for A Wizard's Guide to 'Banking'9/8 c20 Guest
This was a complete waste of my time.
Couldn't you prioritize at all what this story really needed and what it didn't? There seem to be almost entire chapters that you could have summed up in a single sentence or (if you must) a paragraph without losing anything important. Maybe then you could have gotten to the point where those "muggleborn" kids actually started playing any role at all before abandoning the story.
What a disappointment.
This was a complete waste of my time.
Couldn't you prioritize at all what this story really needed and what it didn't? There seem to be almost entire chapters that you could have summed up in a single sentence or (if you must) a paragraph without losing anything important. Maybe then you could have gotten to the point where those "muggleborn" kids actually started playing any role at all before abandoning the story.
What a disappointment.
7/23 c20 ZyuohWolf
I've just reread this whole story.
I'm surprised by how much I forgot.
I'm hoping for and looking forward to the next update!
I've just reread this whole story.
I'm surprised by how much I forgot.
I'm hoping for and looking forward to the next update!
6/6 c20 not a fan
apart from abandoned you seem as anti muggle born as malfoy... allowing them to gain so much power and screw so many and then abandoning the story before the muggle borns show up at hogwarts... honestly a waste of my time reading something so unfinished when it finally seemed that the part where hundreds of muggle-borns arrived at Hogwarts was going to arrive... shame about several hours spent reading this...
I doubt that one day you will continue this story and if you do I doubt that I will notice, but I hope that one day this will progress.
apart from abandoned you seem as anti muggle born as malfoy... allowing them to gain so much power and screw so many and then abandoning the story before the muggle borns show up at hogwarts... honestly a waste of my time reading something so unfinished when it finally seemed that the part where hundreds of muggle-borns arrived at Hogwarts was going to arrive... shame about several hours spent reading this...
I doubt that one day you will continue this story and if you do I doubt that I will notice, but I hope that one day this will progress.
4/30 c20 bobthebuilding
An amazing story, loved every word of it. I dearly hope this gets continued down the line.
Thanks so much for writing this. :)
An amazing story, loved every word of it. I dearly hope this gets continued down the line.
Thanks so much for writing this. :)
4/29 c1 bobthebuilding
Lmao the Purebloods aren't going to understand the muggle science of a sperm bank so to avoid being accused of Dark Magic and alchemy our MC's probably gonna have to be all:
"Yeah, that whole war against You Know Who everyone's been barely surviving?
I've spent every single day and night during it getting it on multiple times per day, with a new woman each time.
Just thousands of one night stands, fertility charms always on.
Stamina potions for the win.
Getting laid, for the Greater Good."
Lmao the Purebloods aren't going to understand the muggle science of a sperm bank so to avoid being accused of Dark Magic and alchemy our MC's probably gonna have to be all:
"Yeah, that whole war against You Know Who everyone's been barely surviving?
I've spent every single day and night during it getting it on multiple times per day, with a new woman each time.
Just thousands of one night stands, fertility charms always on.
Stamina potions for the win.
Getting laid, for the Greater Good."
3/21 c20 Molenir
Well, fairly good, though obviously abandoned. A harsh on the Nazi agenda, but whatever, I've seen worse. Only question is, how long before a muggleborn decides enough is enough, and starts killing the inbreds.
Well, fairly good, though obviously abandoned. A harsh on the Nazi agenda, but whatever, I've seen worse. Only question is, how long before a muggleborn decides enough is enough, and starts killing the inbreds.
3/12 c20 Reader ONE
Please update. I want to reach the ending.
Please update. I want to reach the ending.
1/12 c20 
10kgfinkel
Well, that was fun. I hope you come back and continue this story as it's been a while since you've updated.
10kgfinkelWell, that was fun. I hope you come back and continue this story as it's been a while since you've updated.
10/16/2023 c20 Lucretius
Loved the worldbuilding in this fic, I recently reread it and it's so good. Hope you are alright and for a quick return!
Loved the worldbuilding in this fic, I recently reread it and it's so good. Hope you are alright and for a quick return!
9/20/2023 c20 Guest
Hello, this fic was recommended to me in a discord server and I have to agree! This surely is a very worthwhile read with a really good worldbuilding! So thanks for posting so that I could experience this all! All those anti-muggleborn legislations are making me really nervous! And exactly then you had a pov change to Gamp to show just WHY he is doing all this and Woah! I think this story is amazing!
Hello, this fic was recommended to me in a discord server and I have to agree! This surely is a very worthwhile read with a really good worldbuilding! So thanks for posting so that I could experience this all! All those anti-muggleborn legislations are making me really nervous! And exactly then you had a pov change to Gamp to show just WHY he is doing all this and Woah! I think this story is amazing!
9/8/2023 c20 5aalens
Thank you! This has been an unusually enjoyable fic…in fact one of the best I’ve read for quite a while.
5aalensThank you! This has been an unusually enjoyable fic…in fact one of the best I’ve read for quite a while.
6/24/2023 c20 trista.sterling
A very good read! I like the world building you're doing, and your diversions from canon. Thank you for sharing it!
A very good read! I like the world building you're doing, and your diversions from canon. Thank you for sharing it!
6/19/2023 c20 Guest
Amazing work and great world building. Truly hope you are able to finish this story. Waiting with baited breath
Amazing work and great world building. Truly hope you are able to finish this story. Waiting with baited breath