for The Stirring12/18/2019 c28 
4Hannani
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more of it, thanks for sharing!
4HannaniI absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more of it, thanks for sharing!
11/28/2019 c28 Guest
Update?
Update?
9/29/2019 c28 Guest
Don't make us wait so long for updates.
Don't make us wait so long for updates.
9/13/2019 c28 Guest
Thank god, you have not abandoned the story. Please update fast now.
Thank god, you have not abandoned the story. Please update fast now.
9/9/2019 c28 VolatileSage
I read your entire story in a night. it is really good and i love it. Personally i keep expecting her to lose her temper with him. just letting her magic go nuts because of how hot and cold he keeps being instead of crying and running away. i know shes no gryffindor but i dont know.. it keeps feeling like thats where its going but then it deviates.
Thats my personal thoughts though and i dont think u should change your story. Thats the cool thing about fanfics. Its all yours and we can review and say what we would do but at the end of the day, this is your creation and what happens to the characters is all yours.
i didnt laugh really loudly in public at the part where she kept vanishing things though. That was too relatable.
I read your entire story in a night. it is really good and i love it. Personally i keep expecting her to lose her temper with him. just letting her magic go nuts because of how hot and cold he keeps being instead of crying and running away. i know shes no gryffindor but i dont know.. it keeps feeling like thats where its going but then it deviates.
Thats my personal thoughts though and i dont think u should change your story. Thats the cool thing about fanfics. Its all yours and we can review and say what we would do but at the end of the day, this is your creation and what happens to the characters is all yours.
i didnt laugh really loudly in public at the part where she kept vanishing things though. That was too relatable.
9/9/2019 c28 Foxy
Hm, well, I hope Roisin starts talking soon enough about how she feels and what she needs. As much as I love your writing, the last chapter was not my favourite. I mean I get that she is shy and anxious, but first of all, she already had her first time and she should see Snape in a new different light, new perspective, that wouldn't make her so nervous. I get that she got scared about Snape's behaviour with Harry, but it is impossible for me to accept it was so traumatic that she would get a flashback with the silhouette.
Let me tell you something personal: I was sexually assaluted when I was 14, and then had my first experience of consensual sex when I was 15. And still I don't think I was as nervous, panicky and traumatized as the Roisin shows here in the situation when I consented to having sex. Sure, it wasn't all smooth, but I talked, told whats ok and whats not, had some mental troubles but everything was talked about during and when I said stop, it stopped. Not to say I wasn't severely traumatized, I had massive psychological problems, but thats unrelated to the situation I am talking about. What im trying to say Roisin is not reacting realistically. First time sucked, it hurt, she was nervous etc. But now? Come on, she can still be nervous, and I doubt she could get to a screaming orgasm, but the way she is acting is a bit ridicules. Not to mention if I was Snape I would kicked her out immediately and never looked back. I am so annoyed at her, because of her stupid, childish behaviour she made Snape feel like crap.
That's that, I had to say it. I will still wait for the next chapters, because your work is amazing. I just hope you can maintain the realism you showed so fantastically. I am so critical of this new chapter because it was completely unrealistic in my opinion, which is so sad for me, since your work is so amazing. Cheers!
Hm, well, I hope Roisin starts talking soon enough about how she feels and what she needs. As much as I love your writing, the last chapter was not my favourite. I mean I get that she is shy and anxious, but first of all, she already had her first time and she should see Snape in a new different light, new perspective, that wouldn't make her so nervous. I get that she got scared about Snape's behaviour with Harry, but it is impossible for me to accept it was so traumatic that she would get a flashback with the silhouette.
Let me tell you something personal: I was sexually assaluted when I was 14, and then had my first experience of consensual sex when I was 15. And still I don't think I was as nervous, panicky and traumatized as the Roisin shows here in the situation when I consented to having sex. Sure, it wasn't all smooth, but I talked, told whats ok and whats not, had some mental troubles but everything was talked about during and when I said stop, it stopped. Not to say I wasn't severely traumatized, I had massive psychological problems, but thats unrelated to the situation I am talking about. What im trying to say Roisin is not reacting realistically. First time sucked, it hurt, she was nervous etc. But now? Come on, she can still be nervous, and I doubt she could get to a screaming orgasm, but the way she is acting is a bit ridicules. Not to mention if I was Snape I would kicked her out immediately and never looked back. I am so annoyed at her, because of her stupid, childish behaviour she made Snape feel like crap.
That's that, I had to say it. I will still wait for the next chapters, because your work is amazing. I just hope you can maintain the realism you showed so fantastically. I am so critical of this new chapter because it was completely unrealistic in my opinion, which is so sad for me, since your work is so amazing. Cheers!
9/8/2019 c1 Foxy
Yesssss! You are back, Im so happy! I will tease myself with the new chapter and start reading from the beginning of the story. I am so glad you haven't abandoned it!
Yesssss! You are back, Im so happy! I will tease myself with the new chapter and start reading from the beginning of the story. I am so glad you haven't abandoned it!
9/4/2019 c28 Guest
Wow! You're back.
So glad you didn't abandon it. 3
Wow! You're back.
So glad you didn't abandon it. 3
9/3/2019 c28 Anahit Pearl
Your characters are so believable and I love your writing! It makes sense that she and Snape would still be freaked out and uncomfortable with the situation, it makes it feel realistic. I personally love the slow burn, and don’t think it would feel as authentic if it was all unicorns and rainbows right off the bat. Speaking of creatures, I hope the selky is on Roisin’s side... Great work and excited for new chapter!
Your characters are so believable and I love your writing! It makes sense that she and Snape would still be freaked out and uncomfortable with the situation, it makes it feel realistic. I personally love the slow burn, and don’t think it would feel as authentic if it was all unicorns and rainbows right off the bat. Speaking of creatures, I hope the selky is on Roisin’s side... Great work and excited for new chapter!
9/2/2019 c28 Elizabeth
I'm so excited that you posted a new chapter! This one certainly did not disappoint. Love this story.
I'm so excited that you posted a new chapter! This one certainly did not disappoint. Love this story.
9/2/2019 c28 Guest
Yeeesss! A new chapter! I seriously love your writing and I love these characters. Awesome chapter.
Yeeesss! A new chapter! I seriously love your writing and I love these characters. Awesome chapter.
9/1/2019 c28 Guest
Sorry I give up, I genuinely struggle with sex. But this is fecking ridiculous, and if your not ready and thinking shitty thoughts and he asks just say it you friggen child. God.
Sorry I give up, I genuinely struggle with sex. But this is fecking ridiculous, and if your not ready and thinking shitty thoughts and he asks just say it you friggen child. God.
9/1/2019 c26 Guest
Are you kidding me?! Harry has no punishment at all?! Dumbledore is an arse to snape and I can’t stand it. Harry can do what he wants apparently.. There is literally no happiness to this story, I just don’t get it. The plot is amazing and your character is great, just actually needs to speak up...well ever. But she’s still a great character, but this is just depressing, there’s nothing for your readers to think happy thoughts about. Feels like rape on both their sides when they have sex. So that’s not enjoyable. She’s literally constantly being screwed over by her situation but doesn’t speak to try and improve the situation. It’s a bit tiring to be honest, if you could just inject a teeny bit of happiness in to the story I think you may be on to a a winner.
Are you kidding me?! Harry has no punishment at all?! Dumbledore is an arse to snape and I can’t stand it. Harry can do what he wants apparently.. There is literally no happiness to this story, I just don’t get it. The plot is amazing and your character is great, just actually needs to speak up...well ever. But she’s still a great character, but this is just depressing, there’s nothing for your readers to think happy thoughts about. Feels like rape on both their sides when they have sex. So that’s not enjoyable. She’s literally constantly being screwed over by her situation but doesn’t speak to try and improve the situation. It’s a bit tiring to be honest, if you could just inject a teeny bit of happiness in to the story I think you may be on to a a winner.