3/9/2019 c26 9sonderful
This chapter came at the perfect time! I’m trying not to finish a book whose sequel doesn’t come out til next year (ugh), but even short this gives so much into the Lore of Sióga, horcruxes, the Golden Trio, Voldys plans, and the Order. The subtle foreshadowing from the previous chapters is insanely good. I love the inclusion of the map and cloak! And Hermione figuring out what Roisin is, cleverest witch of her age! It’s the little things in the chapters that are so good!
This chapter came at the perfect time! I’m trying not to finish a book whose sequel doesn’t come out til next year (ugh), but even short this gives so much into the Lore of Sióga, horcruxes, the Golden Trio, Voldys plans, and the Order. The subtle foreshadowing from the previous chapters is insanely good. I love the inclusion of the map and cloak! And Hermione figuring out what Roisin is, cleverest witch of her age! It’s the little things in the chapters that are so good!
3/4/2019 c25 sonderful
One thing I love about this chapter is how we see how much influence and control Dumbledore has over this story and the original. He’s controlling Harry leading him towards his mission, and at the same time Dumbledore holds all the power over Snape. It’s incredible writing and really show cases the nuances in Dumbledores plans as well as gives more value and meaning to what Dnape went through as a double agent for Dumbledore. As for Roisin, as the reader there’s more fear now that Voldemort knows and there’s more that can happen. It’s great that I can’t guess the end, but even better that the writing and plot don’t suffer as the characters develop. Even the chapters where “nothing happens” are great in furthering tension between Roisin and her ‘affliciton’ as well as how terrifying it must have been to be a teenager, a muggleborn, and a girl in the presence of high stress and intimidation.
One thing I love about this chapter is how we see how much influence and control Dumbledore has over this story and the original. He’s controlling Harry leading him towards his mission, and at the same time Dumbledore holds all the power over Snape. It’s incredible writing and really show cases the nuances in Dumbledores plans as well as gives more value and meaning to what Dnape went through as a double agent for Dumbledore. As for Roisin, as the reader there’s more fear now that Voldemort knows and there’s more that can happen. It’s great that I can’t guess the end, but even better that the writing and plot don’t suffer as the characters develop. Even the chapters where “nothing happens” are great in furthering tension between Roisin and her ‘affliciton’ as well as how terrifying it must have been to be a teenager, a muggleborn, and a girl in the presence of high stress and intimidation.
3/3/2019 c25 Guest
please continue writing this story, iys a great story
please continue writing this story, iys a great story
2/3/2019 c25 Guest
I just started reading this fic yesterday, and I love it. Definitely one of the best ones I've read. I like that you've kept Snape as his usual, snarky, pissy self. I hope you are able to update soon!
I also wanted to say I'm so sorry about the family member you lost. I don't know when exactly it happened, but based on your last update, I assume it was relatively recently. I lost my dad when I was 17, and it's just the worst. I hope you're doing all right.
I just started reading this fic yesterday, and I love it. Definitely one of the best ones I've read. I like that you've kept Snape as his usual, snarky, pissy self. I hope you are able to update soon!
I also wanted to say I'm so sorry about the family member you lost. I don't know when exactly it happened, but based on your last update, I assume it was relatively recently. I lost my dad when I was 17, and it's just the worst. I hope you're doing all right.
2/2/2019 c25 Guest
This is such a new concept and so many of us love it. Please do not abandon it.
This is such a new concept and so many of us love it. Please do not abandon it.
1/30/2019 c25 Guest
Update!
Update!
1/24/2019 c25 Guest
Update.
Update.
1/23/2019 c25 Guest
Update! Please.
Update! Please.
1/15/2019 c25 Guest
Update!
Update!
1/13/2019 c25 Peach
I love this story so very much! Your writing is fantastic, I just can't wait for you to update again whenever you are able 3
I love this story so very much! Your writing is fantastic, I just can't wait for you to update again whenever you are able 3
1/9/2019 c1 Guest
Please update
Please update
1/2/2019 c25 Guest
I hope you update soon.
I hope you update soon.
12/31/2018 c25 Guest
Please don't abandon the story.. it's going ahead beautifully.
Please don't abandon the story.. it's going ahead beautifully.
12/20/2018 c25 Guest
Update
Update
12/12/2018 c25 Gemma
This is such a fantastic fic! With the thousands upon thousands of harry potter stories out there, you'd think it wouldn't be so hard to find quality snape/oc romances that characterize him well, and have an interesting oc to boot. But unfortunately it's extremely hard! Really you should consider yourself among a very select few for producing such quality writing. Even though the "forced to get it on" plotline is nothing new, Roisin's situation is definitely a unique one, and it doesn't feel like the same old story at all.
Really really really awesome job! Waiting eagerly for another update 3
This is such a fantastic fic! With the thousands upon thousands of harry potter stories out there, you'd think it wouldn't be so hard to find quality snape/oc romances that characterize him well, and have an interesting oc to boot. But unfortunately it's extremely hard! Really you should consider yourself among a very select few for producing such quality writing. Even though the "forced to get it on" plotline is nothing new, Roisin's situation is definitely a unique one, and it doesn't feel like the same old story at all.
Really really really awesome job! Waiting eagerly for another update 3