for The Stirring12/5/2017 c16 Guest
Poor her
Poor her
12/5/2017 c16 
15little.sloth.scribe
I loved this, this did not feel like a filler chapter at all. I hope you update again soon!
-MOTH
15little.sloth.scribeI loved this, this did not feel like a filler chapter at all. I hope you update again soon!
-MOTH
12/5/2017 c16 sonderful
This is a really good chapter, I like that Róisín not all ooey gooey on Snape. But I can't help but imagine Eóghan speaking and looking like Larry Dean (Glasgow comedian). I like how the books are blended togethe, however I do think added drama would be if Umbridge was there (I assume this takes place around the 5th book). Overall really good chapter! Well worth the wait.
This is a really good chapter, I like that Róisín not all ooey gooey on Snape. But I can't help but imagine Eóghan speaking and looking like Larry Dean (Glasgow comedian). I like how the books are blended togethe, however I do think added drama would be if Umbridge was there (I assume this takes place around the 5th book). Overall really good chapter! Well worth the wait.
11/28/2017 c15 eri
yeah longest sex scene ever and most awkward though I get u going for realism halfway through I wanted to scream at both of them to stfu He was throwing me off with that verbal consent stuff quite honeslty. I do remember my first time was awkward but it was also the singular most exciting experience in my life, never to be repeated or recaptured in the same way and consent honestlywas implied by cues people give when they are in lust for each other. Is this theme of verbalizing every move u are permitted to make a generational thing?. Though I am sure being the fact he's her teacher doesn't help
yeah longest sex scene ever and most awkward though I get u going for realism halfway through I wanted to scream at both of them to stfu He was throwing me off with that verbal consent stuff quite honeslty. I do remember my first time was awkward but it was also the singular most exciting experience in my life, never to be repeated or recaptured in the same way and consent honestlywas implied by cues people give when they are in lust for each other. Is this theme of verbalizing every move u are permitted to make a generational thing?. Though I am sure being the fact he's her teacher doesn't help
11/18/2017 c14 sonderful
I'm getting such second embarrassment from Róisíns predicament! Great job on making me really feel the emotions and tension from the characters and situation!
I'm getting such second embarrassment from Róisíns predicament! Great job on making me really feel the emotions and tension from the characters and situation!
11/18/2017 c9 Guest
I'm supposed to be asleep but I can't stop reading. Róisin sounds like a Leanan sidhe!
I'm supposed to be asleep but I can't stop reading. Róisin sounds like a Leanan sidhe!
11/18/2017 c6 Guest
Uh oh. And gack
Uh oh. And gack
10/18/2017 c15 Guest
Please update soon i love your story
Please update soon i love your story
9/27/2017 c15 Guest
So fucking good update soon
So fucking good update soon
9/27/2017 c15 Charlotte
Yes please. I hope it gets more intimate and steamy between them. Snape has always struck me as being like a freak in bed.
Please continue! I really love this story, your writing and how you portray Snape! Hopefully Your Oc will become more confident with him and intercourse lol
Yes please. I hope it gets more intimate and steamy between them. Snape has always struck me as being like a freak in bed.
Please continue! I really love this story, your writing and how you portray Snape! Hopefully Your Oc will become more confident with him and intercourse lol
9/27/2017 c1 Guest
I liked how honest and real this chapter was. You capture Snape so well. Your writing is so beautiful. I really connect with Roisin and how delicate and vulernable she is. I love your writing. Please update when you can! I'm addicted!
I liked how honest and real this chapter was. You capture Snape so well. Your writing is so beautiful. I really connect with Roisin and how delicate and vulernable she is. I love your writing. Please update when you can! I'm addicted!
9/27/2017 c15 Guest
This is really good , and you capture snape's personality so well , I look forward to more
This is really good , and you capture snape's personality so well , I look forward to more
9/26/2017 c15 little.sloth.scribe
I really liked this chapter, it was the perfect for an awkward first sexual experience, I wasn't expecting anything steamy since this was Roisin's first time and it was with her Potions Professor of all people! But you have also written Snape's coldhearted persona perfectly. Please update when you can!
-MOTH
I really liked this chapter, it was the perfect for an awkward first sexual experience, I wasn't expecting anything steamy since this was Roisin's first time and it was with her Potions Professor of all people! But you have also written Snape's coldhearted persona perfectly. Please update when you can!
-MOTH