for NATSU DXD (On Hold)6/12/2020 c6 Glitner
srsly your just spitting on natsus name now , he could easly taken care of everyonethere by the time he wasa normal human ... and now after 5 years training and unlocking e.n.d geting smarter and more mature he can barly contend with 3 fallen angels who isent close to be a high class ... as i said you your self is making this story shit... your just spitting on his strength tossing facts away and just use natsu as a replacement of issie thats just plain bad authoring
srsly your just spitting on natsus name now , he could easly taken care of everyonethere by the time he wasa normal human ... and now after 5 years training and unlocking e.n.d geting smarter and more mature he can barly contend with 3 fallen angels who isent close to be a high class ... as i said you your self is making this story shit... your just spitting on his strength tossing facts away and just use natsu as a replacement of issie thats just plain bad authoring
6/12/2020 c5 Glitner
whats up with him crying all the time dammit... stop making him act like a pussy its srsly ruining his char...
whats up with him crying all the time dammit... stop making him act like a pussy its srsly ruining his char...
8/10/2019 c7 MrSunshine744
I like this fic but it feels a little rushed, I'd suggest take a bit of time to slow the pace down and explain situations a bit more, give some context. and for the love of god stop writing "plz" its "please" using that is fine if you are texting a friend but you're writing a story, to be honest it's annoying to read that.
I like this fic but it feels a little rushed, I'd suggest take a bit of time to slow the pace down and explain situations a bit more, give some context. and for the love of god stop writing "plz" its "please" using that is fine if you are texting a friend but you're writing a story, to be honest it's annoying to read that.
15/25/2019 c1 Guest
Corny and rushed
Corny and rushed
8/31/2018 c7 bastion0904
my vote is for Serafall,Irina,Ravel,Ultear,Le Fay,Gabriel(Natsu looks like an angel more than a demon)
my vote is for Serafall,Irina,Ravel,Ultear,Le Fay,Gabriel(Natsu looks like an angel more than a demon)
8/31/2018 c6 Xdmegaflower
my vote is for Serafall, Irina and Ravel
my vote is for Serafall, Irina and Ravel