
2/17/2012 c2 Guest
Way too ugly
Way too ugly
8/3/2003 c2 Shadow Dragon25
ya need to update on this one soon and i know u hav other stories but maybe u should hav a vote as to wich stories u should continue until u hav more time and wich ones u should leave off until later
ther's what i think so hav @ it
ya need to update on this one soon and i know u hav other stories but maybe u should hav a vote as to wich stories u should continue until u hav more time and wich ones u should leave off until later
ther's what i think so hav @ it
6/1/2003 c2 Guest
this is very good! please continue very soon!
this is very good! please continue very soon!
3/28/2003 c2
4frosty
the pairing are a little differnt than most fics,but it makes this fic unique. can't wait for the next chapter!

the pairing are a little differnt than most fics,but it makes this fic unique. can't wait for the next chapter!
3/23/2003 c2
16Damia - Queen of the Gypsi's
Good start, but get some more chapters out. right now it seems like you're solid on the pairings and that you know how everything is going to turn out. You need to put more information in the chaps though. Write more soon.
- Damia -

Good start, but get some more chapters out. right now it seems like you're solid on the pairings and that you know how everything is going to turn out. You need to put more information in the chaps though. Write more soon.
- Damia -
3/19/2003 c1 Tatiana
i thought this was a Gundam Wing/Sailor Moon crossover.you got Usagi and Minako right but who are Anilea and Leanette I know that they are not even Sailor Scouts and why did you put Relena there because I that this was Gundam and Sailor Moon,not these unknow characters and puting Relena there was not so good.If you put all five sailor scouts like Sailor Moon who is Usagi,Sailor mercury who is amy,Sailor Mars who is Raye,Sailor Jupiter who is Lita,and Sailor Venus who is Minako it would be much better.Japanesse names:Uagi,Ami,Rei,Makoto,and Minako
i thought this was a Gundam Wing/Sailor Moon crossover.you got Usagi and Minako right but who are Anilea and Leanette I know that they are not even Sailor Scouts and why did you put Relena there because I that this was Gundam and Sailor Moon,not these unknow characters and puting Relena there was not so good.If you put all five sailor scouts like Sailor Moon who is Usagi,Sailor mercury who is amy,Sailor Mars who is Raye,Sailor Jupiter who is Lita,and Sailor Venus who is Minako it would be much better.Japanesse names:Uagi,Ami,Rei,Makoto,and Minako
2/13/2003 c1
44LeaD
WOO HOO! I hope me and D-chan got dorms cuz then there will be stuff REALLY falling off the walls and shelves! ^_^. I'm hoping you'll write more.. JA!

WOO HOO! I hope me and D-chan got dorms cuz then there will be stuff REALLY falling off the walls and shelves! ^_^. I'm hoping you'll write more.. JA!
2/13/2003 c1 foxy
this is really good!
and i vote for a minako/quatre pairing!
this is really good!
and i vote for a minako/quatre pairing!
2/12/2003 c1 Burning Shaedows
Hmm... I like Shadow, her name, Anelia, thats very original, (oh-how exactly is it supposed to be pronounced?). Just one thing. try not to make her too much like Hiiro. If all the character have male/female counterparts, there will be no conflict in between them and that wouldn't be all that exciting. I mean really, what couple doesn't have complications? Cool characters. oh, also, i know, I criticize and I'm sorry, but as long it's constructive, I don't take nothin' back. ja-
Shaedows
Hmm... I like Shadow, her name, Anelia, thats very original, (oh-how exactly is it supposed to be pronounced?). Just one thing. try not to make her too much like Hiiro. If all the character have male/female counterparts, there will be no conflict in between them and that wouldn't be all that exciting. I mean really, what couple doesn't have complications? Cool characters. oh, also, i know, I criticize and I'm sorry, but as long it's constructive, I don't take nothin' back. ja-
Shaedows