for The Stirring9/3/2019 c28 Anahit Pearl
Your characters are so believable and I love your writing! It makes sense that she and Snape would still be freaked out and uncomfortable with the situation, it makes it feel realistic. I personally love the slow burn, and don’t think it would feel as authentic if it was all unicorns and rainbows right off the bat. Speaking of creatures, I hope the selky is on Roisin’s side... Great work and excited for new chapter!
Your characters are so believable and I love your writing! It makes sense that she and Snape would still be freaked out and uncomfortable with the situation, it makes it feel realistic. I personally love the slow burn, and don’t think it would feel as authentic if it was all unicorns and rainbows right off the bat. Speaking of creatures, I hope the selky is on Roisin’s side... Great work and excited for new chapter!
9/2/2019 c28 Elizabeth
I'm so excited that you posted a new chapter! This one certainly did not disappoint. Love this story.
I'm so excited that you posted a new chapter! This one certainly did not disappoint. Love this story.
9/2/2019 c28 Guest
Yeeesss! A new chapter! I seriously love your writing and I love these characters. Awesome chapter.
Yeeesss! A new chapter! I seriously love your writing and I love these characters. Awesome chapter.
9/1/2019 c28 Guest
Sorry I give up, I genuinely struggle with sex. But this is fecking ridiculous, and if your not ready and thinking shitty thoughts and he asks just say it you friggen child. God.
Sorry I give up, I genuinely struggle with sex. But this is fecking ridiculous, and if your not ready and thinking shitty thoughts and he asks just say it you friggen child. God.
9/1/2019 c26 Guest
Are you kidding me?! Harry has no punishment at all?! Dumbledore is an arse to snape and I can’t stand it. Harry can do what he wants apparently.. There is literally no happiness to this story, I just don’t get it. The plot is amazing and your character is great, just actually needs to speak up...well ever. But she’s still a great character, but this is just depressing, there’s nothing for your readers to think happy thoughts about. Feels like rape on both their sides when they have sex. So that’s not enjoyable. She’s literally constantly being screwed over by her situation but doesn’t speak to try and improve the situation. It’s a bit tiring to be honest, if you could just inject a teeny bit of happiness in to the story I think you may be on to a a winner.
Are you kidding me?! Harry has no punishment at all?! Dumbledore is an arse to snape and I can’t stand it. Harry can do what he wants apparently.. There is literally no happiness to this story, I just don’t get it. The plot is amazing and your character is great, just actually needs to speak up...well ever. But she’s still a great character, but this is just depressing, there’s nothing for your readers to think happy thoughts about. Feels like rape on both their sides when they have sex. So that’s not enjoyable. She’s literally constantly being screwed over by her situation but doesn’t speak to try and improve the situation. It’s a bit tiring to be honest, if you could just inject a teeny bit of happiness in to the story I think you may be on to a a winner.
9/1/2019 c25 Guest
She always reacts to Everything in an annoying way, why can’t she be brave just once? Or maybe even speak up for the man keeping you from randomly hurting people around you and allowing you to continue an education while he also feels like he’s raping you, because you act like a complete child in his presence making things far more difficult than they have to be...for gods sake, grow a pair
She always reacts to Everything in an annoying way, why can’t she be brave just once? Or maybe even speak up for the man keeping you from randomly hurting people around you and allowing you to continue an education while he also feels like he’s raping you, because you act like a complete child in his presence making things far more difficult than they have to be...for gods sake, grow a pair
8/31/2019 c28 Oksanallex
Yeas, this chapter was definitely worth the waitingloved it and already can't wait for more... I'm really jealous fot someone who would read this story in one go when it's finished... I know I would be reading it whole night long if I found it already complete
Yeas, this chapter was definitely worth the waitingloved it and already can't wait for more... I'm really jealous fot someone who would read this story in one go when it's finished... I know I would be reading it whole night long if I found it already complete
8/30/2019 c28 Jazz
YES NEW CHAPTER! See! I said i'd be back and waiting and I'm so happy you posted. I know things have been rough but wanted to let you know we all really appreciate all of your effort to continue this story and continue it with the high-quality level of writing consistency. Loved the tension in this chapter it's good to see more of their interaction! :)
YES NEW CHAPTER! See! I said i'd be back and waiting and I'm so happy you posted. I know things have been rough but wanted to let you know we all really appreciate all of your effort to continue this story and continue it with the high-quality level of writing consistency. Loved the tension in this chapter it's good to see more of their interaction! :)
8/30/2019 c28 
9sonderful
A great chapter, well worth the wait. Id love to learn more about sioga and roisins Irish spells
9sonderfulA great chapter, well worth the wait. Id love to learn more about sioga and roisins Irish spells
8/1/2019 c27 Guest
Desperately waiting for an update.
Desperately waiting for an update.
7/17/2019 c24 Brooke
Please update, love your story
Please update, love your story
6/16/2019 c27 Foxy
I am still checking this story daily, hoping that you will continue. I understand that blocks can happen, but I wanted you to know that the story is absolutely amazing and your Snape is the most realisting Snape I have seen in fanfictions. I think that's why I cannot put it down. It almost feels like canon hehe. I am hoping you will get inspired again and come back. Best wishes!
I am still checking this story daily, hoping that you will continue. I understand that blocks can happen, but I wanted you to know that the story is absolutely amazing and your Snape is the most realisting Snape I have seen in fanfictions. I think that's why I cannot put it down. It almost feels like canon hehe. I am hoping you will get inspired again and come back. Best wishes!
6/10/2019 c27 Guest
Please try to update as soon as possible..
Please try to update as soon as possible..