for A Arc Reborn10/31/2017 c3 Dethcat
I kind of expected Jaune to be as strong as an Adeptus Astartes from Warhammer with his amour.
I kind of expected Jaune to be as strong as an Adeptus Astartes from Warhammer with his amour.
5/6/2017 c3 Austin
Hey man nice chapter but question is Jaune armor is based on the warden from for honor.
Hey can you try of jaune yelling out deus vult as he charges at a grim.
Hey can you try a for honor rwby xover where jaune is trained by the knights of the iron legion, Vikings of the warborn,and the samurai of the dawn empire. I do wonder what jaune will look like if he wore Viking armor, samurai armor, or a combination of both knight,samurai and Viking.
If you don't like this idea then I understand. I was only suggesting ideas. Good luck on the next chapter
Hey man nice chapter but question is Jaune armor is based on the warden from for honor.
Hey can you try of jaune yelling out deus vult as he charges at a grim.
Hey can you try a for honor rwby xover where jaune is trained by the knights of the iron legion, Vikings of the warborn,and the samurai of the dawn empire. I do wonder what jaune will look like if he wore Viking armor, samurai armor, or a combination of both knight,samurai and Viking.
If you don't like this idea then I understand. I was only suggesting ideas. Good luck on the next chapter
3/26/2017 c3 Leyla
I see what you did there...
Oh, when you describe Juaune shooting you write ninth eleventh, and when you wrote Nora riding the Ursa you describe her as gingerly. I don't think it means what you think it means... Just so you know.
I laughed when "mistakes where made"! I made a funny!
This was a very action packed chapter, but you managed to write it so it was easy to follow! Great job! That's really hard to do! Reading this makes me want to watch the fight scene all over again!
I see what you did there...
Oh, when you describe Juaune shooting you write ninth eleventh, and when you wrote Nora riding the Ursa you describe her as gingerly. I don't think it means what you think it means... Just so you know.
I laughed when "mistakes where made"! I made a funny!
This was a very action packed chapter, but you managed to write it so it was easy to follow! Great job! That's really hard to do! Reading this makes me want to watch the fight scene all over again!
3/26/2017 c1 TiredofFuta
I would read more, but this is probably going to end up with Futa in it...again. So I'm out.
I would read more, but this is probably going to end up with Futa in it...again. So I'm out.
3/26/2017 c3 
2Xerzo LotCN
so played out similar to canon with changes because skilled jaune but he still kinda didnt do as well as i hoped but he did better doesnt he still have the shield why didnt he use it why just the sword? and and heavy armor jaune cant be tossed around so pyrrha did and interesting little riding bit ... still interesting things happened like hud power helmet and his mechashift sword which was sweet till it malfunctioned maybe ruby can help him with that being a weapon genius and his revolver which 7 chambers and 3 around per pretty odd but must be some pretty huge rounds if only 3 fit per chamber also how would it work anyway? and some kinda strength limiter and power release system ... and teams are made and interesting stuff after happens all in all interesting i feel you could deviated a bit more but its ok
2Xerzo LotCNso played out similar to canon with changes because skilled jaune but he still kinda didnt do as well as i hoped but he did better doesnt he still have the shield why didnt he use it why just the sword? and and heavy armor jaune cant be tossed around so pyrrha did and interesting little riding bit ... still interesting things happened like hud power helmet and his mechashift sword which was sweet till it malfunctioned maybe ruby can help him with that being a weapon genius and his revolver which 7 chambers and 3 around per pretty odd but must be some pretty huge rounds if only 3 fit per chamber also how would it work anyway? and some kinda strength limiter and power release system ... and teams are made and interesting stuff after happens all in all interesting i feel you could deviated a bit more but its ok
3/23/2017 c2 Rebmul
is this gona be a glynda pairing or is it gona be a mentor type thing I'm hoping for a pairing
is this gona be a glynda pairing or is it gona be a mentor type thing I'm hoping for a pairing