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6/11/2018 c7 79YeagerMeister31
Well that was interesting some Minato/Shikadai bonding yay
6/11/2018 c6 YeagerMeister31
Well this was interesting I wonder why Shikadai doesn't like Minato though, wonder what will happen to Minato he's been separated from everyone
6/11/2018 c5 YeagerMeister31
Well this was interesting so does this mean the Akatsuki are still around still the people who came for Kukuo died so unless the Akatsuki are using riffraff then it must be someone else
6/11/2018 c4 YeagerMeister31
Well that was interesting still that's pathetic that Sasgay outlasted Naruto Sasuke should be unconscious or in a coma but no u make the Hokage seem weak when he could kick Sasgay's ass anyway of the week, anywayz whatever nice chapter Sarada top of the class huh, still a male medical ninja huh I don't see Minato as that though
6/10/2018 c3 YeagerMeister31
Well that was amusing but no Naruto at all NOOOOOOOOO
6/9/2018 c2 YeagerMeister31
Well that was amusing so the Akatsuki are still about huh never expected Hidan to be taken out that easy but whatever
6/8/2018 c1 YeagerMeister31
Well this first chapter was weird
3/26/2018 c52 Srw
Thank you for the two stories.
8/16/2017 c52 Guest
I'm really bad at reviews but wow this story and team obito are phenomenal I can not express how great I feel they are the way you write the way you tell story it was great
6/26/2017 c1 FanFan299
This si pretty bad u should alll red mr grimjaws sotries he has the best fics on thebsite!ngi
3/27/2017 c52 30720
Good stuff. Wasn't very pleased with the grammar but you've improved over the time, if only for a bit. Even so, you have improved so much over the mere span of one year and that's rather impressive. Sure, the fights were too rushed, dialogues felt plain and hard to digest at times but you managed to pull through every chapter. Truth to be told, your story kept me awake for three nights straight so if I were to say something about it, I guess it's a job well done. Also, one piece of advice if you're going to write another story again. Put more emphasis on details, go wild with the detailing of your world, feel as if you're actually painting a canvas and with every brush, your characters take shape whereas your world starts breathing and lives. Commas are very important, too. You only started using them correctly towards the end of the second story and it has disappointed me greatly. The way the characters shared dialogues between each-other was very generic, as you almost never managed to display more emotion coming from them due to the lack of detail surrounding the scene. With that being said, I look forward to reading one of your stories again, in the future. Take care!
3/12/2017 c52 Shadow-Shinobi666
This was an amazing story, I'm sad to see it end.
3/11/2017 c52 1MixedAndMatched
Nooooooo! I don't want to see it end. I don't think I could ever get tired of this story. You are really amazing and I will definitely going to read both team obito and this story over and over again. it's really been a blast. I hope you do more Narusaku stories like this.
3/10/2017 c51 MixedAndMatched
Great work. looking forward to see how this turns out
3/10/2017 c51 Shadow-Shinobi666
Great chapter
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