for The Stirring6/5/2017 c3 
1YellowAsphodel
Interesting story idea! And with the OCs it's a whole new side to Hogwarts!
1YellowAsphodelInteresting story idea! And with the OCs it's a whole new side to Hogwarts!
5/25/2017 c12 outtakes03
IM ABSOLUTELY LOVING IT SO FAR! THE AWKWARDNESS SHE HAS IS SO RELATABLE AND FUNNY GYYAHAHAHAHA! KEEP IT UP!
IM ABSOLUTELY LOVING IT SO FAR! THE AWKWARDNESS SHE HAS IS SO RELATABLE AND FUNNY GYYAHAHAHAHA! KEEP IT UP!
5/25/2017 c12 15little.sloth.scribe
I would like to know what he said, also this was a very good chapter, it certainly pushed Rosin and Severus' situation forward. Update when you can :)
-MOTH
15little.sloth.scribeI would like to know what he said, also this was a very good chapter, it certainly pushed Rosin and Severus' situation forward. Update when you can :)
-MOTH
5/5/2017 c11 1pointy-ears98
I'm really sorry that I'm only commenting on this chapter : I read your story from chapter 1 to 11 until it was 5am because OH MY GOD.
THANK YOU. This is one of the few fanfictions that I would describe as : well-written, interesting, refreshing, with a story never seen before, a funny main character [not another Mary-Sue]. I laughed, I felt so guilty when Anna was hurt because of the spell etc... it felt like I was next to her the whole time. As a reader I really thought that this could have been in a movie, or a book.
Everything is so well written that I didn't felt that it was written by an "amateur" and you can feel that at the first chapter : it's so satisfying to read your work. And I was really surprised when you said it was your first fanfiction because it really doesn't look like it at all.
I'm foreigner (France) and I've been reading fanfictions for quite a time, and I've learn new words by reading your story but everything was clear at the same time. I understood everything because you explain some of the Irish words I didn't knew before.
I hope everything makes sense... . please keep updating really often!
1pointy-ears98I'm really sorry that I'm only commenting on this chapter : I read your story from chapter 1 to 11 until it was 5am because OH MY GOD.
THANK YOU. This is one of the few fanfictions that I would describe as : well-written, interesting, refreshing, with a story never seen before, a funny main character [not another Mary-Sue]. I laughed, I felt so guilty when Anna was hurt because of the spell etc... it felt like I was next to her the whole time. As a reader I really thought that this could have been in a movie, or a book.
Everything is so well written that I didn't felt that it was written by an "amateur" and you can feel that at the first chapter : it's so satisfying to read your work. And I was really surprised when you said it was your first fanfiction because it really doesn't look like it at all.
I'm foreigner (France) and I've been reading fanfictions for quite a time, and I've learn new words by reading your story but everything was clear at the same time. I understood everything because you explain some of the Irish words I didn't knew before.
I hope everything makes sense... . please keep updating really often!
4/16/2017 c11 Guest
I've been searching for a good snape/oc fanfic and find your story...and i love it...pls update soon
I've been searching for a good snape/oc fanfic and find your story...and i love it...pls update soon
4/13/2017 c11 Guest
great job as usual- I appreciate how your attention to detail
great job as usual- I appreciate how your attention to detail
4/13/2017 c11 15little.sloth.scribe
A short chapter is better than nothing at all, update with a longer one when you are able too. Keep up the great work!
-MOTH
15little.sloth.scribeA short chapter is better than nothing at all, update with a longer one when you are able too. Keep up the great work!
-MOTH
4/3/2017 c10 Guest
She realizing Snape is human is a bit funny
She realizing Snape is human is a bit funny
4/3/2017 c10 Eli
You just made my day, when i saw it had an update i got so excited and it did not disapoint this chapter was great and fun to read cant wait for the others. I'm glad you haven't given up on the story and i can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
You just made my day, when i saw it had an update i got so excited and it did not disapoint this chapter was great and fun to read cant wait for the others. I'm glad you haven't given up on the story and i can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
4/3/2017 c10 TessAbess
Your portrayal of the characters is absolutely perfect! This story is so well written.
Your portrayal of the characters is absolutely perfect! This story is so well written.
4/2/2017 c10 little.sloth.scribe
I love this story so much, you write Severus Snape perfectly! :)
-MOTH
I love this story so much, you write Severus Snape perfectly! :)
-MOTH
4/2/2017 c1 Mps
This is such a good fanfic, I really hope you update soon beacause I'm dying to know what happens!
This is such a good fanfic, I really hope you update soon beacause I'm dying to know what happens!
3/29/2017 c9 Eli
I know its been a while since you uploaded this fic and i don't know if you abondoned it but if not please update as soon as you can it's killing me everytime i open this tab on my phone but there is no update. Keep up the great work
I know its been a while since you uploaded this fic and i don't know if you abondoned it but if not please update as soon as you can it's killing me everytime i open this tab on my phone but there is no update. Keep up the great work