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7/16 c13 lydie
I started reading this because it said that this was a harry/daphne story.. when it's that going to happen? because it looked more like a fleur/harry or now a stacy/harry and it is already like half the story
5/7 c6 Jhn1
You may have already addressed this but problems
1) Magna Carta includes Habeas Corpus, or the right of a trial
2) Parliament outlawed the death penalty to protect Communist sympathisers in the hopes that when the Soviet Union won those winners might go easier on them. Slave overseers.
3) Geneva Conventions,... noncombatants like the Weasley family. England's Parliament and the Crown also signed off on the Soviet's protocol 1, or terrorist protection addendum..
There would certainly be some prior treaties that could be argued (go back to habeas corpus) and all the above is ignored. Some bureaucrat would have brought it up to get somebody else to sign off making that somebody else responsible. Your story can still go there, taking a cab from 10 Dowling to 1600 Pennsylvania without crossing the Atlantic or teleportiing is also disengenous. I hope you addressed this before the end
Keep writing
Jhn1
4/11 c1 Ltbutterfly287
This premise is actually stupid. The actual government works in tandem with the ministry and wouldn’t directly interfere but very well could request the ICW to intervene. Also the idea that after both wars were finished that the death eaters were running around killing muggles is stupid. The fanatics were locked up and the ones who never really cared but were to deep to back out just went ok with their lives.
3/10 c25 Guest
Enh, this story had some issues with a very contrived ending, excessive OC’s, and a lack of realistic character reactions.
3/10 c7 Guest
I don’t understand the targeting of the Weasley family. It doesn’t fit the story.
12/8/2021 c1 mojones2119
Yes! Great startso glad you are avoiding the nightmares known as The EpilogueCC. Thanks.
11/6/2021 c25 1Jimbocous
Thanks for a great read! Very nicely done, and a real page turner. Most unusual ideas.
10/25/2021 c11 miffedniffler
So the "muggles" have the plot armour in this story then?
10/25/2021 c9 GuyGamer
Barnes and Middleton are heroes
6/27/2021 c9 Guest
Well, as far as I’m concerned Barns and Middle are just two parts of a much bigger problem… I always enjoy the double standard, especially when it comes to the hypocrisy of fighting “terrorists” by sending out groups to “take care of and neutralise threats” by way of cold-blooded murder, mayhem and general collateral destruction.
6/25/2021 c25 G F
Huh. The whole time I thought Fleur would end up as the second wife. It just felt like that was where it was going.
And no, I don't like the Dramione ending, even if she 'changed'.
6/24/2021 c23 G F
It was a MOOT point.
6/24/2021 c20 GF
? If Cho apparate to 'the muggle side, and then entered the Leaky cauldron' (para), then she DID NOT apparate to Diagon Alley. There IS a difference. And most fics do not allow for apparition into and out of the Alley. The Leaky floo helps traffic control.
6/24/2021 c19 G F
Nope. Not ropes. Wrong spell. Again.
6/26/2021 c2 sorcerersupreme14
Really? Outright murder of innocents based on family history and even at times no reason except superficial association? The House of Windsor, the British Royal Family and Lords of Britain are responsible for far more deaths and destruction than the all the dark lords in british magical history put together. Genocide commited against natives in the Americas, the Pacific and Africa. The Jallianwalla Bagh Massacre, the Bengal Famine and looting and oppression committed by british officials in India. If India were to demand reparations for the crimes against humanity committed by UK in India alone, The entire british GDP in the last 2 millenia wouldnt be enough. So perhaps they should clean their own house first. I hope to see ICW intervention and British muggle nobles get a taste of their own medicine. After all British Royals and Nobles have done so much shit historically that they would make Voldemort look pale in comparision. But i suppose all this colonial history and Dark side of English nobility is taught iin schools. Yet they expect the third world countries to deal with far more complex human rights issues as if they have any moral high ground at al.
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