for The Stirring3/25/2019 c1 affyfrances
Loving this. Just found it and devoured the whole story in a night! Excellent writing, and liking how you're not rushing the story, letting things develop naturally. Will be waiting eagerly for the next instalment !
Loving this. Just found it and devoured the whole story in a night! Excellent writing, and liking how you're not rushing the story, letting things develop naturally. Will be waiting eagerly for the next instalment !
3/25/2019 c27 Guest
Update.. this was so short.
Would love to see if the chemistry between the two has improved..
Update.. this was so short.
Would love to see if the chemistry between the two has improved..
3/23/2019 c27 MOTH
They pulled my hair and stole my comb, but that's all right 'till I go home. She is handsome, she is pretty, she is the belle of Belfast city, she is courting, one, two, three. Please won't you tell me who is she?
This was a wonderful chapter!
-Maiden of the Heavens
They pulled my hair and stole my comb, but that's all right 'till I go home. She is handsome, she is pretty, she is the belle of Belfast city, she is courting, one, two, three. Please won't you tell me who is she?
This was a wonderful chapter!
-Maiden of the Heavens
3/23/2019 c27 
9sonderful
This chapter was short and sweet, it’s great to read about how differing sides of Snape (Order vs Death Eater). But also get a bit more of the map and the cloak, and their objective impact to the story
9sonderfulThis chapter was short and sweet, it’s great to read about how differing sides of Snape (Order vs Death Eater). But also get a bit more of the map and the cloak, and their objective impact to the story
3/15/2019 c26 jazz
I'm so excited! I love this story and have been loyal to it for like a year! Take all the time you need in between chapters, I'll wait and I'm sure others will too. You're an excellent writer and you can't rush that kind of stuff :)
I'm so excited! I love this story and have been loyal to it for like a year! Take all the time you need in between chapters, I'll wait and I'm sure others will too. You're an excellent writer and you can't rush that kind of stuff :)
3/11/2019 c26 Foxy
Yes! I was afraid you have abandoned the story :)
Yes! I was afraid you have abandoned the story :)
3/10/2019 c26 Guest
OMG YOU UPDATED i was so scared that it was an abandoned story. I loved that chapter they get better and better. I wonder if he will explain to her what she found in the book I mean she knows nothing about him I feel like if he ever shared with her at least his full name she will become more comfortable with the situation. I’m looking forward to the next update :)
OMG YOU UPDATED i was so scared that it was an abandoned story. I loved that chapter they get better and better. I wonder if he will explain to her what she found in the book I mean she knows nothing about him I feel like if he ever shared with her at least his full name she will become more comfortable with the situation. I’m looking forward to the next update :)
3/9/2019 c26 15little.sloth.scribe
This chapter is so well written, I love how you write the characters. I am so happy that you updated, keep up the fantastic work, and post the next chapter when you can!
-MOTH
15little.sloth.scribeThis chapter is so well written, I love how you write the characters. I am so happy that you updated, keep up the fantastic work, and post the next chapter when you can!
-MOTH
3/9/2019 c26 Guest
I hope this doesn’t turn into a mess.
I hope this doesn’t turn into a mess.
3/9/2019 c26 9sonderful
This chapter came at the perfect time! I’m trying not to finish a book whose sequel doesn’t come out til next year (ugh), but even short this gives so much into the Lore of Sióga, horcruxes, the Golden Trio, Voldys plans, and the Order. The subtle foreshadowing from the previous chapters is insanely good. I love the inclusion of the map and cloak! And Hermione figuring out what Roisin is, cleverest witch of her age! It’s the little things in the chapters that are so good!
9sonderfulThis chapter came at the perfect time! I’m trying not to finish a book whose sequel doesn’t come out til next year (ugh), but even short this gives so much into the Lore of Sióga, horcruxes, the Golden Trio, Voldys plans, and the Order. The subtle foreshadowing from the previous chapters is insanely good. I love the inclusion of the map and cloak! And Hermione figuring out what Roisin is, cleverest witch of her age! It’s the little things in the chapters that are so good!
3/4/2019 c25 sonderful
One thing I love about this chapter is how we see how much influence and control Dumbledore has over this story and the original. He’s controlling Harry leading him towards his mission, and at the same time Dumbledore holds all the power over Snape. It’s incredible writing and really show cases the nuances in Dumbledores plans as well as gives more value and meaning to what Dnape went through as a double agent for Dumbledore. As for Roisin, as the reader there’s more fear now that Voldemort knows and there’s more that can happen. It’s great that I can’t guess the end, but even better that the writing and plot don’t suffer as the characters develop. Even the chapters where “nothing happens” are great in furthering tension between Roisin and her ‘affliciton’ as well as how terrifying it must have been to be a teenager, a muggleborn, and a girl in the presence of high stress and intimidation.
One thing I love about this chapter is how we see how much influence and control Dumbledore has over this story and the original. He’s controlling Harry leading him towards his mission, and at the same time Dumbledore holds all the power over Snape. It’s incredible writing and really show cases the nuances in Dumbledores plans as well as gives more value and meaning to what Dnape went through as a double agent for Dumbledore. As for Roisin, as the reader there’s more fear now that Voldemort knows and there’s more that can happen. It’s great that I can’t guess the end, but even better that the writing and plot don’t suffer as the characters develop. Even the chapters where “nothing happens” are great in furthering tension between Roisin and her ‘affliciton’ as well as how terrifying it must have been to be a teenager, a muggleborn, and a girl in the presence of high stress and intimidation.
3/3/2019 c25 Guest
please continue writing this story, iys a great story
please continue writing this story, iys a great story