for The Swallow and the Dragon6/20/2022 c8 Sharkboybeast
How did whats his name keep Harry chained. I would like to think that because he is from a different world, his magic doesn't follow the same rules. Also I thought Harry had better senses how did he not smell the guy sneaking up on him.
How did whats his name keep Harry chained. I would like to think that because he is from a different world, his magic doesn't follow the same rules. Also I thought Harry had better senses how did he not smell the guy sneaking up on him.
6/16/2022 c30 Guest
Writing is good but lack of originality and cringeworthy interactions
Writing is good but lack of originality and cringeworthy interactions
6/7/2022 c30 
57EdTheBeast
An extremely great Harry Potter Witcher Crossover. A MUST READ that is enjoyable with almost no grammar errors. The ones I remember were like and/an and on/one.
57EdTheBeastAn extremely great Harry Potter Witcher Crossover. A MUST READ that is enjoyable with almost no grammar errors. The ones I remember were like and/an and on/one.
6/4/2022 c3 MartinDeShade
The part that was done in Harry Potter's world was really badly done. I know you are a better writer than that. His leaving should have happened when everybody else was old and grey. That would have at least made sense. His bloody flip flop feelings for people were also quite bad. First, fuck my friends, to hey I missed you.
The part that was done in Harry Potter's world was really badly done. I know you are a better writer than that. His leaving should have happened when everybody else was old and grey. That would have at least made sense. His bloody flip flop feelings for people were also quite bad. First, fuck my friends, to hey I missed you.
6/2/2022 c1 Bostonette
Thank goodness this trash is complete. A fucking moronic Harry, too damn weak to stand behind his decisions or up to anyone who challenges him. At the very least there won’t be updates since it’s done, since deleting this is too much to ask for.
Thank goodness this trash is complete. A fucking moronic Harry, too damn weak to stand behind his decisions or up to anyone who challenges him. At the very least there won’t be updates since it’s done, since deleting this is too much to ask for.
4/10/2022 c30 DarkAres12
damn this fanfic did give a lot of cringe and be a little edgy besides the lousy job that Harry was a fucking Gary stu in every sense of the word but it was still one of the fanfics with the best writing and narrative that I have found
damn this fanfic did give a lot of cringe and be a little edgy besides the lousy job that Harry was a fucking Gary stu in every sense of the word but it was still one of the fanfics with the best writing and narrative that I have found
4/9/2022 c10 WeisseHex
Ha! I just knew that Harry took precautions with this 'sorcerer'! Smart, having a few 'spy ravens'!
Ha! I just knew that Harry took precautions with this 'sorcerer'! Smart, having a few 'spy ravens'!
4/9/2022 c23 greenstreak12
ya know... this is the point that I realized that harry is a yonder. so ya
ya know... this is the point that I realized that harry is a yonder. so ya