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8/30/2019 c6 santarelserpico
... Woa! A fucking story. I can't wait to read the rest. I bow my head to the writer
8/30/2019 c6 bookdragonslayer
I love Hagoromo’s a parenting thing it’s perfect loved the chapter.
9/4/2018 c3 RandomSomething
Alright, pretty sure her father is Tobirama, she got the matching hair, eyes, and elemental that could also just be her clan so not 100% sure. But tobirama technically did die during a peace treaty meeting within the Land of Lightning (though he wouldn't die until back in Fire Country). The kinkaku force chased him and his team all the way back to fire country where he'd give his life to save those of his team. Tobirama, you ARE the father! #morey

I honestly love this. Your writing style allows for the action to flow smoothly. Along with the Kumo nin simply attacking, no words spoken.

I hope Hiromi can make it to Konoha and warn them of the impending attack. Uzushio has probably been hit already no?
9/4/2018 c1 RandomSomething
Well, I must say that this was brillant! I too have similar views on Uzushiogakure and the Uzumaki. And I love worldbuilding so I'm looking forward to this. I like how you decided to take liberties with Uzushio. Adding more clans and lore into the village will definitely make an impression on the canon storyline.

At some point in the middle of the chapter I did get a bit confused. I think with the large paragraphing you have, it made the writing feel "chunky" or "choppy" with giant word mountains of paragraphs. But other than the formatting this was wonderful. I didn't see too many, if any grammatical errors at all which is something almost every fanfic writer seems to struggle with! So good job! :D

It would seem the fanfic is going to be about the daughter, Hiromi? And we don't yet know who her father is besides this "him" they've spoken of. Though you did through a small hint of him possibly being an Uchiha. I'm liking this so far, and hope to see more
9/3/2018 c5 Guest
So much death
9/3/2018 c3 Guest
This is just...ow
9/3/2018 c2 Guest
Again Blown away by the action
9/3/2018 c1 Guest
5/16/2017 c1 4Arcane Charmcaster
so is the story abandoned or on hiatus? please respond i absolutely love the direction this story was taking.
3/10/2017 c3 3OTrizy
Wow this is so good the chapters are long and the characters are very very interesting good job
3/7/2017 c3 Silmr3
Man, I'm hoping more uzo ninja survive. They are just too awesome to all die. I always wanted to see more survivors and the use of uzumaki techniques in the anime but it never got into it, things stayed pretty vague.
3/3/2017 c2 Morrigan's lover
Konoha betray uzu? or they are only very incompetent?
2/26/2017 c2 7Lily Noir
This, this is damn awesome. I love how tough you made the Uzumaki. Good work.
2/3/2017 c2 Silmr3
Epic. that is the only word I have to describe this story. Just two chapters have convinced me of its epicenes
2/1/2017 c2 Will
I'm actually surprised that your back and updating, but will you be updating dawn of balance? It's been one of my favorite fire emblem stories for a long time
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