for The Stirring1/26/2022 c29 SeraphineWhist
I'm so happy this got an update! When it popped up in my emails I thought it was going to be an author's note in so glad it was a new chapter and that you've come back to the story. It was brilliant and I was right back in it without having to go right back, though if be more than happy to. Loved it!
I'm so happy this got an update! When it popped up in my emails I thought it was going to be an author's note in so glad it was a new chapter and that you've come back to the story. It was brilliant and I was right back in it without having to go right back, though if be more than happy to. Loved it!
12/18/2021 c28 Guest
I hope you continue with this story, your writing ability is bar none! You have such command of individual quirks that make the characters sound unique and you’re ability to organize and execute the overall plot and through individual chapters is amazing. You patience with detail and foreshadowing is incredible to view as a reader; and you craft such delicate story lines without revealing too much too soon, but enough to keep everything just the tip of insatiable between chapters! Regardless, I hope you are well and happy!
I hope you continue with this story, your writing ability is bar none! You have such command of individual quirks that make the characters sound unique and you’re ability to organize and execute the overall plot and through individual chapters is amazing. You patience with detail and foreshadowing is incredible to view as a reader; and you craft such delicate story lines without revealing too much too soon, but enough to keep everything just the tip of insatiable between chapters! Regardless, I hope you are well and happy!
10/1/2021 c28 Guest
Girl, there are kids crying, there are people screaming, there's pain and suffering please please pleeeeeeease say to me that you will come back to this, I’m waiting for a long time.
Girl, there are kids crying, there are people screaming, there's pain and suffering please please pleeeeeeease say to me that you will come back to this, I’m waiting for a long time.
6/10/2021 c10 Sara
God my lord YOU ARE Perfect
It has been 4 years after your writing and now i found this great and aswam story.
You are the 2nd J K Roling
I believe in yoy and your writing
Please if you are ganna post any other stories tell me or maybe you have already post somthing
God my lord YOU ARE Perfect
It has been 4 years after your writing and now i found this great and aswam story.
You are the 2nd J K Roling
I believe in yoy and your writing
Please if you are ganna post any other stories tell me or maybe you have already post somthing
11/22/2020 c28 394
Absolutely love your story. Dying to read more. I think Snape is starting to have have feelings for her but I could be dead wrong. but... I really hope he is... maybe that is the reason he was angry at the last because he’s starting to feel differently about Her, since he read her thoughts and now knows that she does find him attractive and sexy as she puts it and knowing that she got off at the thought of him—but it could be opposite and he hates the fact that she is having those kinds of thoughts about him.
I did love the part where he smiled at her when she told him that she is afraid of lighting something on fire. Such a cute moment.
I do hope in time things get... steamier—not over the top love making but just tad bit more lustful? Don’t know if I even made sense with my last one there. :/ I do like that you keep it realistic when it comes to her and Snape in bed. I can’t imagine it being all sunshine and daisies especially being in her predicament.
Enough of me.
X.
Absolutely love your story. Dying to read more. I think Snape is starting to have have feelings for her but I could be dead wrong. but... I really hope he is... maybe that is the reason he was angry at the last because he’s starting to feel differently about Her, since he read her thoughts and now knows that she does find him attractive and sexy as she puts it and knowing that she got off at the thought of him—but it could be opposite and he hates the fact that she is having those kinds of thoughts about him.
I did love the part where he smiled at her when she told him that she is afraid of lighting something on fire. Such a cute moment.
I do hope in time things get... steamier—not over the top love making but just tad bit more lustful? Don’t know if I even made sense with my last one there. :/ I do like that you keep it realistic when it comes to her and Snape in bed. I can’t imagine it being all sunshine and daisies especially being in her predicament.
Enough of me.
X.
11/18/2020 c28 Guest
Omg I love this! I really hope you continue this story it’s soooo good.
Omg I love this! I really hope you continue this story it’s soooo good.
10/30/2020 c28 Snapeloverr
Hi! I hope all is well! :)
It’s safe to say—-I am in love with this fanfic. My sister sent me the link and I stayed up until 7:30 in the morning reading it! But now I hate her for introducing me to it because it’s so good and hasn’t been updated, now I’m depressed. Anyway! I love the way you write your character and SNAPES! Do you know how hard it is to find a decent Snape/OC fanfic on this site that is well written and not having Snapes character being OOC and the OC being a marysue. :/ but I really just love this story and hope you continue it when you’re ready. Thank you for such good read. :)
Hi! I hope all is well! :)
It’s safe to say—-I am in love with this fanfic. My sister sent me the link and I stayed up until 7:30 in the morning reading it! But now I hate her for introducing me to it because it’s so good and hasn’t been updated, now I’m depressed. Anyway! I love the way you write your character and SNAPES! Do you know how hard it is to find a decent Snape/OC fanfic on this site that is well written and not having Snapes character being OOC and the OC being a marysue. :/ but I really just love this story and hope you continue it when you’re ready. Thank you for such good read. :)
7/16/2020 c28 Guest
I can't
I can't
7/16/2020 c28 Guest
Oh, God. Almost a year and i still coming here checking if you have posted a new chapter, even knowing that i will receive an e-mail if you do. But I miss this so much that i can't help myself.
Oh, God. Almost a year and i still coming here checking if you have posted a new chapter, even knowing that i will receive an e-mail if you do. But I miss this so much that i can't help myself.
5/27/2020 c28 Guest
I guess the road of your life doesn't lead here...
I guess the road of your life doesn't lead here...
3/18/2020 c28 Guest
So, it's officially abandoned. Pity!
So, it's officially abandoned. Pity!
2/14/2020 c28 Guest
This is amazing! I love their interactions, so absolutely intense. I wanted to scream at them more than once. I can't wait for more updates, dying to know where you'll take us with this story.
This is amazing! I love their interactions, so absolutely intense. I wanted to scream at them more than once. I can't wait for more updates, dying to know where you'll take us with this story.
1/24/2020 c28 
2InfiniteMelody
I adore this story, it’s so well written! I really admire how much work you’ve put into making these OCs. Hope to read more!
2InfiniteMelodyI adore this story, it’s so well written! I really admire how much work you’ve put into making these OCs. Hope to read more!