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for Lyrical Nanoha INNONCENT: Trails of Lyrical-Sora no Tsubasa

1/23/2017 c1 1Natoko Mizuki
Nice fic! Kinda miss the referential humor though...
1/23/2017 c1 1The Otaku Critic
Nice! The more subtle comedy makes me feel more "normal" whenever I read this, as opposed to the random humor's over-the-top and energetic style. Chifuyu is likable enough, but Hikaru seems a bit... destructive, per say...
Overall, a nice change of pace.

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