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4/18/2017 c4 Hazni
Since I'm reviewing this chapter _~ I might as well agree with another review you got.
You have some strange OCs that appear without any explanation, and from this point on they are detrimental to this fanfic. Who is this "Aisha" OC? You know what I mean? And Akanin?
4/18/2017 c3 Hazni
Aw Ahsoka is jealous _-
Jealous and betrayed as well, since Anakin never shared his secret with her.
Anakin and Padme are a doomed pairing and its one of the reason I do not consider them a happy couple.

Slow start but chapter 3 is so far so good...
3/26/2017 c16 DeWun
I love it! Can't wait for the next update.
3/23/2017 c16 Guest
Love your story!
1/22/2017 c12 nini
Hey good updates, but you should explain a bit the oc's stories. Thank you for your time.
1/21/2017 c12 Guest
Story so far is mostly good, but it is weakened by OCs that appear without any explanation or backstory, who frankly are entirely superfluous, sometimes even detrimental to the story. I would strongly recommend removing them from the story (with a quick rewrite of the first few chapters) as they WILL significantly impact how successful this story is.
1/18/2017 c2 nini
Interesting story, the pace seems ok and the characterisation too. I'll follow your fic. Have a nice day.

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