for The Stirring7/16/2020 c28 Guest
I can't
I can't
7/16/2020 c28 Guest
Oh, God. Almost a year and i still coming here checking if you have posted a new chapter, even knowing that i will receive an e-mail if you do. But I miss this so much that i can't help myself.
Oh, God. Almost a year and i still coming here checking if you have posted a new chapter, even knowing that i will receive an e-mail if you do. But I miss this so much that i can't help myself.
5/27/2020 c28 Guest
I guess the road of your life doesn't lead here...
I guess the road of your life doesn't lead here...
3/18/2020 c28 Guest
So, it's officially abandoned. Pity!
So, it's officially abandoned. Pity!
2/14/2020 c28 Guest
This is amazing! I love their interactions, so absolutely intense. I wanted to scream at them more than once. I can't wait for more updates, dying to know where you'll take us with this story.
This is amazing! I love their interactions, so absolutely intense. I wanted to scream at them more than once. I can't wait for more updates, dying to know where you'll take us with this story.
1/24/2020 c28 
2InfiniteMelody
I adore this story, it’s so well written! I really admire how much work you’ve put into making these OCs. Hope to read more!
2InfiniteMelodyI adore this story, it’s so well written! I really admire how much work you’ve put into making these OCs. Hope to read more!
12/18/2019 c28 4Hannani
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more of it, thanks for sharing!
4HannaniI absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more of it, thanks for sharing!
11/28/2019 c28 Guest
Update?
Update?
9/29/2019 c28 Guest
Don't make us wait so long for updates.
Don't make us wait so long for updates.
9/13/2019 c28 Guest
Thank god, you have not abandoned the story. Please update fast now.
Thank god, you have not abandoned the story. Please update fast now.
9/9/2019 c28 CaityJoy
I read your entire story in a night. it is really good and i love it. Personally i keep expecting her to lose her temper with him. just letting her magic go nuts because of how hot and cold he keeps being instead of crying and running away. i know shes no gryffindor but i dont know.. it keeps feeling like thats where its going but then it deviates.
Thats my personal thoughts though and i dont think u should change your story. Thats the cool thing about fanfics. Its all yours and we can review and say what we would do but at the end of the day, this is your creation and what happens to the characters is all yours.
i didnt laugh really loudly in public at the part where she kept vanishing things though. That was too relatable.
I read your entire story in a night. it is really good and i love it. Personally i keep expecting her to lose her temper with him. just letting her magic go nuts because of how hot and cold he keeps being instead of crying and running away. i know shes no gryffindor but i dont know.. it keeps feeling like thats where its going but then it deviates.
Thats my personal thoughts though and i dont think u should change your story. Thats the cool thing about fanfics. Its all yours and we can review and say what we would do but at the end of the day, this is your creation and what happens to the characters is all yours.
i didnt laugh really loudly in public at the part where she kept vanishing things though. That was too relatable.
9/9/2019 c28 Foxy
Hm, well, I hope Roisin starts talking soon enough about how she feels and what she needs. As much as I love your writing, the last chapter was not my favourite. I mean I get that she is shy and anxious, but first of all, she already had her first time and she should see Snape in a new different light, new perspective, that wouldn't make her so nervous. I get that she got scared about Snape's behaviour with Harry, but it is impossible for me to accept it was so traumatic that she would get a flashback with the silhouette.
Let me tell you something personal: I was sexually assaluted when I was 14, and then had my first experience of consensual sex when I was 15. And still I don't think I was as nervous, panicky and traumatized as the Roisin shows here in the situation when I consented to having sex. Sure, it wasn't all smooth, but I talked, told whats ok and whats not, had some mental troubles but everything was talked about during and when I said stop, it stopped. Not to say I wasn't severely traumatized, I had massive psychological problems, but thats unrelated to the situation I am talking about. What im trying to say Roisin is not reacting realistically. First time sucked, it hurt, she was nervous etc. But now? Come on, she can still be nervous, and I doubt she could get to a screaming orgasm, but the way she is acting is a bit ridicules. Not to mention if I was Snape I would kicked her out immediately and never looked back. I am so annoyed at her, because of her stupid, childish behaviour she made Snape feel like crap.
That's that, I had to say it. I will still wait for the next chapters, because your work is amazing. I just hope you can maintain the realism you showed so fantastically. I am so critical of this new chapter because it was completely unrealistic in my opinion, which is so sad for me, since your work is so amazing. Cheers!
Hm, well, I hope Roisin starts talking soon enough about how she feels and what she needs. As much as I love your writing, the last chapter was not my favourite. I mean I get that she is shy and anxious, but first of all, she already had her first time and she should see Snape in a new different light, new perspective, that wouldn't make her so nervous. I get that she got scared about Snape's behaviour with Harry, but it is impossible for me to accept it was so traumatic that she would get a flashback with the silhouette.
Let me tell you something personal: I was sexually assaluted when I was 14, and then had my first experience of consensual sex when I was 15. And still I don't think I was as nervous, panicky and traumatized as the Roisin shows here in the situation when I consented to having sex. Sure, it wasn't all smooth, but I talked, told whats ok and whats not, had some mental troubles but everything was talked about during and when I said stop, it stopped. Not to say I wasn't severely traumatized, I had massive psychological problems, but thats unrelated to the situation I am talking about. What im trying to say Roisin is not reacting realistically. First time sucked, it hurt, she was nervous etc. But now? Come on, she can still be nervous, and I doubt she could get to a screaming orgasm, but the way she is acting is a bit ridicules. Not to mention if I was Snape I would kicked her out immediately and never looked back. I am so annoyed at her, because of her stupid, childish behaviour she made Snape feel like crap.
That's that, I had to say it. I will still wait for the next chapters, because your work is amazing. I just hope you can maintain the realism you showed so fantastically. I am so critical of this new chapter because it was completely unrealistic in my opinion, which is so sad for me, since your work is so amazing. Cheers!
9/8/2019 c1 Foxy
Yesssss! You are back, Im so happy! I will tease myself with the new chapter and start reading from the beginning of the story. I am so glad you haven't abandoned it!
Yesssss! You are back, Im so happy! I will tease myself with the new chapter and start reading from the beginning of the story. I am so glad you haven't abandoned it!