ophis's infinite power is just plain bullshit. Her power was halved, and last time I checked, infinite dived by anything is still infinity. Great Red is omnipotent, HAH! He could only make dreams come true, and the Trihexa's so called casual planet busting. People always seem to rank people like Rias or Sona on elites like Grimjow or Kenpachi, and people like Sirzechs destroy Ywach or Yamamoto, its just stupid.
8/28/2018 c2 TheJSmooth
Orihime... *sigh* foolish girl. Loves him then pushes him away once he loses his powers. How tragic...
Orihime... *sigh* foolish girl. Loves him then pushes him away once he loses his powers. How tragic...